Song Writing Club!!

[WilsonGregery]

my first song of may!

Masterpiece

Like a house on fire
I feel your pull -- soul mate
Your cold comfort refreshes me
Awakens feelings within

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise

We’re lucky to learn
Our identity’s before too late
I was scared to death before you
The doubt of a legacy has faded

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise

My heart felt like an Open Season
Hunted by those who hurt
No honor among those thieves
That left me in ashes and dust

Fear and loathing filled my heart
I felt like there was no way out
The big game was over-- lessons learned
My world, an empty planet

Then came an about face
The perfect storm of love
No boogeyman in the shadows
Nor secrets and lies

Your charm as real as rain
Washed over my heart
Like riding lightning in a hurricane
You swept me off my feet

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise
My angel, my heart, my love

Inspiration: boardom and a list of Criminal Minds Episode Names....

[shadowsown88]

Originally Posted by WilsonGregery

my first song of may!

Masterpiece

Like a house on fire
I feel your pull -- soul mate
Your cold comfort refreshes me
Awakens feelings within

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise

We’re lucky to learn
Our identity’s before too late
I was scared to death before you
The doubt of a legacy has faded

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise

My heart felt like an Open Season
Hunted by those who hurt
No honor among those thieves
That left me in ashes and dust

Fear and loathing filled my heart
I felt like there was no way out
The big game was over-- lessons learned
My world, an empty planet

Then came an about face
The perfect storm of love
No boogeyman in the shadows
Nor secrets and lies

Your charm as real as rain
Washed over my heart
Like riding lightning in a hurricane
You swept me off my feet

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise
My angel, my heart, my love

Inspiration: boardom and a list of Criminal Minds Episode Names....

I like it! It seems like the sort of song Skillet would sing.

[WilsonGregery]

Originally Posted by shadowsown88

I like it! It seems like the sort of song Skillet would sing.

thanks, though i've never heard of Skillet (they're a group right?)

[shadowsown88]

That's okay; they're not hugely popular. XD But yeah, they're a band; they're like Christian rock.

[WilsonGregery]

ah, i see now.

[shadowsown88]

Mostly I said it because your song had this mood that matches the mood of their songs.

[gwenstefani333]

Username: Gwenstefani333
Club Nickname: Fizzle
Fave thing on WI: Writing section (I write, like, 20 stories a week)
Why do you like to write songs: I'm trying to put on a broadway play, and I write songs because I want them to be in my play and I LOVE to write them because I can express myself.
When is your birthday: May 21

Here's my first song:

The New York Pink (NYP) opening

Parents (semi-whispered):
We're not moving to Chicago,
Not Illinois,
Nor California, Texas,
And not Detroit.
We're moving to a place, far from Tennessee,
Yet you have to take stretches in this land of Opportunity.

Chorus (sung only by parents this time):
With no more options left, we're moving to NYC!
Oh, this will be a good change for both, you and me!
Wanted to be closer to the stock market,
And we got our wish,
Don't want a bite of the Big Apple,
No, we wanna whole dish!
And if you think we're going too fast,
Better hold on tight,
Cuz we're going so fast,
It'll take your whole might!

Kassy (daughter):
Did you hear that?
Am I dreaming?
We're MOVING AGAIN!
We move so much,
Lost count at ten!
But I guess it's ok,
As long as today,
I can say goodbye to my friends,
time to tell 'em it's the end.

(Chorus, sung by everyone)

Bridge (sung by everyone again)
I can't wait,
Need the date,
Gotta pack,
This attack,
Of happiness and pain!

(Chorus again, then music ends)

Inspiration: Well, I can't really say there was an inspiration to this song, I needed an opening to the play, but I can give you a quick summary of NYP: When a rich family from Beverly Hills needs to move to get to the job the dad was offered, they are both excited and worried (happiness and pain). But when they step out of the limo, they are shocked to find out their apartment is in the middle of very dirty neighborhood, a far stretch from their Beverly Hills mansion. They immedeantly reject the job offer while there is still time, as they "can't live under these conditions" and need to move back. While sticking out like sore thumbs, they are befriended by a family that lives just under them. Kassy, the main character, gulps at the sight of a very jealous Pricilla, who is the sister of Amanda. Amanda and Kassy's brother, Alex, immedeantly fall in love. Kassy falls in love with the paper boy, and both couples know they will never be together. Just as they are madly in love with each other, Kassy's family falls into financial trouble and cannot move back to Beverly Hills. NYP Is a spectacular comical experience where love and friendship come together.

[WilsonGregery]

Originally Posted by shadowsown88

Mostly I said it because your song had this mood that matches the mood of their songs.

ah, i see. thanks! it's kinda interesting to find out stuff like that.

