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Old 02-14-2008, 10:48 AM   #11
Luckyduck44
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Default Re: LONGEST POEM. WIN BIG!!!!

HERE is the link and it was so long that I had to take to pics of it... lol. They're probably all blurry.
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Old 02-14-2008, 10:51 AM   #12
Luckyduck44
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Default Re: LONGEST POEM. WIN BIG!!!!

OK it says the part about Earl it got cut off....
It says:
Earl was the manager of a baseball team,
And when they would (usually) win, boy, did Earl beam!
Earl called his team the Shells,
for the team was all turtles (plus not one of em smells)

That's all that got cut off. And the 1st line isn't part of it lol.
and again the starred out word is qu.eer
Old 02-14-2008, 10:52 AM   #13
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Default Re: LONGEST POEM. WIN BIG!!!!

Okay... let me try...
I'll get a snack, maybe bread, rye?
The sky is blue.
Does it have the flu?
Grass is green.
Does it have a spleen?
Lava is red.
I don't want lava to be my bed.
The toilet is white.
It does not have much height.
Hearts are pink.
Just don't throw them in a sink.
Bananas are yellow.
They are a small little fellow.
The baby's face is purple!
What will fix it? I bet a burp'll.
My hoodie is orange.
It got stuck in the door hinge.
This game is fun!
Is it lying in the sun?
I know that this is sad, but it's long...
If you think it's awesome, you are wrong.
So I hope I win.
Let's go for a spin.
Do you like my avatar?
It'd be weird if it was a rabid star.
I like gum, how about you?
Mr.T says 'I pity the foo!'
A meteor is about to hit Earth!
I wonder if it will give birth...
Happy Valentines Day!
Have fun today!
Please PM me if I win.
And make the title 'Shark Fin'.
I will try my best to make this longer.
Do you think this sentence is gramitacally wronger?
This is getting boring, but I want to win.
But it is funnier than a kick in the shin.
I shall make a story about a little mouse.
He shall live in a great big house.
Se the mouse went to the kitchen to find some food.
He found some crackers that were very rude.
They said "Leave us alone you fuzzy thing!"
The mouse left them alone and stole their wedding ring.
He went upstairs and it took him an hour.
He made his way over to the shower.
He got saoking wet and started to drown.
And that ended his life, with a sad little frown.
Well that was fun, but I cannot stop.
For if I do, my rhyming abilities will flop.
I always thought Fergie was Furby's cousin.
If she was, there'd probably be a dozen.
Furbies are scary, I wanna see one melt.
Let's make a hat for one, and make it with felt.
Felt is nice, just like snow.
Then when it melts, the water will flow.
It will flow to a lake, and there will be a fish.
Let's cook him up and put him on a dish!
We'll eat him up until he is all gone.
Then we'll put plastic flamingoes on our lawn.
And now comes the end of this poem.
Maybe on the open fields, it might roam.

Last edited by Luckyquiggle1234; 02-14-2008 at 02:32 PM..
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Old 02-14-2008, 10:53 AM   #14
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Default Re: LONGEST POEM. WIN BIG!!!!

luckyduck44, is this the one:

Eggbert was a ***** little fellow,
Everyone knew him as quite mellow.
He wasn't your everyday boy,
But egg-cellent when bringing you joy.

Wore stockings, covered his knees,
Striped just like the bees,
A pointy hat with a jingle on top,
Over his face it would flop.

"Till one day I came along,
And wrote of him a poetic song.
A boy whom was of the forrest,
But among them not the poorest!

No! No, Eggbert was rich,
But with his money there came a glitch!
A carrot, of many,
Stole everything and left not a penny.

A clever carrot he was,
A horrible day 'twas.
He escaped to 'Shroom City,
And with this I give Eggbert pity!

Oh, Eggbert, poor and alone,
And because of this he had no home!
So off he went and lived with a squirrel,
A hyper little guy, his name was Earl!

Earl was the manager of a baseball team,
And when they would (Usually) win, Boy, did Earl beam!
Earl called his team the Shells,
For the team was all turtles (Plus not one of 'em smells!)

Earl was also a rich man indeed,
But to Eggbert's warning he payed no heed.
For carrot came thru' the night,
And stole Earls money without a sight!

