Song Writing Club!!

[sarastuff999]

Originally Posted by muzicfreak

chao- I like it but it's pretty sad

sara- song #1- aww I'm sorry that a lot of not so good stuff has been happening. I hope things get netter soon. but I didn't think your crazy....if you met me, then you'd see crazy LOL I'm JK but I can get pretty wild. song #2- I'm so sorry to hear about that! but it is a good song. I hope your life turns around though. and ya know what? it can! there are people out there who have gotten thier lives turned around. and there are people who don't, but if you trust God and ask him for help, and look to other people too, your life will turn around

Thanks, that really makes me feel better, muzicfreak! And it's so true! Like, I was in a car crash, and our car was completely ruined. But, our church gave us a new car!!!

[WilsonGregery]

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

I'm gonna start The New Era for me. It's a bunch of really long, awesome songs. Humorous of course.
Heres number 100.

NOTE: THIS SONG ISNT FOR HUMOR.

Auctioned Off

Just another soul to give
Your face was added to my ad lib
Just another soul to give
All I got just to live

AHHH!


In the ships deck
Everyones body is a wreck

Abolitionists
Wil sucede
With their promise
To decieve!

They say every heart
Has its own beat
But mine stopped
And it didn't know how to feat

AHHH!

Just another soul to give
Doing my all to live.

Turning the wheel
Of my own fate
Swimming in water
Bein' slave bait!

Abolitionists
Will sucede
with their promis
to deceive!

Ahh.....ahh...ahhh......AHH!

[5 minute guitar solo]

Just another soul to give.
AHH!
Giving my all to live.
Ahh....
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Inspiration - Every heard the song Citizen Soldier by 3 Doors Down? Thats it.
Its slaves being auctioned off.
Also by Amos Fortune - Free Man
U GOTTA READ THAT BOOK.
Enjoy......

what it's about is sad, but i likt the lines Turning the wheel Of my own fate.

Originally Posted by sarastuff999

Hello, I'm not gonna do the song I said I'd do right now. I can't think of songs when I force myself to!

Here's my new song: Life's a dream. It's a very settle song, it's not like boring or anything, it keeps pretty much the same beat. It's kinda like just wondering and trying to figure things out.

I'd like to think life's a dream, 'cause of all that's been happenin' happen-in-in'. I'd like to think life's a dream, life's a dream. Because of all it seems, nothing's going right. I'd like to think life's a dream. Is life a dream? Is life a dream? 'Cause who I am, and who I be, I just can't find a place in this world. Is this the real world? Life is going way to fast, should of enjoyed winter while it last-ed. So tell me now, is life a dream? Life's a dr-eam. With all the choices that I make, it all goes wrong, is life fa-ke? Life's a dream life's a dr-eam. Is my real mama gone? 'Cause she's acting so so wrong. Is my family gone? 'cause it seems it's been so long, since. Life's a dream, is life's a dr-eam? Now I gotta get this straight, every time I wake, it's all re-al, I can't believe, I'm dealing with this deal. So now I've realized, I'm awake and this is life, Ohhh, this is life! And all though I wish I wasn't, I'm awake, I'm awake.

Inspiration: Well, with everything that's been going on in my life, I sometimes just think it's a dream. (No, I'm not crazy) LOL! Well, hope you liked it!


sometimes i wish life was a dream too, so no i do not think you are crazy! there are times in life when things just seem... surreal.


I have another one. Please Don't (It Hurts) It's kind of heavy rock, not AS intense, but still... So, I kinda let my anger control this one... LOL!

