Song Writing Club!!

[muzicfreak]

Originally Posted by sarastuff999

Thanks, that really makes me feel better, muzicfreak! And it's so true! Like, I was in a car crash, and our car was completely ruined. But, our church gave us a new car!!!

aww but it's good your church was able to help you out

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

Heres 99

The Theory

Every night I used to go
To the only man I ever was to know
He told me, I was a good boy
Now i see
fallin to the ground
now i see him
flyin around

And he taught

That Theory!
The broken
the peices
to the locket
The Theory!
The majestic triumph
back again
he got stumped
Oww!

That night
I was in bed
not knowing
what he had said [that afternoon]
he mumbled the 3 bad words
that would make fly
he said, im gonna die

And he taught me

That Theory
Was of the wrong hands
The Theory
was about was about to trans

And at his funeral
His sign said R.I.P
i knew what it meant
rest in peace [good friend!]
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Inspiration- ......
Do you smell bagels? lol [joking]

Enjoy.

that's pretty good...but what is the real inspiration?

Originally Posted by chuhulil

Thanks! That means a lot coming from a super comical songwriter!

Thanks! It was. I cried and cried but they describe the guy like a dream guy and even the brain damaged girl can tell that.

A LITTLE funny??????

Wow, your mood can change. I liked it. So sad. I used to think slavery was sooooo wrong and when I saw pictures, I cried.

Hey Sara! Wonderful! It is a masterpiece! I never know how to spell that.

Wow, actually right now, my dad is making bagels. Are you psychic?

Thanks, that's allright!

Hulie's Corner:
Anyone remember Peices guy? Well, he has a girlfriend! And she is a total jerk! Once he high-fived me and she was like "Um, hello, I am right here. Why didn't you slap her?" And now he is a jerk to me when she is around. I do not like him one bit anymore.

wow that's really mean of her....and him! I'm so sorry to hear that. Oh yes I do remeber hi,

Originally Posted by sarastuff999

I got another one.

It's called, "When This All is Over" (Tell me if the titles too long) BTW. I've made this song for my friend!

(Ooooo!) Uh huh! (Ooooo!) Alright! When this all is over! When this all is over!
We're all going through a hard time, And I want you to know it's okay to cry! You'll always have a shoulder to lean on! Ohhhhh! And what she's doing no, isn't fair, but I will always always be there! Be there! Ohhh, you know? Right? And when this all is over. I imagine, you always doing what you wanna do! 'Cause that's your way, that's the old you! Alissa I can since something's wrong! when you talk about him, and you talk about her, I know that happy memories can be blur! And I know that's the way how it is, but we're on our way to happiness! Oh! And when you just remember, When this all is over! When this all is over! And it's only been a few months, and you never got your chance to re-adjust! Alright, whoa-o-o-o! Remember, all the good memmories that we've had, and all of those have turned it all to sad-ness, Mmmm, mmm! And you lost your company, and although you look you can not see! You know you can always turn to me! Ye-ah-ah! And when this all is over! When this all is over! I'm gonna make a prediction, and this is what I see, you and me hanging-out together, talking 'bout how we'll be 'Friends 4 Evah!' And all the past won't matter no more! We'll help each other, and that's what friends are for! There will be no more troubles, everyday our happiness will grow and double! That's what I see! You and me girl! Your mother, your step dad, your real dad, and you don't gotta chose a side, no matter what you'll be alright! And I'll be just a like a sister too you, yeah yeah! You can come over when ever you want, and I can share everything I got! Just to prove to you, you can do what you gotta do, girl! Ye-ah-ah!... (Ooooo) (Ooooo) (Ooooo) When this all is over!... And it will be over...

I hope you like it!

I like it a lot. It's cool that you were trying to tell your friend that you'd always be there for her. I don't think that the title is to long. I like the title

[b1uski3sxox]

Wow, no one's replied in A LONG TIME!! When shall the April Album poll be up? Just wondering.

[muzicfreak]

sorry bluski, but I have no Idea. That's hulie's end of things so I'm not entirly sure when

[shadowsown88]

I'd expect it to be up within a few days, personally, but I dunno if Hulie's been having much time on here lately. XD

[ChaoBreederRA]

couldnt be on during the week lol

[chuhulil]

Originally Posted by sarastuff999

I got another one.

It's called, "When This All is Over" (Tell me if the titles too long) BTW. I've made this song for my friend!

(Ooooo!) Uh huh! (Ooooo!) Alright! When this all is over! When this all is over!
We're all going through a hard time, And I want you to know it's okay to cry! You'll always have a shoulder to lean on! Ohhhhh! And what she's doing no, isn't fair, but I will always always be there! Be there! Ohhh, you know? Right? And when this all is over. I imagine, you always doing what you wanna do! 'Cause that's your way, that's the old you! Alissa I can since something's wrong! when you talk about him, and you talk about her, I know that happy memories can be blur! And I know that's the way how it is, but we're on our way to happiness! Oh! And when you just remember, When this all is over! When this all is over! And it's only been a few months, and you never got your chance to re-adjust! Alright, whoa-o-o-o! Remember, all the good memmories that we've had, and all of those have turned it all to sad-ness, Mmmm, mmm! And you lost your company, and although you look you can not see! You know you can always turn to me! Ye-ah-ah! And when this all is over! When this all is over! I'm gonna make a prediction, and this is what I see, you and me hanging-out together, talking 'bout how we'll be 'Friends 4 Evah!' And all the past won't matter no more! We'll help each other, and that's what friends are for! There will be no more troubles, everyday our happiness will grow and double! That's what I see! You and me girl! Your mother, your step dad, your real dad, and you don't gotta chose a side, no matter what you'll be alright! And I'll be just a like a sister too you, yeah yeah! You can come over when ever you want, and I can share everything I got! Just to prove to you, you can do what you gotta do, girl! Ye-ah-ah!... (Ooooo) (Ooooo) (Ooooo) When this all is over!... And it will be over...

I hope you like it!

I love it! Nope, the title's not to long. Some songs with long titles are really good.

Originally Posted by b1uski3sxox

Wow, no one's replied in A LONG TIME!! When shall the April Album poll be up? Just wondering.

I know! I am so sorry but I accidentaly deleted one of the PM's with a song plus it is May so it wouldn't make sense. But anyway, I am so sorry. I think that I don't have time to make another album. Again, I am so sorry you guys.

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

couldnt be on during the week lol

Neither could I.

[WilsonGregery]

It's okay Hulie.

[shadowsown88]

Aww. Oh well, that's okay, Hulie. There's always this month. XD

[chuhulil]

I am sorry. I will try my hardest this month too but I am not sure.

[WilsonGregery]

Originally Posted by chuhulil

I am sorry. I will try my hardest this month too but I am not sure.

Do not fret Hulie! Sometimes life get in the way of fun! lol. I know you'll make an album when time allows!