Song Writing Club!!

[ChaoBreederRA]

Alright. Sure thing.

[chuhulil]

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

Yay. People who like the same music as I do. Nobody else seemed to like Shinedown.

When I writemore music, I'll be sure first thing to type it here.

Huh, nobody else liked it! What? That makes no sense.

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

Alright, I found a song!

Its called Heights.

Heights.

My friend dared
To take me on a scare
Now I feel sick
Not ready to flick.
My mind is dead.
And I said...

But im afraid of heights
I think I might wet myself
I might!

He told me I was a chicken
And I told him
You must be fakin
Standin on the rooftop
I look and taste my sweat
I jump back on my friend
He fell, WHAT A WRECK!
And I said....

Oh dear
I hope hes alright
he took a fall
I hope it was fun
and alright

and thats abou the time he saw
rain drops on his face
he new he was in heaven
no, it was just my sweat
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I'm not really scared of heights. Much.
Its about you jumping off the roof and how bad sweat tastes.

Enjoy! lol

It is awesome! I just got back from Space Camp and there was this one ride where my friends and I went on and it was awesome except kind of scary cause it went so high and fast that people's shoes fell off.

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

Thanks everyone. I didn't know the songs would get that popular.
o its settled, I write for humor. Serious music just doesn't have the vibe.
Except for hard rock. Pinky and index forever.
Last song for today. One of my personal favs.

THE COMMERCIAL RAP [AWESOME VERSION]

Hey look kids is Billie Maes
Sham Wow says they got no drip
Buy a honda
Robo dog flips

Theres that new toy ship
Under the desk goes the shoe
Buy some penicillin
I ya get flu

People like watching T.V.
People hate the stuff in between
Well, ya know what I say
That its tight and lean
JUST LIKE JIMMY DEAN!

Playing chess
Theres another plastic hill
Wow, a plastic spoon
I think I'll go buy George Forman's Grill.

Wanna buy a house
Maybe some grass
Weed killers a suggestion
for that itchy back [Gold Bond!]


Most people watch T.V.
But never liek it in between
Well ya know what I gotta say
BUY TWENTY FIVE PERCENT OFF HAY.

So that was the Commercial Rap
Go buy D.Q. Frappe
If you didn't like this
GO BUY A HERSHEYS KISS!

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I like commercials. I'm done, but more will come tomorrow.

Enjoy. lol

I litterally fell out of my chair laughing at that one! I don't see how this club ran without you!

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

Thanks guys. If you want me to post more just ask. Its all no prob. I'll be on all night and tomorrow.

I'm glad its making everyone laugh. Its what I wanted and intended it to do.
Well heres another. I just couldn't stop-

Dad Ate Beans Again

We all sat down at the dinner table
Waiting for Dad to bring the food
When he came we sniffed the smell
It smelled like he just took a ***'d.

Now we're running around the room
like crazy geese
trying to get away
from the smell
too sad
the beans went bad
And thats why we will never tell [we'll die by then]

dad said sorry and apologized
I went to get away
ran
went outside

but the smell
floated to the air
too bad it was storming
that how we get global warming

And I told him we gotta have a talk
I sat him down but he just laughed in his mind
He knew this would take our life apart
But he didnt tel anybody that it was a fake ****.
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My dad does it enough! xD

Enjoy.lol

OMG! Now I seriously don't know how we survived all those 450 posts without you!

Originally Posted by Dudeness

Comet, tastes like listerine
Comet, tastes like gasoline
Comet, will make you vomit
So come get your comet and your vomit TODAY

Hehe, my song LOL!

Cuteeeeeee!

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

I you want more just ask. I've got literally hundreds. lol COUGHIMATIMEWASTERCOUGH

Yeah, I just wrote something you probably wouldn't like with your sense of humor but here it is!

