Song Writing Club!!

[WilsonGregery]

Originally Posted by chuhulil

I am sorry, it will be this summer but school is almost out for me.

Wow! Wonderful!!!!

the summer's fine and thank you! i'm glad you liked the song, even if it was a radom one...the inspiration says it all! LOL

Originally Posted by muzicfreak

yes I know I havn't been on forever and I'm really sorry everyone, but I kept forgetting and then I got busy and then I fogot and I'm sorry I havn't been here in a long time



thats a great song! I really like it

it's alright that you haven't been on. i just have nothing better to do during the afternoon most days so i hop on over to WI and check stuff out and make random songs with odd insiprations! LOL.

thanks about the song!

[chuhulil]

Hey guys! Ok, well, those of you that are in Chihuahua's club and for those of you who are not. Guess who's anniversary it was on May 2nd! It was...Jon Bon Jovi and his wife Dorothea!

[WilsonGregery]

i think it's great that he was able to marry his highschool girlfriend and they're still together! (At least that's what i remember hearing -- that she was his HS girlfriend...)

[chuhulil]

Really? Oh, I never heard that but either way, she is very lucky.

[WilsonGregery]

i though i heard it on some Bon Jovi show (like behind the music) on VH1 a long time ago, so that's why i'm not 100% sure.

[chuhulil]

Maybe. I don't know.

[chuhulil]

Hulie's Corner:

Hold up

Whatcha gonna do when I am gone,
I can only wonder,
Why you didn't tell me what was going on,
Well okay then

Chorus
What you think I'll do,
I want to know,
Your smile makes my demand grow,
What's the hold up

So while you flip your rockstar hair,
And you smile your rockstar smile,
You stare your rockstar stare,
And I am under your rockstar trance

Chorus

Though I know you,
I want to show you,
I'm up to the challenges,
That a rockstar gives his fans

Chorus

I keep my head up all day,
Just to hear what you have to tell me,
But know I don't know,
Why won't you tell me

I am tired of waiting,
As you shake your hair dry,
You flash me a smile,
I try not to cry

Chorus

Can you sense it,
The broken hearts,
Can you feel it,
This is how it starts

You sob and say you're sorry,
And that you'll tell me,
It was for the best,
But I can't help but cry

Chorus

What's the hold up_______________

Ok, well, that one was inspired because look alike wouldn't tell me something and so I was kind of upset and so once he found how much I needed to know he started crying and told me but then I wished I didn't know.

[muzicfreak]

That's a really good song, but it's sad that you wish you didn't know. There are some things that I guess I wish I didn't know about guitar guy, but since he's your friend, I guess you take the ups and the downs
It was a really good song though

[chuhulil]

I know. Sadly, he won't be my friend for longer. I wish though. Yeah, I sort of wish I didn't know because then I would be a lot happier around him to know he would be my friend for years to come. He is not sure but he is about 90% positive.

[muzicfreak]

aww what was it. I understand if you don't want to tell me though.