Song Writing Club!!

[pawprint123456]

Originally Posted by SailorHappiny

Welcome to the club. I love the song, but here's one tip. Try putting lines into stanzas. Writing songs is like poetry. Stanzas are groups of lines in the poetry world.

Okay, thanks! I'll think of that when me and my friend are writing our next song!

[SailorHappiny]

Thanks blue and your welcome Kayla.

[pawprint123456]

I might post a new song tomorrow or Wednesday! I might sleep over my friend Summer's {Shes the one I write songs with} and we are gonna write a new song- We want to write one called "stuck in yesterday". . .

[soccerox7]

Originally Posted by SailorHappiny

My fifth song is coming up. Remind me if I put this up already.

In Love With The Boy Next Door

I am in love
With the boy next door
His heart with loving grace

I am in love
With the boy next door
With love should never be

His eyes are so
Beautiful
In dreams of golden seas

If you should know
Of how we meet
Or gazing of his mind

One day he’ll know where I am
I’ll say, “I live on 61 Conington Avenue.”
And he’ll say, “I live on 63.”

Then I have nothing to say
Please don’t go away
From our endless dreams

I am in love
With the boy next door
When nothing but to mind

I am in love
With the boy next door
He’ll finally understand

(Instrumental with humming of the lyrics.)

Then one day at midnight
He’ll come to me
With his arms open wide

Then I’ll come to him
And hope I’ll say
(Spoken) Owen, I love you.

I am in love
With the boy next door
His heart with loving grace

I am in love
With the boy next door
With love that should never be

Or maybe some
Time to come
And courage to be

And in that time
I’ll have what it take
To be with
The boy next door.


This song is about a girl who falls in love with her next door neighbor. His name was Owen. I chose a random name for this. She wonders if the love would come true or not. Will it? You decide.

Beautiful song! The lyrics are so... I don't know but I love them!

[chuhulil]

Originally Posted by SailorHappiny

This is my second song I wrote ever

Broken Heart
(Instrumental)

I can’t believe I failed you
It was just another broken heart

I should’ve told how I felt about you
Even when we’re apart

But even in my dreams I see you now and then
I know some day, I’ll see ya again

It is just another broken heart
And maybe somebody can fix it from two parts

Maybe someone will fix me again
Or fall apart apart in the broken rain

Our love was just a fake
It was a terrible mistake

Another broken heart for me

It was gonna to be good
But I thought your loved me more than you should

You think I’m not enough to fill you heart
So now your mistke broke me apart

It is just another broken heart
And maybe somebody can fix it from two parts

Maybe someone will fix it again
Or fall apart in the broken rain

Our love was just a fake
It was a terrible mistake

Another broken heart for me

The pieces fell to my stomach
How am I gonna cure my sickly ache?

Do you not see what you did to me?
You should’ve broken up don’t you ?

Now you know how I feel
This relationship is for real
Oh no…

(Instrumental)

It is just another broken heart
And maybe somebody can fix it from two parts

Maybe someone will fix it again
Or fall apart in the broken rain

Our love was just fake
I was a terrible mistake

Another broken heart me

(Repeats one more time, then next repeat starts to fade off.)


This song is about a girl who got dumped again. She's saying how her love was never meant to be or somebody will her for real another time. Will she find love? You decide.

I love this song! I am writing a similar one which I will post on Friday.

Originally Posted by Gabz

The Breeze

Do you wonder...
Yeah I wonder
Is it hard to believe
Yes, it's hard to believe

This breeze is so nice
Better than the cold ice
This breeze is unique
Just like bird's beak
The breeze is for me
No one can see
This breeze was made for me

When we cry oh when cry
The breeze will go
I wish I could show
You are my own
You made my breeze
Ya know...

This breeze is so nice
Better than the cold ice
This breeze is unique
Just like bird's beak
The breeze is for me
No one can see
This breeze was made for me

My own....
Mine......
So nice....
This breeze is for me--------

This breeze is so nice
Better than the cold ice
This breeze is unique
Just like bird's beak
The breeze is for me
No one can see
This breeze was made for me

I want this world
I want it all
I want you to see
What the breeze has done to me

This breeze is so nice
Better than the cold ice
This breeze is unique
Just like bird's beak
The breeze is for me
No one can see
This breeze was made for me

I need life and a good song
Everyone can come along
No one can be left out
It's the most wonderful breeze

This breeze is so nice
Better than the cold ice
This breeze is unique
Just like bird's beak
The breeze is for me
No one can see
This breeze was made for me

I like this one. It seems really pretty.