Lost

You and her were sittin in a cave,
Watchin the sun and clouds everyone single day,
You couldn't image life,
Without her

Then one day,
She was goin for a drive,
With her parents,
And she was never the same again

Chorus
She was in an accident,
Brain damaged,
She just forgot it all,
Won't be the same again

You wish she was back,
Can't remind her of all the good times,
Worse or better you know she loves you,
But not in the same way

Chorus

But you didn't see,
How happy she could be if you told her,
But it was forbidden,
You tried to stay away

Now whenever she wants you,
You don't know how to react,
All the Army training,
Tells you to run away

She tells you she loves you,
She tells you she's yours,
You tell her you love her,
But you can be there anymore

But one day you bring her back,
To the memories,
And suddenly,
She gets the flashback

Chorus


I was inspired by a book I read when this girl gets into a car crash and she doesn't remember a lot of things about her life before and one thing is a boy named Billy who used to want to marry her but then when she forgot he decided not to remind her to relieve the shock. Then, many many years later he takes her back to the cave and she sees something that makes her remember what happened. And then she finally remembers.

[ChaoBreederRA]

Its good though. Not bad. 9/10.

Going to a soccer game l8r, wont be on.

dont worry its not bad. 10/10

[WilsonGregery]

Originally Posted by chuhulil

Lost

You and her were sittin in a cave,
Watchin the sun and clouds everyone single day,
You couldn't image life,
Without her

Then one day,
She was goin for a drive,
With her parents,
And she was never the same again

Chorus
She was in an accident,
Brain damaged,
She just forgot it all,
Won't be the same again

You wish she was back,
Can't remind her of all the good times,
Worse or better you know she loves you,
But not in the same way

Chorus

But you didn't see,
How happy she could be if you told her,
But it was forbidden,
You tried to stay away

Now whenever she wants you,
You don't know how to react,
All the Army training,
Tells you to run away

She tells you she loves you,
She tells you she's yours,
You tell her you love her,
But you can be there anymore

But one day you bring her back,
To the memories,
And suddenly,
She gets the flashback

Chorus


I was inspired by a book I read when this girl gets into a car crash and she doesn't remember a lot of things about her life before and one thing is a boy named Billy who used to want to marry her but then when she forgot he decided not to remind her to relieve the shock. Then, many many years later he takes her back to the cave and she sees something that makes her remember what happened. And then she finally remembers.

that book must have been so sad! the song kinda made me think of the movie 50 first dates (the name was something like that) where she couldn't remember long term so every day they had to keep reminding her of what had happened the days before.

the song's good Hulie!

[ChaoBreederRA]

Heres a small song, meant to be just ALITTLE funny.

Food Song [Revised And Edited Version]

Yummy yummy yummy, in my tummy
I'm gonna go down
to get some honey

Maybe some cheese
Just no whiz please!
Maybe sausage link
Just make sure they arent pink

Im hungry!
Very very starving!
Im Hungry!
My pizza's name is Marvin [until I ate him]

Im hungry!
There goes Marvin!
Very very starvin'!
Very very starvin'!
ooooooo
ooooooohhhhh
Marvin
Pizza
STARVIN!!!!
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Do you smell bagels?

Enjoy. lol

[muzicfreak]

hahahaha mouse. That's pretty funny

wow hulie that's a really sad song but it's really good

haha that's a good one too.

[WilsonGregery]

Originally Posted by ChaoBreederRA

Heres a small song, meant to be just ALITTLE funny.

Food Song [Revised And Edited Version]

Yummy yummy yummy, in my tummy
I'm gonna go down
to get some honey

Maybe some cheese
Just no whiz please!
Maybe sausage link
Just make sure they arent pink

Im hungry!
Very very starving!
Im Hungry!
My pizza's name is Marvin [until I ate him]

Im hungry!
There goes Marvin!
Very very starvin'!
Very very starvin'!
ooooooo
ooooooohhhhh
Marvin
Pizza
STARVIN!!!!
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Do you smell bagels?

Enjoy. lol

that's funny, i like the 'do you smell bagles?'

[ChaoBreederRA]

I'm gonna start The New Era for me. It's a bunch of really long, awesome songs. Humorous of course.
Heres number 100.

NOTE: THIS SONG ISNT FOR HUMOR.

Auctioned Off

Just another soul to give
Your face was added to my ad lib
Just another soul to give
All I got just to live

AHHH!