Waiting here and waiting here, and staring at the sky. (Staring at the skyyyy) All, I know is that something isn't right. (Something isn't riiiight) And when I heard that you were leaving, I just had to cry, (You know?) And months and months, of waiting more, mom your wife came through the door, she said, you wrote a note. I had to read, it was your apolagie. Wasn't sure of what to think! And big surprize, it was fake. And another note came soon, with nothing more than your excuse. It's gone to the point where it's too painful, now all I gotta say is, Please! Don't! It hurts! Please! don't! It hurts! You will never understand, if you mean it than be a man, prove to us that it is true. (Ohhh!) I. Can't. Stand. You! No! I gotta say! What I gotta say! Can't put this any other way! Than, Please! Don't! It hurts! You're so fake, and your so wrong, I kinda knew it all along! I had a warning, your addiction, just let me know! (Kno-o-o-o-ow) So, Please! Don't! It hurts! (Guiter solo) Please! Don't! It hurts! I gotta say! What I gotta say! Can't this any other wa-a-a-a-ay! I gotta say, what I gotta say, can't put this any other way... Please! Don't! It h-urts.

Hope you liked it! Inspiration: My dad kept on sending us letters about how sorry he was for leaving us, and he would say he would like catch up on chiled support and stuff, but he never actually did it. So it would really confuse me, and hurt.

sorry to hear about the broken promises. the song is good.

[ChaoBreederRA]

Heres 99

The Theory

Every night I used to go
To the only man I ever was to know
He told me, I was a good boy
Now i see
fallin to the ground
now i see him
flyin around

And he taught

That Theory!
The broken
the peices
to the locket
The Theory!
The majestic triumph
back again
he got stumped
Oww!

That night
I was in bed
not knowing
what he had said [that afternoon]
he mumbled the 3 bad words
that would make fly
he said, im gonna die

And he taught me

That Theory
Was of the wrong hands
The Theory
was about was about to trans

And at his funeral
His sign said R.I.P
i knew what it meant
rest in peace [good friend!]
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Inspiration- ......
Do you smell bagels? lol [joking]

Enjoy.

[shadowsown88]

That's good!

[ChaoBreederRA]

thanks. lol
98 will be added later.

[KCM5UncleMike27]

WOW you guys are doing great! Sorry i haven't been here in a while. I made a new song but i am still revising it.

[chuhulil]

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

Its good though. Not bad. 9/10.

Going to a soccer game l8r, wont be on.

dont worry its not bad. 10/10

Thanks! That means a lot coming from a super comical songwriter!

Originally Posted by WilsonGregery

that book must have been so sad! the song kinda made me think of the movie 50 first dates (the name was something like that) where she couldn't remember long term so every day they had to keep reminding her of what had happened the days before.

the song's good Hulie!

Thanks! It was. I cried and cried but they describe the guy like a dream guy and even the brain damaged girl can tell that.

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

Heres a small song, meant to be just ALITTLE funny.

Food Song [Revised And Edited Version]

Yummy yummy yummy, in my tummy
I'm gonna go down
to get some honey

Maybe some cheese
Just no whiz please!
Maybe sausage link
Just make sure they arent pink

Im hungry!
Very very starving!
Im Hungry!
My pizza's name is Marvin [until I ate him]

Im hungry!
There goes Marvin!
Very very starvin'!
Very very starvin'!
ooooooo
ooooooohhhhh
Marvin
Pizza
STARVIN!!!!
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Do you smell bagels?

Enjoy. lol

A LITTLE funny??????

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

I'm gonna start The New Era for me. It's a bunch of really long, awesome songs. Humorous of course.
Heres number 100.

NOTE: THIS SONG ISNT FOR HUMOR.

Auctioned Off

Just another soul to give
Your face was added to my ad lib
Just another soul to give
All I got just to live

AHHH!


In the ships deck
Everyones body is a wreck

Abolitionists
Wil sucede
With their promise
To decieve!

They say every heart
Has its own beat
But mine stopped
And it didn't know how to feat

AHHH!

Just another soul to give
Doing my all to live.

Turning the wheel
Of my own fate
Swimming in water
Bein' slave bait!

Abolitionists
Will sucede
with their promis
to deceive!

Ahh.....ahh...ahhh......AHH!

[5 minute guitar solo]

Just another soul to give.
AHH!
Giving my all to live.
Ahh....
---------------------------------
Inspiration - Every heard the song Citizen Soldier by 3 Doors Down? Thats it.
Its slaves being auctioned off.
Also by Amos Fortune - Free Man
U GOTTA READ THAT BOOK.
Enjoy......