Mother Duck took them in,
And showed the police where carrot had been.
The head of the police was a big brown canine,
He sniffed and he snuffed until he found a sign!

On the floor he found a note,
From Carrot's friends saying they'd leave in a boat.
Eggbert, Earl and Police-Dog took up an oar,
The rowed and rowed 'till they hit shore.

Carrot's gang sat round campfire,
While a cabbage played jolly tunes on his lyre!
Eggbert felt bended, broken, boiled, and cracked,
And the sad truth was it was almost a fact!

For the sun was quite hot that day,
And he felt as if he would melt away!
What was worst of all,
He cracked a little bit because of a fall!

Eggbert was mended and found his money,
And their victory was as sweet as honey!
Police-Dog caught Carrot and his gang,
And so these jailbirds sang:

"We broke the law, forgive me,
Now we find ourselves in jail.
We've all learned our lesson,
Now we hardly get mail!"

---------- olive9090 added 1 Minutes and 18 Seconds later ----------

LOL luckysquggle! that was soo funny!!!!

Last edited by olive9090; 02-14-2008 at 10:53 AM.. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
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Old 02-14-2008, 10:54 AM   #15
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yeah that's it!!! lol starred out word: qu.eer
It's called Egg-celent Eggbert!
But you didn't get the first few lines!!!!
Old 02-14-2008, 10:54 AM   #16
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Did you look at mine?
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Old 02-14-2008, 10:55 AM   #17
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View Post Originally Posted by olive9090
luckyduck44, is this the one:

Eggbert was a ***** little fellow,
Everyone knew him as quite mellow.
He wasn't your everyday boy,
But egg-cellent when bringing you joy.

Wore stockings, covered his knees,
Striped just like the bees,
A pointy hat with a jingle on top,
Over his face it would flop.

"Till one day I came along,
And wrote of him a poetic song.
A boy whom was of the forrest,
But among them not the poorest!

No! No, Eggbert was rich,
But with his money there came a glitch!
A carrot, of many,
Stole everything and left not a penny.

A clever carrot he was,
A horrible day 'twas.
He escaped to 'Shroom City,
And with this I give Eggbert pity!

Oh, Eggbert, poor and alone,
And because of this he had no home!
So off he went and lived with a squirrel,
A hyper little guy, his name was Earl!

Earl was the manager of a baseball team,
And when they would (Usually) win, Boy, did Earl beam!
Earl called his team the Shells,
For the team was all turtles (Plus not one of 'em smells!)

Earl was also a rich man indeed,
But to Eggbert's warning he payed no heed.
For carrot came thru' the night,
And stole Earls money without a sight!

Mother Duck took them in,
And showed the police where carrot had been.
The head of the police was a big brown canine,
He sniffed and he snuffed until he found a sign!

On the floor he found a note,
From Carrot's friends saying they'd leave in a boat.
Eggbert, Earl and Police-Dog took up an oar,
The rowed and rowed 'till they hit shore.

Carrot's gang sat round campfire,
While a cabbage played jolly tunes on his lyre!
Eggbert felt bended, broken, boiled, and cracked,
And the sad truth was it was almost a fact!

For the sun was quite hot that day,
And he felt as if he would melt away!
What was worst of all,
He cracked a little bit because of a fall!

Eggbert was mended and found his money,
And their victory was as sweet as honey!
Police-Dog caught Carrot and his gang,
And so these jailbirds sang:

"We broke the law, forgive me,
Now we find ourselves in jail.
We've all learned our lesson,
Now we hardly get mail!"

---------- olive9090 added 1 Minutes and 18 Seconds later ----------

LOL luckysquggle! that was soo funny!!!!
Thanks, I thought it was lame but funny because it is lame.
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Old 02-14-2008, 10:56 AM   #18
Luckyduck44
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View Post Originally Posted by Luckyquiggle1234
Thanks, I thought it was lame but funny because it is lame.
It's lame? I worked hard on it, for like, 2 days.....
Old 02-14-2008, 10:58 AM   #19
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Default Re: LONGEST POEM. WIN BIG!!!!

I thought it was cute, it made me giggle. Did you look at mine?
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Old 02-14-2008, 10:58 AM   #20
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303 Words For Prep Fan! Can Anybody Beat Her 1st Poem!
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