Originally Posted by gwenstefani333

Username: Gwenstefani333
Club Nickname: Fizzle
Fave thing on WI: Writing section (I write, like, 20 stories a week)
Why do you like to write songs: I'm trying to put on a broadway play, and I write songs because I want them to be in my play and I LOVE to write them because I can express myself.
When is your birthday: May 21

Here's my first song:

The New York Pink (NYP) opening

Parents (semi-whispered):
We're not moving to Chicago,
Not Illinois,
Nor California, Texas,
And not Detroit.
We're moving to a place, far from Tennessee,
Yet you have to take stretches in this land of Opportunity.

Chorus (sung only by parents this time):
With no more options left, we're moving to NYC!
Oh, this will be a good change for both, you and me!
Wanted to be closer to the stock market,
And we got our wish,
Don't want a bite of the Big Apple,
No, we wanna whole dish!
And if you think we're going too fast,
Better hold on tight,
Cuz we're going so fast,
It'll take your whole might!

Kassy (daughter):
Did you hear that?
Am I dreaming?
We're MOVING AGAIN!
We move so much,
Lost count at ten!
But I guess it's ok,
As long as today,
I can say goodbye to my friends,
time to tell 'em it's the end.

(Chorus, sung by everyone)

Bridge (sung by everyone again)
I can't wait,
Need the date,
Gotta pack,
This attack,
Of happiness and pain!

(Chorus again, then music ends)

Inspiration: Well, I can't really say there was an inspiration to this song, I needed an opening to the play, but I can give you a quick summary of NYP: When a rich family from Beverly Hills needs to move to get to the job the dad was offered, they are both excited and worried (happiness and pain). But when they step out of the limo, they are shocked to find out their apartment is in the middle of very dirty neighborhood, a far stretch from their Beverly Hills mansion. They immedeantly reject the job offer while there is still time, as they "can't live under these conditions" and need to move back. While sticking out like sore thumbs, they are befriended by a family that lives just under them. Kassy, the main character, gulps at the sight of a very jealous Pricilla, who is the sister of Amanda. Amanda and Kassy's brother, Alex, immedeantly fall in love. Kassy falls in love with the paper boy, and both couples know they will never be together. Just as they are madly in love with each other, Kassy's family falls into financial trouble and cannot move back to Beverly Hills. NYP Is a spectacular comical experience where love and friendship come together.

welcome fizzle, i'll read your song as soon as i have time!


I read the song, it's a very good opening song! i like it!

[chuhulil]

Originally Posted by WilsonGregery

Do not fret Hulie! Sometimes life get in the way of fun! lol. I know you'll make an album when time allows!

I am sorry, it will be this summer but school is almost out for me.

Originally Posted by WilsonGregery

my first song of may!

Masterpiece

Like a house on fire
I feel your pull -- soul mate
Your cold comfort refreshes me
Awakens feelings within

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise

We’re lucky to learn
Our identity’s before too late
I was scared to death before you
The doubt of a legacy has faded

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise

My heart felt like an Open Season
Hunted by those who hurt
No honor among those thieves
That left me in ashes and dust

Fear and loathing filled my heart
I felt like there was no way out
The big game was over-- lessons learned
My world, an empty planet

Then came an about face
The perfect storm of love
No boogeyman in the shadows
Nor secrets and lies

Your charm as real as rain
Washed over my heart
Like riding lightning in a hurricane
You swept me off my feet

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise
My angel, my heart, my love

Inspiration: boardom and a list of Criminal Minds Episode Names....

Wow! Wonderful!!!!

Originally Posted by gwenstefani333

Username: Gwenstefani333
Club Nickname: Fizzle
Fave thing on WI: Writing section (I write, like, 20 stories a week)
Why do you like to write songs: I'm trying to put on a broadway play, and I write songs because I want them to be in my play and I LOVE to write them because I can express myself.
When is your birthday: May 21

Here's my first song:

The New York Pink (NYP) opening

Parents (semi-whispered):
We're not moving to Chicago,
Not Illinois,
Nor California, Texas,
And not Detroit.
We're moving to a place, far from Tennessee,
Yet you have to take stretches in this land of Opportunity.

Chorus (sung only by parents this time):
With no more options left, we're moving to NYC!
Oh, this will be a good change for both, you and me!
Wanted to be closer to the stock market,
And we got our wish,
Don't want a bite of the Big Apple,
No, we wanna whole dish!
And if you think we're going too fast,
Better hold on tight,
Cuz we're going so fast,
It'll take your whole might!

Kassy (daughter):
Did you hear that?
Am I dreaming?
We're MOVING AGAIN!
We move so much,
Lost count at ten!
But I guess it's ok,
As long as today,
I can say goodbye to my friends,
time to tell 'em it's the end.