Wow, your mood can change. I liked it. So sad. I used to think slavery was sooooo wrong and when I saw pictures, I cried.

Originally Posted by sarastuff999

Hello, I'm not gonna do the song I said I'd do right now. I can't think of songs when I force myself to!

Here's my new song: Life's a dream. It's a very settle song, it's not like boring or anything, it keeps pretty much the same beat. It's kinda like just wondering and trying to figure things out.

I'd like to think life's a dream, 'cause of all that's been happenin' happen-in-in'. I'd like to think life's a dream, life's a dream. Because of all it seems, nothing's going right. I'd like to think life's a dream. Is life a dream? Is life a dream? 'Cause who I am, and who I be, I just can't find a place in this world. Is this the real world? Life is going way to fast, should of enjoyed winter while it last-ed. So tell me now, is life a dream? Life's a dr-eam. With all the choices that I make, it all goes wrong, is life fa-ke? Life's a dream life's a dr-eam. Is my real mama gone? 'Cause she's acting so so wrong. Is my family gone? 'cause it seems it's been so long, since. Life's a dream, is life's a dr-eam? Now I gotta get this straight, every time I wake, it's all re-al, I can't believe, I'm dealing with this deal. So now I've realized, I'm awake and this is life, Ohhh, this is life! And all though I wish I wasn't, I'm awake, I'm awake.

Inspiration: Well, with everything that's been going on in my life, I sometimes just think it's a dream. (No, I'm not crazy) LOL! Well, hope you liked it!

I have another one. Please Don't (It Hurts) It's kind of heavy rock, not AS intense, but still... So, I kinda let my anger control this one... LOL!

Waiting here and waiting here, and staring at the sky. (Staring at the skyyyy) All, I know is that something isn't right. (Something isn't riiiight) And when I heard that you were leaving, I just had to cry, (You know?) And months and months, of waiting more, mom your wife came through the door, she said, you wrote a note. I had to read, it was your apolagie. Wasn't sure of what to think! And big surprize, it was fake. And another note came soon, with nothing more than your excuse. It's gone to the point where it's too painful, now all I gotta say is, Please! Don't! It hurts! Please! don't! It hurts! You will never understand, if you mean it than be a man, prove to us that it is true. (Ohhh!) I. Can't. Stand. You! No! I gotta say! What I gotta say! Can't put this any other way! Than, Please! Don't! It hurts! You're so fake, and your so wrong, I kinda knew it all along! I had a warning, your addiction, just let me know! (Kno-o-o-o-ow) So, Please! Don't! It hurts! (Guiter solo) Please! Don't! It hurts! I gotta say! What I gotta say! Can't this any other wa-a-a-a-ay! I gotta say, what I gotta say, can't put this any other way... Please! Don't! It h-urts.

Hope you liked it! Inspiration: My dad kept on sending us letters about how sorry he was for leaving us, and he would say he would like catch up on chiled support and stuff, but he never actually did it. So it would really confuse me, and hurt.

Hey Sara! Wonderful! It is a masterpiece! I never know how to spell that.

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

Heres 99

The Theory

Every night I used to go
To the only man I ever was to know
He told me, I was a good boy
Now i see
fallin to the ground
now i see him
flyin around

And he taught

That Theory!
The broken
the peices
to the locket
The Theory!
The majestic triumph
back again
he got stumped
Oww!

That night
I was in bed
not knowing
what he had said [that afternoon]
he mumbled the 3 bad words
that would make fly
he said, im gonna die

And he taught me

That Theory
Was of the wrong hands
The Theory
was about was about to trans

And at his funeral
His sign said R.I.P
i knew what it meant
rest in peace [good friend!]
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Inspiration- ......
Do you smell bagels? lol [joking]

Enjoy.

Wow, actually right now, my dad is making bagels. Are you psychic?

Originally Posted by KCM5UncleMike27

WOW you guys are doing great! Sorry i haven't been here in a while. I made a new song but i am still revising it.

