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Old 02-12-2009, 11:34 AM   #11
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Ha-ha. Poor Sasuke. I love him, but it's funny when he gets rejected! Great chapter! Sasuke was like, totally in character! Like everyone else!
Thanks! i try to make it as in character as possible.

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Chapter 4-Kurea’s past.

Kurea walked up the stairs to her room and sat down on her bed. She picked up the ninja headband and tied it onto her forehead.
“Might Guy, huh?” She asked herself. “I need to find him and speak to him privately…”
She smiled as she remembered her old sensei, who was similar to Guy in many ways. She laced up her shoes and walked out onto the balcony. No use going the long way…
She jumped to the ground and then stood up.
“Halt right there!” a strict voice called.
Kurea whirled around to see Lady Tsunade standing behind her.
“Did I do something wrong?” She asked.
“I don’t recognize you.” Tsunade said. “Are you new here?”
“Yup.”
“Well, you need to fill out an official village registration form before you can legally live here.”
“I already did. Now I gotta go train, sorry.”
“That’s no way to speak to the Hokage!”
“Oh!” Kurea said. “I’m sorry; I didn’t know who you were!”
Tsunade gave a sigh of relief. At least she wasn’t as disrespectful as Naruto.
“What’s that symbol on your headband?” Tsunade asked, examining the cross. “I don’t recognize it.”
“Oh, it’s not an official headband.”
“Then why are you claiming to be a ninja?”
“I have all the qualifications to be one, but I never went through any FORMAL training, so I’m not officially recognized as one. My sensei and I were always traveling; I don’t really have a village that I grew up in. I was born in the Star Village, but from 1 year old I have been moving around everywhere.”
“Well then.” Tsunade said. “Please come with me, and maybe I can fix that problem of yours.”
“Like how?”
“I can give you a test and depending on how well you complete it, maybe I can make you an official ninja.”
“That’d be neat!” Kurea said. “And I have a friend who should be showing up soon, with the same problem. She’s from this very village originally, and decided to return here to live with her relatives.”
“Well, then as soon as she shows up, I’ll have you two take the test together.”
“Ok, Then can I train until she shows up?”
“That’s ok by me.” Tsunade said. “There’s a practice field over that way.”
“Great! Also I have another question, do you know where I could find Might Guy? I have to ask him something.”
“He’s most likely training Lee, Tenten, and Neji in that practice field I pointed out to you.”
“Thanks!” Kurea took off running. Her thoughts argued with themselves as usual.
Lee’s over there too huh? He seems like a neat guy.
Get a hold of yourself Kurea, you barely know him.
Yeah, I know… but he’s cute…
Kurea rolled her eyes and laughed at herself. “I act so much like a crazy teenager even though I try my hardest not to…”
She was closing in on the training field. She slowed her pace to a brisk walk and as she got even closer, tiptoed over and peered through the fence.
Tenten was throwing weapons as Neji skillfully dodged every single one. Lee was doing upright push-ups on his thumbs.
Wow, that takes some perseverance, and a lot of strength!
Just another reason he’s so cool!
Oh hush up, Kurea, you still barely know him.
Who cares?
I do!
Why can’t my thoughts agree?
Who knows…
Heck, who cares?
Not me…
Are you spying?” Naruto came up behind Kurea and sat down.
“Eh, not really, I’m gonna go in there in a sec.”
“Lee’s really good.” Naruto said. “It’s really encouraging to anybody to watch him train. I sit here to watch Guy’s team train a lot.”
“Huh, well that’s neat, I guess.”
“I was just planning to go train too, so let’s go in now.” Naruto said.
“Alright.” Kurea said, dusting off her clothes.
Naruto pushed the gate open.
“Hey guys, are you coming to train with us?” Tenten asked.
“Yep” Naruto said.
“I think so” Kurea said quietly.
“Well then let us begin!” Lee said from behind Kurea and Naruto.
Kurea jumped.
How did he get here so fast?
“We can train in a mock battle!” Guy-Sensei said.

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Old 02-12-2009, 03:01 PM   #12
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Oh, gosh. My thoughts always fight.
No we don't.
We do so! Now, hush up, inner!
Fine...
Anyways... I love it!
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Old 02-13-2009, 12:09 PM   #13
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Chapter 5- Party Plans!

