Song Writing Club!!

[muzicfreak]

Originally Posted by dizzyfish101

THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENTS ON MY OTHER SONG! : )

I wonder if you like my new song everyone! ♥ Here it is :

A Boy and a Girl - C (Ciara, 2009, (C) )

Beginning:

Whoa,
no.
I just can't say it..
But..

Verse 1:

Every
single
time
You hold
my hand
I feel the sparks,
the rush, where I stand
Please
Tell me how to say
THIS, oh no...
Well, I guess,
here goes...

- CHORUS -

Can a boy
Love a girl?
Can he shake
her world?
will The sun
and the moon
Be toge-ther
soon
Because I really gotta see
That the boy truly loves me

- CHORUS END -

Verse 2:

Please say
if you don't want any more
Because if so
I'll walk
out
the door
And the stars
and the clouds
will collide and it's just
so loud
Cause they don't want
boy and girl to be apart!

- CHORUS -

Spoiler: show

Can a boy
Love a girl?
Can he shake
her world?
will The sun
and the moon
Be toge-ther
soon
Because I really gotta see
That the boy truly loves me

- CHORUS END -

Bridge ( a bit slower than the rest of the song ) :

I know that you
know the answer, yeah
Please, sweetie,
tell me if you caaaaan
And yeah, when it's said and doooonee
In pain... will I be the one?

Verse 3:

But no, I'm sure
that the boy
loves the girl
And yeah, I am so sure,
that the boy will SHAKE her world.

But still I ask you agaaaaaaain...

- CHORUS -

Spoiler: show

Can a boy
Love a girl?
Can he shake
her world?
will The sun
and the moon
Be toge-ther
soon
Because I really gotta see
That the boy truly loves me

- CHORUS END -

And yeaaaaaah, the boy truly loves me. ♥

- Ciara, Copyright 2009 (C)

By the way everyone, I hope that no one will claim this as their own :#)

that is really good song! it sounds so cool!

Originally Posted by WilsonGregery

i like it.



you'll get to show it to him, i know you will!



i really like it, it's very good.



lovely



it'll come to you when it comes to you. don't try too hard, just let it flow... even if you just write down lines here and there that pop into your head, at least you're writing. it never hurts to just 'write' to get the flow started... then again... free write applies more to stories than songs maybe, unless you're trying to write about something specific, like an event, maybe if you just brain stormed tried to remember things that you acutally felt or what comes to you mind when you think of the subject...

this may not make sense, it is early in the AM too, but i thought i'd try to help!

yeah maybe next week I can show him.....I hope so

Originally Posted by ChihuahuaGrl16

wow good song dizzy
everyone like left my thread but thats okayi'm not really on lately anyway but i am so sorry but i just can't seem to write a song...i've hated every single line that i've come up with because it just doens't seem to fit right...my mom told me that i'm too much of a perfectionist (which she's right) but i just can't seem to get the hang of this...sorry

that's all right you will some time! I was like that for a wile and some songs you just feel so much that you can't choose the right words

Originally Posted by mouse4

Username:mouse4
Club Nickname: Mouse\Mousie
Fave thing on WI: the Role-Playing Section
Why do you like to write songs: Express my self

(c)Mouse4\Elizabeth
I made up part of a song..
Verse One:
Last week,
I saw,
You an' her,
holdin' hands,
You glanced around,
nervously-y
.....
And theeeen you saw me-e
...
You saw my tears,
I saw your fears,
that I would end it right then,
and you were right.
Your fears were true,
So now baby there's no me and you!

Verse Two:
The next week,
after I'd,
ended it with you,
I saw you with,
anothe-er
different girl!
I got my phone,
and called your
other girl,
and told her all about you!
About your lies,
and the new girl,
and now she knows every-thi-ing too
.....
And then she showed
u-u-up!
......
You saw her tears,
She saw your fears,
that I would end it right there and then,
and you were right.
Your fears were true,
So now baby there's no her and you!

Hi mouse welcome to the club!
I love your song....did something like that actually happen to you?

[chuhulil]

Originally Posted by muzicfreak

your grounded I hear that to much but your right we should stop talking about our moms

yes your avvie is really cool lissy, and I like the jonas brothers

I know, it is awesome and I am not even the biggest JoBros fan! But their music is ok but I just think that they are not my type that much!

Originally Posted by dizzyfish101

THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENTS ON MY OTHER SONG! : )

I wonder if you like my new song everyone! ♥ Here it is :

A Boy and a Girl - C (Ciara, 2009, (C) )

Beginning:

Whoa,
no.
I just can't say it..
But..

Verse 1:

Every
single
time
You hold
my hand
I feel the sparks,
the rush, where I stand
Please
Tell me how to say
THIS, oh no...
Well, I guess,
here goes...

