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robinbin777 · 11-22-2009, 02:53 PM

Originally Posted by chuhulil

Thank you very much! Have you written any songs recently?

I have. Has anyone here heard of the song "Bat Out of Heck" by Meatloaf? If you have, the intermission part on this song is like the intermission-type thingy on "Bat Out of Heck."

Revolution
[Long guitar & drum opening]
I
People on the streets,
its time to proclaim
your freedom!
[Big rock riff]
Against the doctors,
housewives,
and bioterrists
who treat you like dirt
and something that came
outta a donkey's ***!
II
Come on, let's fight, now.
We'll never win if we never try.
Be the real patriots,
not those New England
Patriots,
but the full-blown,
super cool
patriots!
[Rock solo]
So,
Chorus
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
You get a really nifty
cap and jet pack!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
To end all the injustice,
namecalling and
poking.
Oh! Oh!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
Yeah!
III
Be strong, be tough, be
invincible! (X3)
Take the fight until the end.
They may be strong, but
you're better than
those scum!
Be strong, be tough, be
invincible! (X3)
Oh oh yeah, oh oh yeah!
Let's go, let's go! (X3)
IV
You wanna fight them
from all the times
they've embarresed
you.
All the times they took
the girl from you.
All the times they
mugged 'ya.
All the times they
ate your food.
All the tiiiiiiiiiiimes!!
Chorus
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
You get a really nifty
cap and jet pack!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
To end all the injustice,
namecalling and
poking.
Oh! Oh!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
Yeah!
Intermission
[You and me, outside.
Come on, big boy,
and fight!]
[Ha. I'll knock you
into a coma, squirt.]
[The challenger comes
in with a dive tackle.
The Defender kicks him.
Lying in pain, the Defender
is reaady to beat him senseless.
Oh, but what's this? The
Challenger hits him in
the barn! Ooh, he's going,,
going, gone!]
[Slow band plays throughout.]
V
Anyone's great,
anyone can be the best!
We all must stand together
to defeat the evil
in our world!
Stand tall, stand strong,
stand invincible!
VI
You cannot loose it
if you never try.
Tired of all this ****
everyone gives you,
should give you enough
reason and dedication
to fight and
join the revolution! Ooh!
Chorus
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
You get a really nifty
cap and jet pack!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
To end all the injustice,
namecalling and
poking.
Oh! Oh!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
Yeah!
VII
You know they ain't
the boss of you.
We cannot take it,
must not reculse,
must fight back!
Fight back!
yeah,
fight back!
Chorus
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
You get a really nifty
cap and jet pack!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
To end all the injustice,
namecalling and
poking.
Oh! Oh!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
Yeah!
End
You know to join
the revolution.
(join the revolution!)
Heck, yeah!

Hope you like it,

robinbin777

chuhulil · 11-22-2009, 04:15 PM

Originally Posted by robinbin777

I have. Has anyone here heard of the song "Bat Out of Heck" by Meatloaf? If you have, the intermission part on this song is like the intermission-type thingy on "Bat Out of Heck."

Revolution
[Long guitar & drum opening]
I
People on the streets,
its time to proclaim
your freedom!
[Big rock riff]
Against the doctors,
housewives,
and bioterrists
who treat you like dirt
and something that came
outta a donkey's ***!
II
Come on, let's fight, now.
We'll never win if we never try.
Be the real patriots,
not those New England
Patriots,
but the full-blown,
super cool
patriots!
[Rock solo]
So,
Chorus
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
You get a really nifty
cap and jet pack!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
To end all the injustice,
namecalling and
poking.
Oh! Oh!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
Yeah!
III
Be strong, be tough, be
invincible! (X3)
Take the fight until the end.
They may be strong, but
you're better than
those scum!
Be strong, be tough, be
invincible! (X3)
Oh oh yeah, oh oh yeah!
Let's go, let's go! (X3)
IV
You wanna fight them
from all the times
they've embarresed
you.
All the times they took
the girl from you.
All the times they
mugged 'ya.
All the times they
ate your food.
All the tiiiiiiiiiiimes!!
Chorus
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
You get a really nifty
cap and jet pack!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
To end all the injustice,
namecalling and
poking.
Oh! Oh!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
Yeah!
Intermission
[You and me, outside.
Come on, big boy,
and fight!]
[Ha. I'll knock you
into a coma, squirt.]
[The challenger comes
in with a dive tackle.
The Defender kicks him.
Lying in pain, the Defender
is reaady to beat him senseless.
Oh, but what's this? The
Challenger hits him in
the barn! Ooh, he's going,,
going, gone!]
[Slow band plays throughout.]
V
Anyone's great,
anyone can be the best!
We all must stand together
to defeat the evil
in our world!
Stand tall, stand strong,
stand invincible!
VI
You cannot loose it
if you never try.
Tired of all this ****
everyone gives you,
should give you enough
reason and dedication
to fight and
join the revolution! Ooh!
Chorus
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
You get a really nifty
cap and jet pack!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
To end all the injustice,
namecalling and
poking.
Oh! Oh!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
Yeah!
VII
You know they ain't
the boss of you.
We cannot take it,
must not reculse,
must fight back!
Fight back!
yeah,
fight back!
Chorus
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
You get a really nifty
cap and jet pack!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
To end all the injustice,
namecalling and
poking.
Oh! Oh!
Join the revolution!
(Join the revolution!)
Yeah!
End
You know to join
the revolution.
(join the revolution!)
Heck, yeah!

