| 02-22-2008, 09:09 AM || #1 |
| | Naruto the Last Airbender
Continue this story for a chance to win a PSF of your choice:
Black and White Cat
Black and White Cheeky Dog
Raccoon(Coming soon! Needs a name!)
You start off from MY story, not building off of others. I score based off focus, and if the story remains consistant. I start off with the beginning, you create a clear middle and ending that stays focused. Keep the story short(Under 1,000 words) and clear. Don't be ashamed if you don't win, it's just my opinion.
Once, in the middle of Airbender Land, Naruto the Ninja Cop woke from his bed of roses. He got dressed and ran outside, hoping it would not rain. His wife, Sakura, put on his Air Crown, and he set on a jouney; to meet Airbender King. Naruto and his pet fish set off on their jouney to meet this king. Naruto had a rock stuck in front of him, so his harsh skills in Airbending pushed the boulder into exploding mountains of hard stones. One hit him, and he fainted......
Make your imagination go wild! Continue off and transition into a smooth ending!
---------- GreenPunk added 930 Minutes and 44 Seconds later ----------
okay, messy at first, now it's fixed!
Last edited by GreenPunk; 02-22-2008 at 09:09 AM.. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
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