- CHORUS -

Can a boy
Love a girl?
Can he shake
her world?
will The sun
and the moon
Be toge-ther
soon
Because I really gotta see
That the boy truly loves me

- CHORUS END -

Verse 2:

Please say
if you don't want any more
Because if so
I'll walk
out
the door
And the stars
and the clouds
will collide and it's just
so loud
Cause they don't want
boy and girl to be apart!

- CHORUS -

Spoiler: show

Can a boy
Love a girl?
Can he shake
her world?
will The sun
and the moon
Be toge-ther
soon
Because I really gotta see
That the boy truly loves me

- CHORUS END -

Bridge ( a bit slower than the rest of the song ) :

I know that you
know the answer, yeah
Please, sweetie,
tell me if you caaaaan
And yeah, when it's said and doooonee
In pain... will I be the one?

Verse 3:

But no, I'm sure
that the boy
loves the girl
And yeah, I am so sure,
that the boy will SHAKE her world.

But still I ask you agaaaaaaain...

- CHORUS -

Spoiler: show

Can a boy
Love a girl?
Can he shake
her world?
will The sun
and the moon
Be toge-ther
soon
Because I really gotta see
That the boy truly loves me

- CHORUS END -

And yeaaaaaah, the boy truly loves me. ♥

- Ciara, Copyright 2009 (C)

By the way everyone, I hope that no one will claim this as their own :#)

It's ok. We all post and no one will claim it. But that would be a good song to post on our album thread. Don't worry though I will make sure that all the credit for this song will be given to you. Oh, and second Love Song! Woohoo!

Originally Posted by ChihuahuaGrl16

wow good song dizzy
everyone like left my thread but thats okayi'm not really on lately anyway but i am so sorry but i just can't seem to write a song...i've hated every single line that i've come up with because it just doens't seem to fit right...my mom told me that i'm too much of a perfectionist (which she's right) but i just can't seem to get the hang of this...sorry

I know you may be a perfectionist but it is ok if you don't like your song. Just post it cuz we might be able to help you with your song!

Originally Posted by WilsonGregery

i like it.



you'll get to show it to him, i know you will!



i really like it, it's very good.



lovely



it'll come to you when it comes to you. don't try too hard, just let it flow... even if you just write down lines here and there that pop into your head, at least you're writing. it never hurts to just 'write' to get the flow started... then again... free write applies more to stories than songs maybe, unless you're trying to write about something specific, like an event, maybe if you just brain stormed tried to remember things that you acutally felt or what comes to you mind when you think of the subject...

this may not make sense, it is early in the AM too, but i thought i'd try to help!

End yeah dizzy you should totally show it to him. I showed him mine and he said it was awesome! It makes you feel really happy.

Originally Posted by mouse4

Username:mouse4
Club Nickname: Mouse\Mousie
Fave thing on WI: the Role-Playing Section
Why do you like to write songs: Express my self

(c)Mouse4\Elizabeth
I made up part of a song..
Verse One:
Last week,
I saw,
You an' her,
holdin' hands,
You glanced around,
nervously-y
.....
And theeeen you saw me-e
...
You saw my tears,
I saw your fears,
that I would end it right then,
and you were right.
Your fears were true,
So now baby there's no me and you!

Verse Two:
The next week,
after I'd,
ended it with you,
I saw you with,
anothe-er
different girl!
I got my phone,
and called your
other girl,
and told her all about you!
About your lies,
and the new girl,
and now she knows every-thi-ing too
.....
And then she showed
u-u-up!
......
You saw her tears,
She saw your fears,
that I would end it right there and then,
and you were right.
Your fears were true,
So now baby there's no her and you!

Oh, if this actually happened to you then I am sooooo sorry. That boy should be thrown in love jail. He broke two hearts!

Originally Posted by shadowsown88

Awesome idea!! I'll PM ya mine right away.



That's a really good song! ^^ It's like got that perfect romancey-ness to it.



Thanks!



Mousie!

That is a really good song! You should definitely finish it!

XP Well guys, I finished the other song I wrote, but right now my flash drive is having issues so I'm not sure when I'll be able to post it.

Ok, cool. Thanks for telling us. Oh and all the album songs have to be PMed to me by March 27th. Because that is when I am making the album

Originally Posted by muzicfreak

that is really good song! it sounds so cool!

yeah maybe next week I can show him.....I hope so


that's all right you will some time! I was like that for a wile and some songs you just feel so much that you can't choose the right words


Hi mouse welcome to the club!
I love your song....did something like that actually happen to you?

Oh, I better go add mouse now!