(Chorus, sung by everyone)

Bridge (sung by everyone again)
I can't wait,
Need the date,
Gotta pack,
This attack,
Of happiness and pain!

(Chorus again, then music ends)

Inspiration: Well, I can't really say there was an inspiration to this song, I needed an opening to the play, but I can give you a quick summary of NYP: When a rich family from Beverly Hills needs to move to get to the job the dad was offered, they are both excited and worried (happiness and pain). But when they step out of the limo, they are shocked to find out their apartment is in the middle of very dirty neighborhood, a far stretch from their Beverly Hills mansion. They immedeantly reject the job offer while there is still time, as they "can't live under these conditions" and need to move back. While sticking out like sore thumbs, they are befriended by a family that lives just under them. Kassy, the main character, gulps at the sight of a very jealous Pricilla, who is the sister of Amanda. Amanda and Kassy's brother, Alex, immedeantly fall in love. Kassy falls in love with the paper boy, and both couples know they will never be together. Just as they are madly in love with each other, Kassy's family falls into financial trouble and cannot move back to Beverly Hills. NYP Is a spectacular comical experience where love and friendship come together.

"

Welcome to the club! Wonderful song!

[muzicfreak]

yes I know I havn't been on forever and I'm really sorry everyone, but I kept forgetting and then I got busy and then I fogot and I'm sorry I havn't been here in a long time

Originally Posted by WilsonGregery

my first song of may!

Masterpiece

Like a house on fire
I feel your pull -- soul mate
Your cold comfort refreshes me
Awakens feelings within

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise

We’re lucky to learn
Our identity’s before too late
I was scared to death before you
The doubt of a legacy has faded

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise

My heart felt like an Open Season
Hunted by those who hurt
No honor among those thieves
That left me in ashes and dust

Fear and loathing filled my heart
I felt like there was no way out
The big game was over-- lessons learned
My world, an empty planet

Then came an about face
The perfect storm of love
No boogeyman in the shadows
Nor secrets and lies

Your charm as real as rain
Washed over my heart
Like riding lightning in a hurricane
You swept me off my feet

Your love is my birthright
From a higher power
Feels like mayhem – oh so right
Lime light surrounds the true knight
You’re my masterpiece, my paradise
My angel, my heart, my love

Inspiration: boardom and a list of Criminal Minds Episode Names....

thats a great song! I really like it

Originally Posted by gwenstefani333

Username: Gwenstefani333
Club Nickname: Fizzle
Fave thing on WI: Writing section (I write, like, 20 stories a week)
Why do you like to write songs: I'm trying to put on a broadway play, and I write songs because I want them to be in my play and I LOVE to write them because I can express myself.
When is your birthday: May 21

Here's my first song:

The New York Pink (NYP) opening

Parents (semi-whispered):
We're not moving to Chicago,
Not Illinois,
Nor California, Texas,
And not Detroit.
We're moving to a place, far from Tennessee,
Yet you have to take stretches in this land of Opportunity.

Chorus (sung only by parents this time):
With no more options left, we're moving to NYC!
Oh, this will be a good change for both, you and me!
Wanted to be closer to the stock market,
And we got our wish,
Don't want a bite of the Big Apple,
No, we wanna whole dish!
And if you think we're going too fast,
Better hold on tight,
Cuz we're going so fast,
It'll take your whole might!

Kassy (daughter):
Did you hear that?
Am I dreaming?
We're MOVING AGAIN!
We move so much,
Lost count at ten!
But I guess it's ok,
As long as today,
I can say goodbye to my friends,
time to tell 'em it's the end.

(Chorus, sung by everyone)

Bridge (sung by everyone again)
I can't wait,
Need the date,
Gotta pack,
This attack,
Of happiness and pain!

(Chorus again, then music ends)

Inspiration: Well, I can't really say there was an inspiration to this song, I needed an opening to the play, but I can give you a quick summary of NYP: When a rich family from Beverly Hills needs to move to get to the job the dad was offered, they are both excited and worried (happiness and pain). But when they step out of the limo, they are shocked to find out their apartment is in the middle of very dirty neighborhood, a far stretch from their Beverly Hills mansion. They immedeantly reject the job offer while there is still time, as they "can't live under these conditions" and need to move back. While sticking out like sore thumbs, they are befriended by a family that lives just under them. Kassy, the main character, gulps at the sight of a very jealous Pricilla, who is the sister of Amanda. Amanda and Kassy's brother, Alex, immedeantly fall in love. Kassy falls in love with the paper boy, and both couples know they will never be together. Just as they are madly in love with each other, Kassy's family falls into financial trouble and cannot move back to Beverly Hills. NYP Is a spectacular comical experience where love and friendship come together.

welcome fizzle!
I like your song, and the musical sounds really cool too!