Originally Posted by SailorHappiny

This was my next song. My fourth so do speak.

That’s How We Fell In Love

Na. Na. Na na na na. Na. Na. Na na-ah.

I like the way you make me feel inside
I will remember all those good times
And you’ll always fill my heart with everything that I need.

I liked the way when we first met
You’re gentle and your voice spoke to me
I remember when you gave love a try.

Both of us took a chance
But there was one that was missing

I never realized that there was one thing left
To fit the puzzle for us to be free

It was one look into your eyes
I never felt they looked so good
And we never let ourselves go
And we took our hands one by one

How can we be so wrong
About our love for our freedom
We just clicked
That’s how we fell in love

Na. Na. Na na na na. Na. Na. Na na-ah.

I never knew this could to happen to me
And all this time we were meant to be
Together forever and ever

How did I get this feeling inside me?
How did you get under skin baby?
We were the best of friends

If we had our right
If we had to fight

We’ll be together
For on and on and on

It was one look into your eyes
I never felt they looked so good
And we never let ourselves go
And we took our hands one by one

How can we be so wrong
About our love for our freedom
We just clicked
That’s how we fell in love

(Guitar solo)

I remember how we each other on that day
How can I forget it?
But I don’t think we will

It was one look into your eyes
I never felt they looked so good
And we never let ourselves go
And we took our hands one by one

How can we be so wrong
About our love for our freedom
We just clicked
That’s how we fell in love

Na. Na. Na na na na.
We just clicked
That how we fell in love love love love


This song is about two best friends. They have been friends since the beginning. At some period of time, the fell in love with each. So romantic.

I love it! I think many people can relate to this!

Originally Posted by Gabz

Alone
Verse 1
Talking-Time there's only time.
Get on your shoes
Don't sing the blues
Run and Play
All day

Chorus
It was worth it
when you are all alone
Just singin your song
When you're all alone(x2)


Verse 2
Only me
On the floor
Feels like i am
The center of everything

Chorus
It was worth it
when you all alone
just singin you song
When you're all alone(x2)

Verse 3
Talking-here goes
I start singin
here's my song
All alone yeah
No body to help me
come on the floor you'll see

Chorus
It was worth it
when you all alone
just singin you song
When you're all alone(x2)

Verse 4
You got your time
don't need to make it rhyme
It your song
No body needs to sing along

Chorus (x4)
It was worth it
when you all alone
just singin you song
When you're all alone(x2)

I really like your song!

Originally Posted by muzicfreak

yes they do! I look at the songs, and I'm like, whoa, now if only we were all famous so the world could hear our songs....hmmm don't I wish I had hollywood connections LOL



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I know! Me too! So many people at this club could be famous with their music!

Originally Posted by SailorHappiny

My fifth song is coming up. Remind me if I put this up already.

In Love With The Boy Next Door

I am in love
With the boy next door
His heart with loving grace

I am in love
With the boy next door
With love should never be

His eyes are so
Beautiful
In dreams of golden seas

If you should know
Of how we meet
Or gazing of his mind

One day he’ll know where I am
I’ll say, “I live on 61 Conington Avenue.”
And he’ll say, “I live on 63.”

Then I have nothing to say
Please don’t go away
From our endless dreams

I am in love
With the boy next door
When nothing but to mind

I am in love
With the boy next door
He’ll finally understand

(Instrumental with humming of the lyrics.)

Then one day at midnight
He’ll come to me
With his arms open wide

Then I’ll come to him
And hope I’ll say
(Spoken) Owen, I love you.

I am in love
With the boy next door
His heart with loving grace

I am in love
With the boy next door
With love that should never be

Or maybe some
Time to come
And courage to be

And in that time
I’ll have what it take
To be with
The boy next door.


This song is about a girl who falls in love with her next door neighbor. His name was Owen. I chose a random name for this. She wonders if the love would come true or not. Will it? You decide.

Aw!! That's so sweet!

Originally Posted by SailorHappiny

Thanks for that. My sixth one is coming too.

Bye! Bye!