Hulie's Corner:
Yeah, I am so excited for the new album! It is going to be fun. Please remember that all songs have to be in my March 27th since that is when I am making the poll for theme song and I hope everyone knows that all your songs will be given credit for all your songs. Now, I know you are all asking what our theme song is and I will be creating a thread with all of our songs on it, asking which one should be our theme song, or main song. Remember, you don't have to vote for a song that is yours. Make sure you vote for the song that you think would send a good message and will not send a bad message. Remember, the theme song for this album will not be the same as next month's album so just because your's doesn't win this time, you still have a chance. None of the Love Songs will be on the poll for theme song because I want to see how people react to them before putting them on the thread. If you have any questions feel free to ask

[tinydancer19]

I will join! Chuhulil VM'd me saying I could. I will post my song ASAP

[mouse4]

Yea, it kinda did happen to me
Glad you liked the song!

[muzicfreak]

welcome tinydancer!
I'm so sorry to hear that, mouse! Well he's a jerk and just know that he isn't worth your time anymore unless he reallt tries to turn himself around

[laurencyrus]

OMG I'm getting so out of touch with the club, sorry! You guys sure are busy! So what's all this about an album? Could I join in? Is there a theme I should write about? Sorry I have been off for a while - I've been busy with school. I will try to dream up a new song sometime tonight, but it may not be that good. xD You guys can help me out with them as much as you want - I'm kinda a newbie at songwriting. Thanks!

[mouse4]

Yeah, I guess. Thanks Music.

[shadowsown88]

The album is something Hulie is putting together, an album of our songs. You have to PM her any songs you want on it by March 27, and there'll be a theme song that we all vote on. There's no particular theme; it's just a collection of songs.

[chuhulil]

Originally Posted by tinydancer19

I will join! Chuhulil VM'd me saying I could. I will post my song ASAP

Thanks tinydancer19. Um could you post a nickname that we could call you here? I can't wait to hear your song!

Originally Posted by mouse4

Yea, it kinda did happen to me
Glad you liked the song!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, I am so sorry!!!!! That guys is such a jerk. I would never give him a second of my life again!

Originally Posted by muzicfreak

welcome tinydancer!
I'm so sorry to hear that, mouse! Well he's a jerk and just know that he isn't worth your time anymore unless he reallt tries to turn himself around

I agree! That is just horrible what he did. Mean, evil, horrid!

Originally Posted by laurencyrus

OMG I'm getting so out of touch with the club, sorry! You guys sure are busy! So what's all this about an album? Could I join in? Is there a theme I should write about? Sorry I have been off for a while - I've been busy with school. I will try to dream up a new song sometime tonight, but it may not be that good. xD You guys can help me out with them as much as you want - I'm kinda a newbie at songwriting. Thanks!

That's ok! I don't mind if people are busy in school because school is really important so you should be concentrating on that more than this. Yeah, this album is a collection of our songs. Any songs that you have written that you want to be on the album you can PM me so that I can merge them into one huge album by us. Don't worrt, all songs that you have written you will recieve credit for. Then all the songs that I have gotten will be put onto a poll to be voted on for the one who has the best message.

Originally Posted by mouse4

Yeah, I guess. Thanks Music.

I am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry about that again. I hate horrible heartbrakes!

Originally Posted by shadowsown88

The album is something Hulie is putting together, an album of our songs. You have to PM her any songs you want on it by March 27, and there'll be a theme song that we all vote on. There's no particular theme; it's just a collection of songs.

Thanks for explaining shadow!

[muzicfreak]

Originally Posted by laurencyrus

OMG I'm getting so out of touch with the club, sorry! You guys sure are busy! So what's all this about an album? Could I join in? Is there a theme I should write about? Sorry I have been off for a while - I've been busy with school. I will try to dream up a new song sometime tonight, but it may not be that good. xD You guys can help me out with them as much as you want - I'm kinda a newbie at songwriting. Thanks!

I am kind of out of touch too so don't worry

Originally Posted by shadowsown88

The album is something Hulie is putting together, an album of our songs. You have to PM her any songs you want on it by March 27, and there'll be a theme song that we all vote on. There's no particular theme; it's just a collection of songs.

thanks for explaining

Originally Posted by chuhulil

Thanks tinydancer19. Um could you post a nickname that we could call you here? I can't wait to hear your song!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, I am so sorry!!!!! That guys is such a jerk. I would never give him a second of my life again!

I agree! That is just horrible what he did. Mean, evil, horrid!

That's ok! I don't mind if people are busy in school because school is really important so you should be concentrating on that more than this. Yeah, this album is a collection of our songs. Any songs that you have written that you want to be on the album you can PM me so that I can merge them into one huge album by us. Don't worrt, all songs that you have written you will recieve credit for. Then all the songs that I have gotten will be put onto a poll to be voted on for the one who has the best message.

I am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry about that again. I hate horrible heartbrakes!

Thanks for explaining shadow!

school is important and thanks for clearing more of the album thing up because I wasn't even sure it I knew what it was