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View Poll Results: WHat do you think?
wow this is really good!! 550.00%
Pretty good! 330.00%
I liked it but it needs some work! 110.00%
Other 00%
xodancinggirlox onlyy/ Results 110.00%
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Old 11-25-2009, 10:58 PM   #1
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Default Do you like my thanksgiving story? (this is a wayy to get into the spirit of the holidayss) PLEASE COMMENT I WORKED SOOO HARD!

I found thi story i wrote from last year about thanksgiving where im the turkey(alive lol) here it is! Please give me your honest opinions! VOTE ON THE POLLL! WHICH IS NOWW UP!!!!!

Thanksgiving Turkey Adventure!
Gobble Gobble! Its almost Thankgiving and I need to get out of town! Every year I run for my life because people want me to be their mouthwatering dinner!
Today is the day before Thanksgiving and my bags are packed up and tighty. I threw on my small shoes and stepped out of my penhouse. Off I go into the scary world so I can reach my new destination called Ireland. I know it's a long way for my puny feet to handle but im desperate!
As I reached town people gave me a death stare and dogs licked their chops like I was some sort of juicy T-bone waiting to be thrown into there dark slimy mouths! More and more people started to glare down at me, so i decided to make and sudden run for it. All the townspeople dropped what they were doing and immediatly ran after me! More people joined in on their turkey chase, I jumped around trying to make them go off track! No use, there were so many of them and they were way faster than a pigeon toed turkey!
It felt like i was running for hours when I stumbled and noticed the people surround me with their sweat-dripping faces ready for the kill! All of a sudden a rough hand grabbed me from behind and i let out a last shriek and the last thing i remember was yelling between the men. I completely blacked out after that and I wasnt sure if I was dead or not. I slowly woke up shortly after that in my penhouse. My bags were by laying wide open with nothing in them and my shoes were left by my doorway untouched. I was confused... Was it all a dream?




Pleasee comment! i worked rlly hard!

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Old 11-25-2009, 11:01 PM   #2
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Default Re: Do you like my thanksgiving story? (this is a wayy to get into the spirit of the holidayss) PLEASE COMMENT I WORKED SOOO HARD!

That is really good! It has a lot of detail which I love!
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Old 11-25-2009, 11:02 PM   #3
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View Post Originally Posted by disneyfreak102
That is really good! It has a lot of detail which I love!
Thanks! i wrote it last year and decided to add more to it! thx i apreciate ur comment
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Old 11-25-2009, 11:10 PM   #4
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Great job, I like it!
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Old 11-25-2009, 11:11 PM   #5
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Just voted on the poll!
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Old 11-25-2009, 11:12 PM   #6
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Great job, I like it!

thanksss! also everyone plzz help me with any improvements!! trust me i knoww i hav punctuation errors but idcc bout that parttt haaa
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Old 11-25-2009, 11:21 PM   #7
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You did really good! Awesome job!
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Old 11-25-2009, 11:39 PM   #8
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Old 11-25-2009, 11:56 PM   #9
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This is SUPER good! I love it! :]
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Old 11-26-2009, 12:36 AM   #10
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thank you everyonee!
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