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Old 06-29-2008, 07:56 PM   #41
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View Post Originally Posted by Webkinzgirl427
ok...... whenever i write a song it sounds so stupid!!! i have the chourus i just need all the other stuff!

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Dang! i forgot the chourus good thing i wrote it at home!
lol, it's ok but think of it this way, don't you think "Pocket Full Of Sunshine" or "Love Song" or "Bleeding Love" sounded weird at first to the writers too? It just needs a tune an good music.
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Old 06-29-2008, 08:24 PM   #42
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I have another song to the tune of tainted love
*Music plays like the one in tainted love*
I had my girl and she...
Was my world and then she......
left me here with my broken heart..
when she left she said you are lame

Chorus
she said one more thing
Tainted love oh oh
tainted love oh oh
like a bell they chime
tainted loveoh oh
TAINTED LOVE

I'm a **** i said
she just used me oh oh
tried to ge-e-t to me
prented to love oh oh oh
I can't stand it oh oh
I want to to scream

Chorus
TAINTED LOVE
she got it
tainted love u want it
like a bell they chime tainted love

music


Tainted love so tainted
tained love u need it
tainted love u want it
TAINTED LOVE
like a bell tainted love they scream tainted love oh oh like a bell tainted love
tainteeedddd LOVE



Ok i know this is a knock off of tainted love but i had an idea and i thougt it was good
btw i am not a boy
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Old 06-29-2008, 08:48 PM   #43
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*o_____________ O________________
listen
learn
love________________
heres how it goes
you listen with your soul
learn with your mind
love______ with your heart

mix it all up
make a few changes
turn around and find what u need__

this is what ur waiting_ for ooh__
trying to get through the hard times



its not finished ive love ritein this song
Old 06-29-2008, 08:54 PM   #44
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wow! wonderful entries everyone!!! Thanks a million! Good luck to all~ouscream
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Old 06-29-2008, 08:57 PM   #45
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can't wait when do u chose?
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Old 06-30-2008, 12:21 PM   #46
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lol, it's ok but think of it this way, don't you think "Pocket Full Of Sunshine" or "Love Song" or "Bleeding Love" sounded weird at first to the writers too? It just needs a tune an good music.
yeah true!!!lol!
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Old 06-30-2008, 08:03 PM   #47
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i have two more songs for you to enjoy.(i am going to post them one by one so that i don't lose my work) i wil write them then post.

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here it is,i got distracted by other things on the forums:


title: now that you're gone

one night
in late june
i saw
a full moon

it was
so bright
then i said,
let there be light

i started to cry
all the stars in the sky
could sense my sadness
i was a mess

cuz you're gone

now that you're gone
i can't live
i can't breath
without a shoulder to lie on

but you're gone

come back to me
then you'll see
how much i miss you
its true

now that you're gone
i can't be happy
i can't feel safe
without someone to rely on

why do you have to be gone?

one day
in december
there was
snowy weather

i saw a figure
coming towards me
i couldn't see
if it was you

cuz it was so blurry
and as soon as it came
it dissaperead
in a flurry

now that you're gone
i can't move on
i need you
i wanna see you
one more time

but now you're gone

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here is the other song(its really silly.its intended for little kids.i have a toddler sister and i made it for her):

title: purple polka dotted monster

i was walking down the street
i heard a funky beat
out of the corner of my eye
i saw a great surprise.......

it was a
purple polka dotted monster
i laughed so hard
it was the funniest
thing i ever saw

that old monster came up to me and said,
"would you like some tea?"
and off we went
to drink
our tea
with glee!

ohh
that old purple polka dotted monster
sure was a sight
he never got in a fight
even when he got laughed at

we were friends forever
then he got up
and said,
"i have to go to another town and make some child happy."
"what about me.i need you here" i argued
but he protested
and i rested
for the day

and that was the last....


of the purple
polka
dotted
monster________________

*spoken* i'll miss him.

(_____________ means that you hold out the word monster)

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yeah,that second one is really weird,but its for a kid that is going into preschool next year.

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oh and thanks for the nice comments on mine! i didn't see that until like,2 seconds ago!

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Old 06-30-2008, 08:29 PM   #48
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ok i think i got a song!!!!

Title: come back to me!

As I sit here late at night
I think about our fight
I wish you would come back
Come back home!!!!!

Chourus:
Baby Come back to me!
I can't live without you bo!
I can't live without you noooooo

verese:
Your the only one for me
Why can't you see
were perfect for each other
in every way
Why didn't you staaayy!!

Chourus:
Baby Come back to me!
I can't live without you bo!
I can't live without you noooooo

Bridge?:
I hold your picture in my hand
think how it would be so grand
if we could dance together again
Oh baby pleeeeeaaaassseeee.....

Chourus:
Baby Come back to me!
I can't live without you bo!
I can't live without you noooooo

Baby come back to me PLEASE!!!!



so thats the song!!! Hope you like it!!! Its like to the tune of be good to me by Ashley Tisdale or just make up a tune for me (the long stay and please and no is like from No air when their like nooooo.)

It took me forever!! lol!

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if i can think of more i will post more!!

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anyone like mine??? I worked hard on it!

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Old 06-30-2008, 08:47 PM   #49
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i really like yours!
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Old 06-30-2008, 08:51 PM   #50
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thanks! your first one is great!
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