Hope you like it,

robinbin777

No I haven't heard that song but I like it (especially the chorus) and my cousin was reading it with me and she likes it too.

hannahpengwi · 11-22-2009, 05:12 PM

cool but long lol

Ndoglover · 11-23-2009, 03:03 PM

Finally got a song typed up! Here it is:

Somewhere along the Way
Chorus:
Somewhere along the way I fell in love with you
Somewhere along the way I realized you were too good to be true
Tell me not to say another word
If you think that it's absurd
But somewhere along the way I fell in love with you
Tell me you felt these feelings too
Deep down inside you know it's true
That somewhere along the way you fell in love too

Verse 1:
We started out in a normal way
But then it happened one day
I looked at you through new eyes
And I couldn't believe those lies
I don't know what step is was
But it just know that it's because. . .

Chorus

Verse2:
Now I can't bear you going away
But I knew it would come one day
I had to tell you before you were gone
Or else I know this pain would go on
How do you feel about me now?
Baby tell me how!

Chorus

Verse 3:
Why do you look at me that way ?
Did you not expect what I would say?
If I know you and I do
You feel the same way about me too
Now that I know what you're like
I can finally step up to the mike
And say. . .

Chorus

Bridge:
I figured out I can't live without you
So if you would ask me i'd say "I do"
Now's the time to make a choice
You can hear it in my voice

Chorus

Tell me what you think! And I would love some constructive criticism

muzicfreak · 11-23-2009, 03:44 PM

hello all so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so sorry I havn't been on in forever. There's been a lot going on and it seems I never have time anymore, but I promise I will tryo be more often from now on

WilsonGregery · 11-23-2009, 05:21 PM

Originally Posted by Ndoglover

Finally got a song typed up! Here it is:

Somewhere along the Way
Chorus:
Somewhere along the way I fell in love with you
Somewhere along the way I realized you were too good to be true
Tell me not to say another word
If you think that it's absurd
But somewhere along the way I fell in love with you
Tell me you felt these feelings too
Deep down inside you know it's true
That somewhere along the way you fell in love too

Verse 1:
We started out in a normal way
But then it happened one day
I looked at you through new eyes
And I couldn't believe those lies
I don't know what step is was
But it just know that it's because. . .

Chorus

Verse2:
Now I can't bear you going away
But I knew it would come one day
I had to tell you before you were gone
Or else I know this pain would go on
How do you feel about me now?
Baby tell me how!

Chorus

Verse 3:
Why do you look at me that way ?
Did you not expect what I would say?
If I know you and I do
You feel the same way about me too
Now that I know what you're like
I can finally step up to the mike
And say. . .

Chorus

Bridge:
I figured out I can't live without you
So if you would ask me i'd say "I do"
Now's the time to make a choice
You can hear it in my voice

Chorus

Tell me what you think! And I would love some constructive criticism

i love it! it's great!

Originally Posted by muzicfreak

hello all so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so sorry I havn't been on in forever. There's been a lot going on and it seems I never have time anymore, but I promise I will tryo be more often from now on

hi muzic! sorry that you haven't had time since life's been crazy (or so it sounds). Hope things start to calm down for you!

starwartwilight · 11-23-2009, 05:42 PM

I am remixing This Is Me...from Camp Rock...mixing words....not tune.

