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Old 02-27-2009, 02:35 PM   #1
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Default ~*~ Valentine's Day Poems ~*~ Yes, I know it isn't Valentine's anymore, but who cares, right?

So... yes. I have decided to make a thread with a collection of Valentine's Day poems, which we can see from the title of the thread. Anyway, the more people who post, the more poems I write and put on this post, so post away, people!


I gave him a rose
(It was really my heart)
I watched as he laughed
And tore it apart

Now I’m left cold
Empty and hollow
My dreams have been shattered
Nothing left to follow

(okay, this is one I'll be adding to for a while. Any time I think of another line or verse, I'll add it. IDEAS APPRECIATED. Post 'em, pm 'em, post 'em on my profile... you get the idea. )

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He reached for my hand
All smiles and laughter
If only I'd known
What would happen after
I gave him my heart
He looked at it then at me
And then he said
"Girl, you're kidding me"
He threw it away
And I fell to the floor
He laughed in my face
As he walked out the door


~~~

"This Valentine's Day"


Candies and Cookies
Star Wars and Wookies
Ribbons and Bows
Wrestling Shows
How will you spend this Valentine’s Day?
Smiling and Laughing
Neg’ing or Aff’ing
Watching an Ape
Using Duct Tape
See your friends; run and shout hey!
Watch One TV Show, Maybe a Few
Drinking Three Bottles of Mountain Dew
Baking a Cake
Pretend to be a Steak
So many choices to make today
Run Wild with Friends
Don’t Think ‘Bout how it Ends
Hold the One You Love Near
Resolve not to Shed a Tear
How will you spend this love-filled day?
Happy and Silly
Smelling a Lily
Watching Your Crushes
Or Washing Your Crutches
The choice is yours; so don’t delay
Singing Praise to the Lord
Eating a Gourd
Staple your Finger
Laugh at Memories that Linger
And you’ll have the greatest Valentine’s Day!

~~~

You smile at me
I smile back
Your grip on my hand
Goes just a little bit slack
This feeling running through me
I feel like flying
I feel so free
You hold me tight while I drown
In your eyes, in your voice
You get what you want
I don't get a choice
I feel like I'm dying
But I feel so alive
This moment with you
I now feel guilt
"This isn't right"
A voice tells me
"This is so right"
You reassure me
It's like warm milk
Your voice, to me
It heals my wounds
Solves my tragedies
Next thing I know
You're gone
It's over
And I'm left standing in supreme wonder
I never knew I could feel
So guilty and happy
At the same time
I want you to be
Forever mine
But at the same time...
...Is there any escape?





---------- PinkaPommaMomma added 784 Minutes and 14 Seconds later ----------

Oh, come on, people! Please post? See, I asked nicely.

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Old 02-27-2009, 03:39 PM   #2
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Default Re: ~*~ Valentine's Day Poems ~*~ Yes, I know it isn't Valentine's anymore, but who cares, right?

Those are great poems! The first 2 that you posted was realing showing your emotions when a guy broke up with you. It touched my heart! Keep writing!
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Old 02-27-2009, 04:37 PM   #3
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Default Re: ~*~ Valentine's Day Poems ~*~ Yes, I know it isn't Valentine's anymore, but who cares, right?

Thanks! Actually, I've never had a breakup. I just write how I feel. Although I have had a sort of breakup, I guess, and this one dude sort of haunts my memories, but I've never offically broken up with someone.
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Old 02-27-2009, 05:23 PM   #4
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Weird. I've had a few boys, but I don't have any now. And that's pretty weird about the haunting memory thingy. So are you working on a poem? I have a few ideas: You can do one on all the candy that you get. Or maybe first kiss... I don't know. I just like came up with it.
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Old 02-27-2009, 05:31 PM   #5
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Default Re: ~*~ Valentine's Day Poems ~*~ Yes, I know it isn't Valentine's anymore, but who cares, right?

I think the first kiss one is a great idea! I'll try that one.
Yes, haunting memories are creepeh... especially since sometimes I think he's a jerk and I hate him, other times I cry 'cause I miss him so much. *sigh* Ah wellz. I'll get crackin' on that poem!
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Old 02-27-2009, 05:59 PM   #6
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I can sooo relate to the first one...
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Old 02-27-2009, 06:03 PM   #7
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Default Re: ~*~ Valentine's Day Poems ~*~ Yes, I know it isn't Valentine's anymore, but who cares, right?

Really? Oh that last one I wrote spur-of-the-moment. O_o'
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Old 02-27-2009, 06:19 PM   #8
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That one that you just made is brilliant!!! I just can't understand how you make these poems so quick! It would practically take me like a day to make one! Wanna be friends?
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Old 02-27-2009, 06:51 PM   #9
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Default Re: ~*~ Valentine's Day Poems ~*~ Yes, I know it isn't Valentine's anymore, but who cares, right?

Sure!! When I get inspiration, I write. Same with my books and songs.
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awesome! that's so good!
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