We must of started something
But I don’t understand
My heart is pumpin’
Lets talk girl to man

So I was thinkin’
That this isn’t gonna last
Trust me
I think it’s time to you know

You’re not good enough
For my personality

For someone with a head
You have lost your mind

All I can say is
Bye! Bye! (2x)

Aow!

My mind is set
But you don’t get it
You don’t understand
Her’s your tip

I was wonderin’
How you would ask
Like a rollin’ stone
That stops at the wall

You want to give
All you got

You wanna stay
But I don’t think so

All I can say is
Bye! Bye! (2x)

Woo-ho! Yeah!

I can’t tell how much
That I hate you
I was your muffin
But you’re buffin’

I’m like a fox
With a broken paw
And I’ll promise for
That last dance

You’re not!
You’re not!

You’re just not good enough
For my personality

For someone with a head
You have lost your mind

You want to give
All you got

You want to stay
But I don’t think so

All I can say is
Bye! Bye! (2x)

(Spoken) I said no! Don’t you ever listen? You’re just not good enough for me!

(Sung) All I can say is
Bye! Bye!

(Spoken) Bye! Bye!

This song is about a girl who is trying to break up with her boyfriend. She puts it easy at first, but it doesn't work. She get stricter each time the song goes through.

I love it! It's very relatable.

Originally Posted by pawprint123456

If you want to join fill out this form:
Username: Pawprint123456
Club Nickname: Kayla
Fave thing on WI: I don't really have a favorite thing. .
Why do you like to write songs: To be honest, I'm not really sure. I write songs with my best friend and we do it for fun and it just relaxes us.
When is your birthday: December 14th.

Welcome to the club Kayla!

Originally Posted by pawprint123456

Ok, heres one of the songs me and my friend wrote-

Rollercoaster ride
(It never ends)

[Verse 1] I thought there was a picec missing in my life. And when I first met you I thought you were that one piece. . . but I. . . was wrong. . BECAUSE!

[Chorus] Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups and downs and ya never know. . . where it's gonna go. Your just like the other guys. You say you love me, but you don't.
It never ends!
{It never ends}
{It never ends}
[repeat until drowned out into 2nd verse.]

[Verse 2] Once I knew better, I tried to hold off. . but theres somethin about you that makes me wanna be around you. . your smile, your laugh, the sound of your voice. . . but I gotta remember. . .

[Chorus] Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups downs and ya never know. . . where it's gonna go. Your just like the other guys. You say you love me. . . when you don't.
It never ends!
{It never ends]
{It never ends}
[repeat until drowned out into 3rd verse.]

[verse 3] And here we are. . Loving each other. . when we shouldnt. . I just gotta let you go. . . but I don't. . .know how. So I gotta. . realize. . .

Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups and downs and you never know. . .

[chorus] Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups and downs and you never know. . . where it's gonna go. Your just like the other guys. You say you love me, but you don't.
It never ends!

[Chorus] Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups and downs and you never know. . . where it's gonna go. Your just like the other guys. You say you love me, but you don't.
It never ends!

Lovin you is like a rollercoaster {coaster. . coaster. . coaster. . .]

That's a wonderful song and sadly, sometimes...it's so true.

Originally Posted by SailorHappiny

This was the seventh song I had written.

Remember Me

It’s been
A long long time

I wonder that
You’ll remember now

You can’t waste it
You can’t spend it

All you have to do
Is to remember

Close your mind
And think about the good times

I don’t know
How long it will take

I just want you
To remember me (2x)

Remember me (2x)

I hope you got it
In that box

If you didn’t
(Spoken) Just forget it!

Maybe cause
You’re not worth it

All you needed
Was to remember

Close your mind
And think about the good times

I don’t know
How long it will take

I just want you
To remember me (2x)

Remember me

How can things get any better
If you can’t remember

Don’t ‘cha know
Everything that we’ve been through?

All those things we did?
You gotta try

All you needed
Was love from me

All you have to do
Is to remember

Close your mind
And think about the good times

I don’t know
How long it will take

I just want you
To remember me (2x)

Remember me
Just remember baby

Remember me

(Spoken) So that’s it then. It’s over.


This song is about a girl and her boyfriend. She came back from who knows where and her boyfriend doesn't who she was. She gets super mad at him. At the end, it's over and done with.

That's really good! I love it!