In the ships deck
Everyones body is a wreck

Abolitionists
Wil sucede
With their promise
To decieve!

They say every heart
Has its own beat
But mine stopped
And it didn't know how to feat

AHHH!

Just another soul to give
Doing my all to live.

Turning the wheel
Of my own fate
Swimming in water
Bein' slave bait!

Abolitionists
Will sucede
with their promis
to deceive!

Ahh.....ahh...ahhh......AHH!

[5 minute guitar solo]

Just another soul to give.
AHH!
Giving my all to live.
Ahh....
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Inspiration - Every heard the song Citizen Soldier by 3 Doors Down? Thats it.
Its slaves being auctioned off.
Also by Amos Fortune - Free Man
U GOTTA READ THAT BOOK.
Enjoy......

[sarastuff999]

Hello, I'm not gonna do the song I said I'd do right now. I can't think of songs when I force myself to!

Here's my new song: Life's a dream. It's a very settle song, it's not like boring or anything, it keeps pretty much the same beat. It's kinda like just wondering and trying to figure things out.

I'd like to think life's a dream, 'cause of all that's been happenin' happen-in-in'. I'd like to think life's a dream, life's a dream. Because of all it seems, nothing's going right. I'd like to think life's a dream. Is life a dream? Is life a dream? 'Cause who I am, and who I be, I just can't find a place in this world. Is this the real world? Life is going way to fast, should of enjoyed winter while it last-ed. So tell me now, is life a dream? Life's a dr-eam. With all the choices that I make, it all goes wrong, is life fa-ke? Life's a dream life's a dr-eam. Is my real mama gone? 'Cause she's acting so so wrong. Is my family gone? 'cause it seems it's been so long, since. Life's a dream, is life's a dr-eam? Now I gotta get this straight, every time I wake, it's all re-al, I can't believe, I'm dealing with this deal. So now I've realized, I'm awake and this is life, Ohhh, this is life! And all though I wish I wasn't, I'm awake, I'm awake.

Inspiration: Well, with everything that's been going on in my life, I sometimes just think it's a dream. (No, I'm not crazy) LOL! Well, hope you liked it!

I have another one. Please Don't (It Hurts) It's kind of heavy rock, not AS intense, but still... So, I kinda let my anger control this one... LOL!

Waiting here and waiting here, and staring at the sky. (Staring at the skyyyy) All, I know is that something isn't right. (Something isn't riiiight) And when I heard that you were leaving, I just had to cry, (You know?) And months and months, of waiting more, mom your wife came through the door, she said, you wrote a note. I had to read, it was your apolagie. Wasn't sure of what to think! And big surprize, it was fake. And another note came soon, with nothing more than your excuse. It's gone to the point where it's too painful, now all I gotta say is, Please! Don't! It hurts! Please! don't! It hurts! You will never understand, if you mean it than be a man, prove to us that it is true. (Ohhh!) I. Can't. Stand. You! No! I gotta say! What I gotta say! Can't put this any other way! Than, Please! Don't! It hurts! You're so fake, and your so wrong, I kinda knew it all along! I had a warning, your addiction, just let me know! (Kno-o-o-o-ow) So, Please! Don't! It hurts! (Guiter solo) Please! Don't! It hurts! I gotta say! What I gotta say! Can't this any other wa-a-a-a-ay! I gotta say, what I gotta say, can't put this any other way... Please! Don't! It h-urts.

Hope you liked it! Inspiration: My dad kept on sending us letters about how sorry he was for leaving us, and he would say he would like catch up on chiled support and stuff, but he never actually did it. So it would really confuse me, and hurt.

[muzicfreak]

chao- I like it but it's pretty sad

sara- song #1- aww I'm sorry that a lot of not so good stuff has been happening. I hope things get netter soon. but I didn't think your crazy....if you met me, then you'd see crazy LOL I'm JK but I can get pretty wild. song #2- I'm so sorry to hear about that! but it is a good song. I hope your life turns around though. and ya know what? it can! there are people out there who have gotten thier lives turned around. and there are people who don't, but if you trust God and ask him for help, and look to other people too, your life will turn around