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Old 10-20-2009, 10:25 PM   #1
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Are You Thinking What I'm Thinking?
★☆ Book Two ★☆
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★☆ Chapter 1 ★☆
By Soccorox7

“I think we should burn it,” suggested Cassidy.
Hannah stared at the gargantuan mountain of white in the middle of Cassidy’s large room. Old quizzes, essays, and class notes from the previous year made up the large pile. “I don’t think this is such a good idea. What if you need any of this later on or something?”
“I’m never going to need this again, Han. Believe me! A bonfire party would be fun, actually…”
Hannah jokingly palmed her forehead to which Cassidy responded to with an eye-roll. The s sat belly-down on the fluffy white duvet atop Cassidy’s large bed. Hannah stroked the fluffy material and wondered how her friend managed to stay cool even underneath a six-foot-deep pool of fluff in the middle of June.
“What can I say?” Cassidy said out loud. “I’m just a generally cool person!”
Hannah gave her a playful shove and laughed. “I didn’t mean that way!”
“You need to think more clearly. I can hardly understand your thoughts nowadays,” Cassidy chided. She jumped up off of the bed, making a light thud as her feet hit the floor. She turned to her iHome to change the song from A Rocket to the Moon’s “Not a Second to Waste” to Brokencyde’s “Freaxxx”. The transition startled Hannah a little, but she was beginning to get used to Cassidy’s diverse musical taste.
“Yeah, I’ve just been thinking about a lot lately. My thoughts are no doubt all jumbled up,” said Hannah.
“What’s to think about? It’s summer! We’ve both got gorgeous boyfriends and hours upon hours to burn! Not to mention we can read minds! How much better can it get?”
A sudden feeling of excitement interrupted the s. No doubt Cassidy’s mom was giddily shuffling down the hallway. Not surprisingly, the door flung open moments later to show Mrs. Starr clutching a brochure in her hand as if it was a winning lottery ticket, a huge grin pasted to her face. “Va-shun-ha-way-vil-be…” and other unidentifiable single-syllable sounds. The s exchanged glances, confirming that all they could both hear was radio static and bits of words.
“Guess what, g.irls?!” she squealed. “Oh, wait, I suppose you two have already figured it out…”
“What is it, mom?” asked Cassidy.
“Didn’t you s already hear my-”
“Never mind that,” Cassidy interrupted. “What’s so exciting?”
“You guys will just love this! I just got off the phone with your parents, Hannah. They both agreed to let you go on vacation with our family this summer! Isn’t that wonderful?!”
“Ugh, Mom. No offence, but Hannah’s not going to want to come with us camping this year. It’s so buggy and boring…”
“Oh, we’re not going there this summer! We’re going to Maui!”
“What!?” Hannah heard herself gasp.
The g.irls’ jaws dropped. They looked at each other for a good three seconds, stood up on the bed, and began to bounce up and down screaming their lungs out.

★☆ Chapter 2 ★☆

“That should do it!” Hannah said brightly as she zipped up her purple, over-stuffed suitcase.
“Hmm…” Cassidy mumbled, deeply immerse in a book.
“Cassidy!” Hannah said, with incredulity, “Have you even packed yet?”
“What?” She looked up, her mind still on her book; then, seeing the look on Hannah’s face, she said, “Sorry, it’s at a really good part.”
“It’s Ok.” Hannah said, smiling again, “Anyway, we’re leaving for Maui in two days, so you better get packing.”
“I know…” Cassidy marked her place with a bookmark and closed her book, “But I just don’t like packing.”
“You want me to pack for you?” Hannah asked, kindly.
“Would you?” Cassidy perked up, “Hannah, you’re the best! I owe you one.”
“Anytime,” Hannah smiled and then pulled out Cassidy’s orange suitcase and started packing.


“What do ya think?” Cassidy said, posing in her newly bought bathing suit. It was an orange with yellow polka dots one-piece bathing suit.
They were in JC Penny’s trying on different bathing suits for their trip.
“Perfect!” Hannah said, “Now it’s my turn!” she jumped in front of the full length mirror and turned. It was a black and purple striped , with a matching skirt.
“I like it,” Cassidy said, “Makes you look sophisticated.”
“Yeah…” Hannah agreed, thinking it over, “I think I’ll get this one.”
“Finally,” Cassidy said and they laughed.
“Yeah, shopping for the perfect bathing suit is such a pain. How long have we been here?” Hannah asked.
“Four hours and thirty-seven minutes.” Cassidy said, “Let’s call my mom to pick us up.”
“Meanwhile we can go eat something, I’m starved!” Hannah said, rubbing her stomach.

★☆ Chapter 3 ★☆

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You're a very good writer.
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Great to see the new thread!!! Just sad that you and soccerrox7 can't write it together anymore
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