Club Member Notices

1. Ok, well, I am almost done with my song. The music and editing is still in proccess but I am preplanning on another one about a current life experience. This one is actually for me whereas the one I am about to post is about an experience my cousin had and she asked me to write about so I dd. Well, I can't wait to post and great job on everyone's songs!

2. Please try and see if you can join our website. There is a link at the front page. Don't worry, all the members are WI members and I really hope you guys join. In case this club were to get closed or something we can use that as a backup. It's a lot more organized and easy than here because there are chat threads and newletters that I can send out. It's really fun and if you haven't thought about joining, please think about it. Thanks!

- Hulie

[shadowsown88]

Originally Posted by SailorHappiny

Thanks for that. My sixth one is coming too.

Bye! Bye!

We must of started something
But I don’t understand
My heart is pumpin’
Lets talk girl to man

So I was thinkin’
That this isn’t gonna last
Trust me
I think it’s time to you know

You’re not good enough
For my personality

For someone with a head
You have lost your mind

All I can say is
Bye! Bye! (2x)

Aow!

My mind is set
But you don’t get it
You don’t understand
Her’s your tip

I was wonderin’
How you would ask
Like a rollin’ stone
That stops at the wall

You want to give
All you got

You wanna stay
But I don’t think so

All I can say is
Bye! Bye! (2x)

Woo-ho! Yeah!

I can’t tell how much
That I hate you
I was your muffin
But you’re buffin’

I’m like a fox
With a broken paw
And I’ll promise for
That last dance

You’re not!
You’re not!

You’re just not good enough
For my personality

For someone with a head
You have lost your mind

You want to give
All you got

You want to stay
But I don’t think so

All I can say is
Bye! Bye! (2x)

(Spoken) I said no! Don’t you ever listen? You’re just not good enough for me!

(Sung) All I can say is
Bye! Bye!

(Spoken) Bye! Bye!

This song is about a girl who is trying to break up with her boyfriend. She puts it easy at first, but it doesn't work. She get stricter each time the song goes through.

Nice job. I like the attitude the girl has in the song!

Originally Posted by pawprint123456

If you want to join fill out this form:
Username: Pawprint123456
Club Nickname: Kayla
Fave thing on WI: I don't really have a favorite thing. .
Why do you like to write songs: To be honest, I'm not really sure. I write songs with my best friend and we do it for fun and it just relaxes us.
When is your birthday: December 14th.

Welcome, Kayla! x3

Originally Posted by pawprint123456

Ok, heres one of the songs me and my friend wrote-

Rollercoaster ride
(It never ends)

[Verse 1] I thought there was a picec missing in my life. And when I first met you I thought you were that one piece. . . but I. . . was wrong. . BECAUSE!

[Chorus] Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups and downs and ya never know. . . where it's gonna go. Your just like the other guys. You say you love me, but you don't.
It never ends!
{It never ends}
{It never ends}
[repeat until drowned out into 2nd verse.]

[Verse 2] Once I knew better, I tried to hold off. . but theres somethin about you that makes me wanna be around you. . your smile, your laugh, the sound of your voice. . . but I gotta remember. . .

[Chorus] Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups downs and ya never know. . . where it's gonna go. Your just like the other guys. You say you love me. . . when you don't.
It never ends!
{It never ends]
{It never ends}
[repeat until drowned out into 3rd verse.]

[verse 3] And here we are. . Loving each other. . when we shouldnt. . I just gotta let you go. . . but I don't. . .know how. So I gotta. . realize. . .

Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups and downs and you never know. . .

[chorus] Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups and downs and you never know. . . where it's gonna go. Your just like the other guys. You say you love me, but you don't.
It never ends!

[Chorus] Lovin you is like a rollercoaster ride. It has it's ups and downs and you never know. . . where it's gonna go. Your just like the other guys. You say you love me, but you don't.
It never ends!

Lovin you is like a rollercoaster {coaster. . coaster. . coaster. . .]

Nice job.

Originally Posted by SailorHappiny

This was the seventh song I had written.

Remember Me

It’s been
A long long time

I wonder that
You’ll remember now

You can’t waste it
You can’t spend it

All you have to do
Is to remember

Close your mind
And think about the good times

I don’t know
How long it will take

I just want you
To remember me (2x)

Remember me (2x)

I hope you got it
In that box

If you didn’t
(Spoken) Just forget it!