I've always been the kind of girl
That ran away
Terrified to show the world
That I'm here to stay
But I've had a dream
Stuck inside of me
I'm gonna let you know, that's right
I'll let you know,
Oh, let you know.

It is true, it is real
It's exactly where I'm supposed to be, now
Gotta let some light, show my face
Now I know, who I am
There's no way to keep it in
No more hiding who I really am
This is real

Do you know what it's like
To be right in the dark
To think about my life
And I'm the special star
Even though I feel
That it's so far away
I have to believe in myself
It's just my way

It is true, it is real
It's exactly where I'm supposed to be, now
Gotta let some light, show my face
Now I know, who I am
There's no way to keep it in
No more hiding who I really am
This is real

You're everything I hear in my head
The thing that keeps me singing
I have to find you, I'm gonna find you
You're the puzzle piece I need
The song inside of me
I have to find you, I'm gonna find you

It is true, it is real
It's exactly where I'm supposed to be, now
Gotta let some light, show my face
Now I know, who I am
There's no way to keep it in
No more hiding who I really am
This is real

You're the puzzle piece I need
The song inside of me (this is real)
You're the everything I hear in my head
The thing that keeps me singing
Now I know, who I am
There's no way to keep it in
No more hiding who I really am
This is real

I now call it this is real.

chuhulil · 11-23-2009, 07:00 PM

Originally Posted by Ndoglover

Finally got a song typed up! Here it is:

Somewhere along the Way
Chorus:
Somewhere along the way I fell in love with you
Somewhere along the way I realized you were too good to be true
Tell me not to say another word
If you think that it's absurd
But somewhere along the way I fell in love with you
Tell me you felt these feelings too
Deep down inside you know it's true
That somewhere along the way you fell in love too

Verse 1:
We started out in a normal way
But then it happened one day
I looked at you through new eyes
And I couldn't believe those lies
I don't know what step is was
But it just know that it's because. . .

Chorus

Verse2:
Now I can't bear you going away
But I knew it would come one day
I had to tell you before you were gone
Or else I know this pain would go on
How do you feel about me now?
Baby tell me how!

Chorus

Verse 3:
Why do you look at me that way ?
Did you not expect what I would say?
If I know you and I do
You feel the same way about me too
Now that I know what you're like
I can finally step up to the mike
And say. . .

Chorus

Bridge:
I figured out I can't live without you
So if you would ask me i'd say "I do"
Now's the time to make a choice
You can hear it in my voice

Chorus

Tell me what you think! And I would love some constructive criticism

That's a good song! I like the Bridge!

Originally Posted by muzicfreak

hello all so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so sorry I havn't been on in forever. There's been a lot going on and it seems I never have time anymore, but I promise I will tryo be more often from now on

S'okay muzic! As long as we know you're ok!

Originally Posted by starwartwilight

I am remixing This Is Me...from Camp Rock...mixing words....not tune.

I've always been the kind of girl
That ran away
Terrified to show the world
That I'm here to stay
But I've had a dream
Stuck inside of me
I'm gonna let you know, that's right
I'll let you know,
Oh, let you know.

It is true, it is real
It's exactly where I'm supposed to be, now
Gotta let some light, show my face
Now I know, who I am
There's no way to keep it in
No more hiding who I really am
This is real

Do you know what it's like
To be right in the dark
To think about my life
And I'm the special star
Even though I feel
That it's so far away
I have to believe in myself
It's just my way

It is true, it is real
It's exactly where I'm supposed to be, now
Gotta let some light, show my face
Now I know, who I am
There's no way to keep it in
No more hiding who I really am
This is real

You're everything I hear in my head
The thing that keeps me singing
I have to find you, I'm gonna find you
You're the puzzle piece I need
The song inside of me
I have to find you, I'm gonna find you

It is true, it is real
It's exactly where I'm supposed to be, now
Gotta let some light, show my face
Now I know, who I am
There's no way to keep it in
No more hiding who I really am
This is real

You're the puzzle piece I need
The song inside of me (this is real)
You're the everything I hear in my head
The thing that keeps me singing
Now I know, who I am
There's no way to keep it in
No more hiding who I really am
This is real

I now call it this is real.

AWESOME remix!