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Old 04-12-2008, 10:05 PM   #1
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ATTENTION MEMBERS.
This is the ultimate contest for writers
[Closes April 22nd]

RULES:
  • MUST be original
  • Can be on ANY subject
  • Must be either a poem, story, or song
  • Must be appropriate [considering we have little kids on this site]
FORM:
WI Username:
WW Username:
What Inspired You?:


PRIZES:
1st Place-3 PSF's
2nd Place-2 PSF's
3rd Place-1 PSF

PRIZES TO CHOOSE FROM:
Basset Hound
Black Cat
Bulldog
Cheeky Monkey
Cow
Duck
Frog
Gold & White Cat
Googles
Hippo
Horse
Kangaroo
Koala
Love Frog
Panda
Penguin
Pig
Polar Bear
Raccoon
Reindeer
Turtle


Get Writing!


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Old 04-12-2008, 10:41 PM   #2
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here is a poem i didnt write it but i did change lines , words, and sentences does that still count as our own?? well here it is anyways

Why am I condemned
To this prison?
Is there a reason to my suffering?
Did I commit a sin?
Why am I forgotten
By the people who once loved?
Did I do something bad?
Did I do something wrong?
Every time someone comes along
They walk right on by
Without a glance
Or a look of love
I must be too ugly,
Too old, too dispirited
I wag my tail
Sparkle my eyes
But all of it in vain
For the time soon will come
When I’ll be taken away
Not by a loving family
But by the men of hate
How I long to see the sun
To feel grass beneath my paws
To live, to jump, to run
But most of all be loved
I dream of flowered fields
Of sparkling, shining lakes
Of Frisbees cutting the wind
I just want to play
I see him coming now
That man in clothes of white
I follow now behind him
My fighting will has died
I’ll never again see the sun
Never feel the morning grass
Never catch a Frisbee
In its flitting path
For now I leave this world
Of selfishness and greed
And fly to my Creator
The One who cares for me.

P.S its about animal cruelty / abuse
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Old 04-12-2008, 10:46 PM   #3
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The theme of WW's bday- insparation

Mary Jane is a Lil' Kinz Pig that attends the Achievement Academy regularly. She gets mostly A's and her parents are very proud! One day when she was on her way to school her best friend Leah the Tiger told her that they didn't have school. She thought "How odd." So she went to check it out for herself.

When she finally got to the school, she read a sign on the door that said "No school, please report to City Hall." She was startled to see the sign and decided to take a chance and go to City Hall. She finally reached City Hall and the streets looked deserted. She knew that something was up. She looked around the building to see if anyone was hiding, but found no one. Once again, she found another note on the door. It read, "Please report directly to the park. We are sorry for the inconvienence." Mary Jane had a big decision to make. Her parents had repeatedly told her not to walk around town alone. She then thought, "Well, it is for school.... Then again my parents told me not to walk around town." She decided upon the reasoning that it was for school. So she thought.


When she finally reached the park there was a noise coming from a building that sort of sounded like music. She knocked twice and nobody answered. So she peeped her head inside to find a deserted gym with yet another note in the middle of it. It read, "Please go to the pool" so she thought for a sure fact that this would be the last stop. When she got there she heard the same music that she had heard coming from the gym. She looked around the corner and saw a HUGE suprise! It was a suprise party for her! When she walked around the corner, everyone yeld, "HAPPY BIRTHDAY MARY JANE!!!"
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Old 04-13-2008, 04:42 AM   #4
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WI username: volleyuup
WW username: sandwichlover
What inspired you?: I was inspired for this peom from an similar event that happened to me.

One day I was Grandma's House
Everything was fine until I heard some mouses
It turned about to be my six year old cousins
and I was excited because I got gifts for them out of the dozens.
But they said they didn't like my present
My heart stopped and suddenly I felt like a pleasant
They ran over to my Webkinz and shouted out with glee
"This is what we want" and this only saddened me
I worked so hard for their teddy bears
and now they had to take my own Webkinz with no tears.
My twin cousins made my duck a fright.
They covered it in green frosting and I tried to be calm as I could might.
I wanted their parents to do something
but the damage was done and left me angry, out of money, and crying.
They took my duck, raccoon, and lil'black lab
and tried to make me understand why but I couldn't smile a dab.
They were smiling like nothing was wrong and what they did was fine and acceptable.
But I knew that it was wrong and unpleaseable.
I blame my aunt and uncle who did nothing and I also am upset that they didn't take the gifts I had so carefully prepared. Instead, they took my heart, my soul, and my babies, and I finally was flared. I still cry about it to this day but now, I can be happier when this happens. I have kiddy insurance now and I finally can lessen.
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Old 04-13-2008, 07:21 AM   #5
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WI Username: sp0ngeb0br0cksny
WW Username: yankees0213
What Inspired You?: idk really!