Maybe cause
You’re not worth it

All you needed
Was to remember

Close your mind
And think about the good times

I don’t know
How long it will take

I just want you
To remember me (2x)

Remember me

How can things get any better
If you can’t remember

Don’t ‘cha know
Everything that we’ve been through?

All those things we did?
You gotta try

All you needed
Was love from me

All you have to do
Is to remember

Close your mind
And think about the good times

I don’t know
How long it will take

I just want you
To remember me (2x)

Remember me
Just remember baby

Remember me

(Spoken) So that’s it then. It’s over.


This song is about a girl and her boyfriend. She came back from who knows where and her boyfriend doesn't who she was. She gets super mad at him. At the end, it's over and done with.

x3 Awesome job!

[SailorHappiny]

Thanks for the complements guys. I really like the fact that my songs are so good.

[SailorHappiny]

This is my eighth song ever. It's about a girl named Cait or Caitlin (Your choice) and she became famous world wide. She tells how by telling the story about her hero. The title will show about it.

Michael Jackson

(Spoken) Caitlin! Caitlin! What’s the secret to your career? Is there a secret?

I wouldn’t take it as a secret. There was one person honestly. This is my story and his song.

(Sung) It was long ago in the state of New Jersey
My face was down and red as can be
I always saw the world as my nightmare
‘Til my voice hit the sky

I was walking home from the snack shop
With my heart in broken pains
One man saw my child eyes
And took me to his wing yeah

It was the start
To the spotlight
To my dreams
It gave me flight

I found where my mind is
It gave me memories
To remember the time that
Michael Jackson came to my life

(Spoken) I got it true there. There’s more to it too. Just listen.

(Sung) He took me to the center of California
My face appeared on the billboard screens
The butterflies fluttered in my gut
But it was me with a heart in my dream

One day I gotten so teary eyed
From the moments I had there
Michael took me that I got sick
But his love was always near

It was the start
To the spotlight
To my dreams
It gave me flight

I found where my mind is
It gave me memories
To remember the time that
Michael Jackson
Came to my…

Now I feel
Now I see
How it can’t be over
And how I can’t be
There are tears on my fingers
Oh no

(Spoken) If he was here right now, what do you think he’ll say?

I think he would’ve said, “Cait, I’m so proud and I love you so much.” That’s what I think and then I’ll say…

(Sung) It was the start
To the spotlight
To my dreams
It gave my flight

I found where my mind is
It gave my memories
To remember the time that
Michael Jackson
Came to my life

Came to my life (2x)

To remember the time
That Michael Jackson
Came to my
Life

(Spoken) That’s the story. Thank you and keep the faith!

[SailorHappiny]

This was the ninth song I ever wrote in my life as a singer to be.

Me

(Spoken) Just listen.
I woke up that mornin’
Thought I was goin’ nowhere

Another disaster in my life
‘Til you met me right here
I know that everything’s gonna be okay now

If that love was I have
From one to two
But that did hold enough
‘Til skies turned blue

There were many other ones
From that knife
But from million to one
To the end of life

And I was sayin’ yeah yeah yea-yea- yeah

(Spoken) There were 1 out of 20 of others, but only you were shined by God’s light.

Honey, out of that sea of people, I think the only thing you saw was…
(Sung) Me

Now that the worst was over
I don’t know what to do now

For the rest of the world
The only thing now is you girl

And you think that everything’s gonna be alright babe

If that love was I have
From one to two
But that did hold enough
‘Til skies turned blue

There were many other ones
From that knife
But from million to one
To the end of life

And I was sayin’ yeah yeah yea-yea- yeah

(Spoken) It felt like everything was gonna fall apart. Then, I say your face and changed my mind.
All that and the only thing you saw…
(Sung) Me

This song’s for the lovers that agree and say yeah yeah yeah yeah
This song’s for the lovers that also agree and say yea-yea-yea yeah yeah.
This song’s for the lovers that are sayin’ ooooooo-oh yeah-hah oooooooo-oh yea-hah

If that love was I have
From one to two
But that did hold enough
‘Til skies turned blue

There were many other ones
From that knife
But from million to one
To the end of life


It's about a girl and guy and they describe how they chose each other. It was romantic I can tell you.

[rodentyawn]

I love all of your songs! Sorry I don't have names. THere were so many. I want to write one but I'm trying to figure out how to express it