My Hand-Drawn Manga Drawing(s)! Only 1 so far.... Come give me constructive criticism!

[RetroBean]

I agree, the clothes are amazing!

Here are some more tips to help you:

-When you shade in the hair (using pencil, mind you), make sure you draw some darker lines in between the light ones, so there's definition.
-There's an excellent youtube artist who does videos on this sort of thing, he's really helped me. If you want to check it out, his username is markcrilley.
-Draw your lines as quickly as you can, because the faster you draw them the more effortless they look.
-Sharp lines look amazing. The sharper an edge in manga the better.

Hope I helped!
These are a terrific start, and I hope you keep drawing and practicing!

[Lunagrrl]

I'm glad my advice helped. Keep it up, I'd like to see more from you.

Thanks for the rep!

[RexfordButchBD]

Not bad!
A little constructive criticism: Try making the eyes symmetric, the same size, etc.
Nice outfits though!

[leevik]

Awesome id give it a 100% LOL

[CHARC0AL]

I like them! But since you want feedback then i think the eyes can do a little working with. thats all. I stink at drawing eyes!

[Kirbygirl]

Awesome! Good luck on your thread! =D

[obsessive]

i really don't want to take your positive attitude away from you! but, the anatomy is off, the hands are too small, the head is odd, and the eyes are... irregular. also a pointer:: if you look at your character's legs, you will notice there is no definition to it. you need curves and muscles to break apart the body, such as seeing the knees of your person. whilst talking of legs, you should try to enlarge their feet. if you look in some manga books, you will notice some characters have abnormally large feet. if you keep practicing at it, eventually you will be like mark crilley or something please don't take any of my critism the wrong way, i'm just being honest.

[sunshine_girl]

I think you've done a very nice job and I'm not much of an artist, so this is better then anything I could do. Just keep practicing and working with a pencil would make a difference. The point is finer and when you make a mistake you can erase it. The hands need a little work to look more real, but hands are difficult for a lot of artists. I would rate these 8.5/10 and I think that's very good. I hope I n no way hurt your feelings and I strongly encourage you to keep practicing!

[Pistachio96]

Great job xP.
Next time, as said earlier, try pencil.
You can erase your mistakes. [:

♥Tash