Sun comes out at the peek of dawn,
Eyes crack open as you sit up in bed,
As you look outside you see a little fawn,
And you ask yourself what you are going to do.

You wash up and run downstairs to the greeting of your mom,
But today theres no mom greeting you,
You ask yourself to just calm,
But you know you probably won't.

You walk down the hallway hoping to see your brother playing video games,
Instead he is sobbing on the couch,
You ask yourself if this is a game,
But life is full of surprises.

You go outside hoping to find your dad mowing the lawn,
But the grass is still long waiting to be mowed,
But then you see another little fawn,
And you ask yourself what's going on.

Then you walk into the Living Room,
But lucky enough,
You find your dog sleeping with a broom,
And you ask yourself why your dog is so weird sometimes.

"Rumble, Rumble"
You are still hungry so you go back to the kitchen,
And as you are walking you fumble,
As you get up you look at the refridgerator and see a note and it reads,

"Good morining sweetie pie,
Your father and I went out food shopping a little earlier today! Don't mind your little brother, he's just upset because we said we wouldn't buy him the latest edition of this video game he likes. Hope we didn't give you a fright!
♥ Mom

PS - Make sure Buddy (the dog) isn't nibbling on the broom again!"

Then you tell yourself that mom and dad better get some Cocoa Puffs!

The End

Thanks! Hope you like it!
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Old 04-13-2008, 07:30 AM   #6
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That's cute!!!!
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Old 04-13-2008, 10:14 AM   #7
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View Post Originally Posted by Munchies
here is a poem i didnt write it but i did change lines , words, and sentences does that still count as our own?? well here it is anyways

Why am I condemned
To this prison?
Is there a reason to my suffering?
Did I commit a sin?
Why am I forgotten
By the people who once loved?
Did I do something bad?
Did I do something wrong?
Every time someone comes along
They walk right on by
Without a glance
Or a look of love
I must be too ugly,
Too old, too dispirited
I wag my tail
Sparkle my eyes
But all of it in vain
For the time soon will come
When I’ll be taken away
Not by a loving family
But by the men of hate
How I long to see the sun
To feel grass beneath my paws
To live, to jump, to run
But most of all be loved
I dream of flowered fields
Of sparkling, shining lakes
Of Frisbees cutting the wind
I just want to play
I see him coming now
That man in clothes of white
I follow now behind him
My fighting will has died
I’ll never again see the sun
Never feel the morning grass
Never catch a Frisbee
In its flitting path
For now I leave this world
Of selfishness and greed
And fly to my Creator
The One who cares for me.

P.S its about animal cruelty / abuse

I'm sorry, but you have to actually write it all by yourself.


Maybe you can enter something else!

---------- Bubblegum165 added 5 Minutes and 35 Seconds later ----------

Thanks to all who entered! I have read all the entries so far.


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Last edited by Bubblegum165; 04-13-2008 at 10:14 AM.. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
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Old 04-13-2008, 10:52 AM   #8
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Ok heres my new entry

Im scruffy... I once had a very kind owner.. but as the time went by he had problems.. he would hit me and slap me with belts and whips.. during the night i would not sleep for the sack that something worse may happen.. all i ever wanted was a nice owner that would love me and take care of me... but as the nights when on i had gotten worse and worse i dont know what i did to deserve this.. as soon as my owner let me into the yarn during the cold snowy weather i ran out and a SPCA woman had found me . I hissed and groweled because i knew what would happen i would be locked in a cage for days on end.. but when i had gotten there a nice little girl had decided i was the one for her.. she took me home and actualy loved me! it was the greatest feeling i ever had... 1 year later i thought it was time to go time to move on to a better place... i passed away... my owner was in tears all day.. and the next and next... day for days to come.. but i was in a better place were all my scars were forgotten my bruises and crys would never haunt me and i would finaly be happy..

The end
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Old 04-13-2008, 10:56 AM   #9
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*tear* That's very beautiful Munchies.
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Old 04-13-2008, 11:31 AM   #10
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Wow. That's really deep.
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