Thanks, that's allright!

Hulie's Corner:
Anyone remember Peices guy? Well, he has a girlfriend! And she is a total jerk! Once he high-fived me and she was like "Um, hello, I am right here. Why didn't you slap her?" And now he is a jerk to me when she is around. I do not like him one bit anymore.

[sarastuff999]

I got another one.

It's called, "When This All is Over" (Tell me if the titles too long) BTW. I've made this song for my friend!

(Ooooo!) Uh huh! (Ooooo!) Alright! When this all is over! When this all is over!
We're all going through a hard time, And I want you to know it's okay to cry! You'll always have a shoulder to lean on! Ohhhhh! And what she's doing no, isn't fair, but I will always always be there! Be there! Ohhh, you know? Right? And when this all is over. I imagine, you always doing what you wanna do! 'Cause that's your way, that's the old you! Alissa I can since something's wrong! when you talk about him, and you talk about her, I know that happy memories can be blur! And I know that's the way how it is, but we're on our way to happiness! Oh! And when you just remember, When this all is over! When this all is over! And it's only been a few months, and you never got your chance to re-adjust! Alright, whoa-o-o-o! Remember, all the good memmories that we've had, and all of those have turned it all to sad-ness, Mmmm, mmm! And you lost your company, and although you look you can not see! You know you can always turn to me! Ye-ah-ah! And when this all is over! When this all is over! I'm gonna make a prediction, and this is what I see, you and me hanging-out together, talking 'bout how we'll be 'Friends 4 Evah!' And all the past won't matter no more! We'll help each other, and that's what friends are for! There will be no more troubles, everyday our happiness will grow and double! That's what I see! You and me girl! Your mother, your step dad, your real dad, and you don't gotta chose a side, no matter what you'll be alright! And I'll be just a like a sister too you, yeah yeah! You can come over when ever you want, and I can share everything I got! Just to prove to you, you can do what you gotta do, girl! Ye-ah-ah!... (Ooooo) (Ooooo) (Ooooo) When this all is over!... And it will be over...

I hope you like it!

[WilsonGregery]

Originally Posted by sarastuff999

I got another one.

It's called, "When This All is Over" (Tell me if the titles too long) BTW. I've made this song for my friend!

(Ooooo!) Uh huh! (Ooooo!) Alright! When this all is over! When this all is over!
We're all going through a hard time, And I want you to know it's okay to cry! You'll always have a shoulder to lean on! Ohhhhh! And what she's doing no, isn't fair, but I will always always be there! Be there! Ohhh, you know? Right? And when this all is over. I imagine, you always doing what you wanna do! 'Cause that's your way, that's the old you! Alissa I can since something's wrong! when you talk about him, and you talk about her, I know that happy memories can be blur! And I know that's the way how it is, but we're on our way to happiness! Oh! And when you just remember, When this all is over! When this all is over! And it's only been a few months, and you never got your chance to re-adjust! Alright, whoa-o-o-o! Remember, all the good memmories that we've had, and all of those have turned it all to sad-ness, Mmmm, mmm! And you lost your company, and although you look you can not see! You know you can always turn to me! Ye-ah-ah! And when this all is over! When this all is over! I'm gonna make a prediction, and this is what I see, you and me hanging-out together, talking 'bout how we'll be 'Friends 4 Evah!' And all the past won't matter no more! We'll help each other, and that's what friends are for! There will be no more troubles, everyday our happiness will grow and double! That's what I see! You and me girl! Your mother, your step dad, your real dad, and you don't gotta chose a side, no matter what you'll be alright! And I'll be just a like a sister too you, yeah yeah! You can come over when ever you want, and I can share everything I got! Just to prove to you, you can do what you gotta do, girl! Ye-ah-ah!... (Ooooo) (Ooooo) (Ooooo) When this all is over!... And it will be over...

I hope you like it!

no, the title is not too long. it 's a good song too!

[shadowsown88]

That's a really sweet song! =3