My Hand-Drawn Manga Drawing(s)! Only 1 so far.... Come give me constructive criticism!

[missy44]

Hey Peeps!

I have always wanted to post in this section so here i am doing it. Anyways, I might take requests soon, but right now I'm just a beginner so I just want feedback. If you really want one though you can describe it and I'll do it. ^_^ Ok so here "it" is!



Please comment and rate!

P.S. More coming soon, I'm just too lazy to scan! XD

-missy

[Coolgirl374]

cute!
Great job I love it 10/10!
I would suggest using pencils too.

[missy44]

thanks so much! i'll try using pencils!

[Lunagrrl]

It's really good, but I can see a few mistakes. Don't worry - everyone makes them, even me.

Make sure eyes are always the same size and parallel to each other.
Hair should be more realistic. Like, the edges shouldn't be the same; be creative and make them all different.
And, a body is 7-8 heads high. Yours is a little less. Everyone makes this mistake, it's fine. Just pointing it out.

I'll give you a 7.5/10. Pretty good. Keep it up. I really like their clothes, I'm never creative enough to design clothes.

Sorry if I sound rude, I guess that's just my way of giving constructive crits.

[bubblypop97]

♥♥♥I LOVE IT!!!! ♥♥♥

yeah i think pencil would help so you can erase if you mess up
and maybe work on the hands (i know i have to try like 10 times before i get mine to look decent)

[pinkcrayon4]

Very nice Especially the clothes. I always have a hard time with costume design. Only I'd hate drawing with pen xD. Nice job again!!!!!

[missy44]

Originally Posted by Lunagrrl

It's really good, but I can see a few mistakes. Don't worry - everyone makes them, even me.

Make sure eyes are always the same size and parallel to each other.
Hair should be more realistic. Like, the edges shouldn't be the same; be creative and make them all different.
And, a body is 7-8 heads high. Yours is a little less. Everyone makes this mistake, it's fine. Just pointing it out.

I'll give you a 7.5/10. Pretty good. Keep it up. I really like their clothes, I'm never creative enough to design clothes.

Sorry if I sound rude, I guess that's just my way of giving constructive crits.

no thanks! it helps alot! i agree. i'm getting better though.

[missy44]

Originally Posted by bubblypop97

♥♥♥I LOVE IT!!!! ♥♥♥

yeah i think pencil would help so you can erase if you mess up
and maybe work on the hands (i know i have to try like 10 times before i get mine to look decent)

hands are so hard to draw!

[missy44]

Originally Posted by pinkcrayon4

Very nice Especially the clothes. I always have a hard time with costume design. Only I'd hate drawing with pen xD. Nice job again!!!!!

thanks! and clothes are hard to think of. it's hard to make them look cool because they always come out lame! XD

[missy44]

btw rep for all of you!