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Old 01-23-2008, 06:14 PM   #1
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Hello! I love to write and also I love to read other people's writing! If you like writing, then please post! I would like to see poems and short stories. Please note that the "short" in short stories actually means something. I'm not going to limit your spae, but if it's toooo long, I'm not going to read it.

Please do not think that I am copying ganzygirl101. If any of you have ever heard the expression, "Imitation is the sinceresy form of flattery," please take heed to these words.

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This should probably be under Member Contests or Food, shouldn't it, because I'm giving away PSF's? Well, if mods see this thread please move it.
PSF's-

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Old 01-23-2008, 06:17 PM   #2
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Bessie looked up at the huge ship before her, its big black hull was just as intimidating as in her dreams, well nightmares actually.
Bessie
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Old 01-23-2008, 06:28 PM   #3
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is there a theme or can we do wht ever cause i'm going to post a ghost story tell me if it's ok

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Long ago in Mexico there was a little boy named ponderes he lived with his mother on top of a graveyard! one night there was a big storm and ponderes was in his room his mom could not get in it would seem as the door was locked and he was screaming she went to get her hammer to brake the door when she saw the dead relatives sitting on the couch! when the storm was over she went into his room and saw he was covered in blood she took him to the hospital and it was the blood of a soldier that had died 30 ears ago and a week later the boy died of a unexplained death!

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Old 01-23-2008, 06:29 PM   #4
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Bessie looked up at the huge ship before her, its big black hull was just as intimidating as in her dreams, well nightmares actually.
Bessie and her five brothers and sisters were waiting their turn to board the great Titanic. Bessie felt as though she was going to be swallowed up in the crowds of excited passengers huddled on the Ireland dock. Bessie sighed, shhe'd warned her family of her dreams but her parents and siblings had only pushed her worries aside. they attempted to reassure her by saying that the Titantic was unsinkable. but after Bessie's hoorrible dreams she didn't know what to believe.
Later after the ship had left the Irish port she and her sister Margot enjoyed a game of checkers despite the cold on the promonade deck. she had forgoten of her dreams in only the fifth night out to sea. but that night while Bessie lay in her berth which she shared with Margot it returned in full force. there it was the intimidating big black hull again it was rushing at full speed to where Bessie stood on an ice berg. the ship managed to turn but it scraped along the edge of the ice berg sending Bessie shaking from the force. Then the huge ship seemed to explode. People screamed as their bodies hit the freezing water.
Bessie woke with a start trembling. Her watch read 11:30 pm. Right at that moment there was a terrible lurch as though the Titanic had rolled over a thousand marbles. On istinct Bessie arouse the rest of her family immediately and led them to the deck against their will. bessie and her family were the first people in those tiny life boats in the icy black sea.
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Old 01-23-2008, 06:31 PM   #5
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if i win i would like the seal psf and my ww username is jelly523
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Old 01-23-2008, 06:33 PM   #6
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sry thats not it almost over:

Her father and sixteen year old brother had to stay aboard. Bessie watched the terrors from the lifeboat. the screams and panic in the air.
Her father and brother never did survive. Bessie heard the news on the cold deck of the Carpathia the rescuing ship. She was devasted because she knew that only she knew the terrors that awaited everyone aboard the Titantic. but she didn't do a thing about it. She could have saved 1,300 lives but failed. and for the rest of her life Bessie lived with that awful sense of guilt and desperation.

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Old 01-23-2008, 06:35 PM   #7
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once i was going to be picked up by my friend at the the corner.I waited and waited but she never turned up.It started to pour rain.I was freezing.This couple came up to me with a knifes in there hands.Wwhat r u doing.They smiled strangly.I knock the knife out f the girls hand and skraped the mans face.I started to run untill i got home.The next day when my mom was driving me home i say the couple again with the mans scar on his face staring at me.With a sign saying I will get u back.With a P.S. marking saying i am watching u.And every date each year i always see his face staring at me.


this is not real
Old 01-23-2008, 06:36 PM   #8
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View Post Originally Posted by izz10995
Bessie looked up at the huge ship before her, its big black hull was just as intimidating as in her dreams, well nightmares actually.
Bessie
Great beginning, can you add more?

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View Post Originally Posted by jelly523
is there a theme or can we do wht ever cause i'm going to post a ghost story tell me if it's ok

IT"S FINE! and thhere isn't a theme

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Long ago in Mexico there was a little boy named ponderes he lived with his mother on top of a graveyard! one night there was a big storm and ponderes was in his room his mom could not get in it would seem as the door was locked and he was screaming she went to get her hammer to brake the door when she saw the dead relatives sitting on the couch! when the storm was over she went into his room and saw he was covered in blood she took him to the hospital and it was the blood of a soldier that had died 30 ears ago and a week later the boy died of a unexplained death!
Scary... very scarry...

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Old 01-23-2008, 06:37 PM   #9
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View Post Originally Posted by houndzila
once i was going to be picked up by my friend at the the corner.I waited and waited but she never turned up.It started to pour rain.I was freezing.This couple came up to me with a knifes in there hands.What r u doingi ask they didt answer.They smiled strangly.I knock the knife out f the girls hand and skraped the mans face.I started to run until i got home.The next day when my mom was driving me home i saw the couple again with the mans scar on his face staring at me.With a sign saying I will get u back.With a P.S. marking saying i am watching u.And every date each year i always see his face staring at me.


this is not real
tell me if i won
Old 01-23-2008, 06:48 PM   #10
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View Post Originally Posted by izz10995
Bessie looked up at the huge ship before her, its big black hull was just as intimidating as in her dreams, well nightmares actually.
Bessie and her five brothers and sisters were waiting their turn to board the great Titanic. Bessie felt as though she was going to be swallowed up in the crowds of excited passengers huddled on the Ireland dock. Bessie sighed, shhe'd warned her family of her dreams but her parents and siblings had only pushed her worries aside. they attempted to reassure her by saying that the Titantic was unsinkable. but after Bessie's hoorrible dreams she didn't know what to believe.
Later after the ship had left the Irish port she and her sister Margot enjoyed a game of checkers despite the cold on the promonade deck. she had forgoten of her dreams in only the fifth night out to sea. but that night while Bessie lay in her berth which she shared with Margot it returned in full force. there it was the intimidating big black hull again it was rushing at full speed to where Bessie stood on an ice berg. the ship managed to turn but it scraped along the edge of the ice berg sending Bessie shaking from the force. Then the huge ship seemed to explode. People screamed as their bodies hit the freezing water.
Bessie woke with a start trembling. Her watch read 11:30 pm. Right at that moment there was a terrible lurch as though the Titanic had rolled over a thousand marbles. On istinct Bessie arouse the rest of her family immediately and led them to the deck against their will. bessie and her family were the first people in those tiny life boats in the icy black sea.
This was the best piece of writing I've read n a long time. I love historical fiction, and this is fabulus.

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View Post Originally Posted by houndzila
once i was going to be picked up by my friend at the the corner.I waited and waited but she never turned up.It started to pour rain.I was freezing.This couple came up to me with a knifes in there hands.Wwhat r u doing.They smiled strangly.I knock the knife out f the girls hand and skraped the mans face.I started to run untill i got home.The next day when my mom was driving me home i say the couple again with the mans scar on his face staring at me.With a sign saying I will get u back.With a P.S. marking saying i am watching u.And every date each year i always see his face staring at me.


this is not real
That's scary too... Boy the people haVE THIS THING for scray

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