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Old 11-03-2008, 08:14 PM   #41
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View Post Originally Posted by Ilovetoswim
Can we put a vote in for ourselves? I would be embarrassed if I didn't get any votes.
sure, but I'm sure that your story will get lots of votes!

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View Post Originally Posted by INDiGO SHOCK
are there any spots left?
um, no, i'm sorry. but you can enter in the next season!

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View Post Originally Posted by drichar674
Well, here's my entry. I hope you enjoy the read. Thanks for holding this contest. I love to write and love a challenge.

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IS BEAUTY ONLY SKIN DEEP?

I walked into the room, only to want to run back out. My fear developed from possibly never seeing her again coupled with never finding anything like her to claim for myself.

This was the first time I saw her and I was completely enamored by her exceptional beauty. I felt she was a breathtaking gift created just for me. She looked exceptionally beautiful in her candy apple red coat that hugged her perfect body. I couldn’t help stare as she stood still and silent.

She never uttered a sound yet I felt so comfortable as I made it a point to brush by her. She didn’t seem to mind and never moved. I was fascinated by everything about her including her magnificent fragrance.

I tried to be nonchalant as I looked her over before leaving to go back to my office. She was undeniably every young man’s dream. She was poised and polished yet so very seductive in appearance.

As I hesitantly made my way to my desk, I only hoped she’d still be somewhere in or near that room at break time. Although still filled with the fear that she’d no longer be in there, I found myself imagining how awesome it would be to take her to lunch and how so many people would be extremely envious seeing us together.

As I sat at my desk, I could think only of her. I thought about her glow and how pristine she looked. I thought, “She has style, class, beauty and was built extremely well.”

Overwhelmed by thoughts of her, I decided I just had to see her again immediately. So, I took an early break and left my desk to go back in hopes of seeing her again.

Fortunately, I found her still standing in the same spot. As I approached her, I was overcome by feelings I had never experienced before. I became somewhat brazen realizing we were alone and ran my hand gently over her body. She remained perfectly still…totally, seemingly, unaffected by my actions. I wrapped my arms around her and hugged her. Then my eyes began to tear because she did not reciprocate in any way.

I looked at my watch to check how much time I could spend with her alone. I wanted to know everything about her. I was most upset when I heard some of my co-workers advancing toward us. I feared I’d never have the opportunity to spend time alone with her again once others took notice of her beauty as I did.

Mr. Spencer, my boss, approached me saying, “ Jim, Isn’t she a beauty?” As I watched them drive off, I couldn’t help but wonder if I’d ever make enough money to afford to buy a car just like that one.
WOW! that was great!!!!!!!

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Old 11-04-2008, 03:28 AM   #42
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drichar674, your story is too funny. I laughed and laughed and laughed. Nice work.
Old 11-04-2008, 05:39 PM   #43
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drichar674, your story is too funny. I laughed and laughed and laughed. Nice work.
I thought so too!

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View Post Originally Posted by 1smiley
drichar674, your story is too funny. I laughed and laughed and laughed. Nice work.
Thanks for taking the time to read my story. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Keep Smiling!

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I thought so too!

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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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I thought so too!

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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Old 11-05-2008, 07:52 AM   #45
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Here's my short story, very short. (It's not very good)
I walked into the room, only to want to run back out. I did. I ran out of that room, but I came back in. The eerie glow coming from the closet seemed to be pulling me closer. I placed my paw on the door. I turned the doorknob, and then! I woke up. "What a weird dream," I said to myself, then I fell back asleep. THE END
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Old 11-05-2008, 04:36 PM   #46
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View Post Originally Posted by Angee33
Here's my short story, very short. (It's not very good)
I walked into the room, only to want to run back out. I did. I ran out of that room, but I came back in. The eerie glow coming from the closet seemed to be pulling me closer. I placed my paw on the door. I turned the doorknob, and then! I woke up. "What a weird dream," I said to myself, then I fell back asleep. THE END
that was great! thanks for entering!
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Old 11-05-2008, 06:49 PM   #47
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Hi there. Can you let us know what the sentence will be for the next round? I know I may not make it to the next round, but I'd like to think about a story just in case I do. I like all the stories people have written here. I laughed a lot at some of them. Thanks.

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I forgot to mention, I think you are very nice the way you compliment and encourage us. Thanks!

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Old 11-05-2008, 07:15 PM   #48
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View Post Originally Posted by ILuvLilRascals
Hi there. Can you let us know what the sentence will be for the next round? I know I may not make it to the next round, but I'd like to think about a story just in case I do. I like all the stories people have written here. I laughed a lot at some of them. Thanks.

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I forgot to mention, I think you are very nice the way you compliment and encourage us. Thanks!
Well thanks for entering! I will post the first sentence as soon as I think of a good one, I'll let you know!

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and now there is one spot avaliable!

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Old 11-05-2008, 07:18 PM   #49
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I will enter! I will have to write my story soon though! I just wanted to get this spot!
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Old 11-05-2008, 07:21 PM   #50
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I will enter! I will have to write my story soon though! I just wanted to get this spot!
Thanks for entering! I can't wait to read your story!
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