“ALRIGHT!!!” Naruto yelled. “Multi shadow clone jutsu!!” The field was suddenly filled up with clones of Naruto.
Lee started practicing Taijutsu on them.
“Leaf Hurricane!” Another few clones went down.
“Well don’t just stand there!” Tenten said. “It’s all of us against Naruto’s clones!”
“Oh, ok!” Kurea said. She hadn’t exactly figured out what was going on.
Poof! Another clone vanished.
Tenten pulled out a scroll and it turned into a large ball on the end of a chain. She whirled it through an entire row of Naruto clones.
“Byakugan!” Neji yelled as several Naruto clones came rushing toward him. He fended off each attack perfectly.
“Leaf Hurricane!” Kurea finished off the last few clones.
“How… how did you know the leaf hurricane?!?” Guy-Sensei asked.
“My Sensei taught it to me.” Kurea responded.
“But the only people alive who know that technique are Lee and I!”
“Well, I’ve needed to talk to you anyways; it might clear some things up.” Kurea said.

“Hey, Hinata, Shino!” A boy and his dog came running up to his teammates.
“What is it, Kiba?” The small girl asked, as she petted Akamaru.
“My cousin is coming today! I’m going to throw a welcome party and I’m gathering people to help set it up! Wanna help?”
“Sure!” Hinata said.
“I’m in” Shino said.
“Can we find Naruto to help, too?” Hinata asked quietly.
“I was just going to look for him next.” Kiba said.
They started towards the training field.

“Are you absolutely sure?” Guy-Sensei asked Kurea.
“As sure as I can be” Kurea said.
“I can’t believe it!” Guy said. “I thought my brother was dead all this time, but he was really just travelling and training you!”
“That’s right.”
“Where is he now?” Guy asked.
“Sadly, he died helping the village in the sand defend itself from a group of Rouge Ninja. As he lay dying, the last thing he told me was to go to the leaf village and have you complete my training.”
“My poor brother!” Guy wailed. (He tends to get very emotional xD) “At least he died for an honorable cause!”
“I was sad too.” Kurea said. “But he told me not to waste my time crying for him, instead, to keep following my Way of Ninja.”
She wiped her eyes, and sniffled a little bit.
“Well then I will honor my brother’s wishes.” Guy said. “As soon as you take the test to become an official ninja, Team Guy will have 4 members, not three.”
“Thank you so much” Kurea said.

“Hey you guys!” Kiba said, running toward Lee, Tenten, Naruto, and Neji, who were sitting in a circle in the grass.
“What’s up?” Naruto asked.
“We are throwing a welcome party for Besani Morihana, Kiba’s cousin!” Hinata said.
“Besani.” Naruto said. “That name sounds familiar…”
“Of course it sounds familiar! She’s Kurea’s best friend!” Sakura said, joining them. “I heard Lady Tsunade talking about them both taking the ninja test together.”
Kurea and Guy walked over.
“Hey, you’re Kiba, right?” Kurea asked, pointing at him.
“How did you know?” Kiba asked.
“You have the same face markings as Besani!” Kurea said. Then it hit her. “Besani’s coming today!! I totally forgot!!”
“Don’t worry, I didn’t forget.” Kiba said.
They got hard to work getting the party together.

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Old 02-16-2009, 03:25 PM   #15
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Chapter 6 – Welcome the Forest Flower!

The next day, Besani Morihana and her little black dog, Uwagi, were sprinting down the path towards the Leaf Village.
“They are within 100 feet of the gate.” Lee said into his walkie-talkie, from a tree nearby.
“Alright. We’re all ready here.” Kiba replied.
“You’re going to have a new friend, Akamaru!” Kiba told his dog.
“Arf!” Akamaru seemed excited.
“Thanks to Shikamaru’s elaborate plans, the party is sure to go off without a hitch.” Ino said.
“I’m so excited!” Kurea yelled while jumping around. “I haven’t seen Besani in AGES!!”
“Keep it down, will ya?” Neji hushed her.
“Sorry!” she whispered.
“20 feet and closing!” Lee’s voice came over the walkie-talkie.
“Get ready…” Tenten began.
“NOW!” Choji said.
“SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” everyone yelled as they jumped out of their hiding places.
“What is all this?” Besani asked, while Uwagi went crazy barking.
“It’s your welcome to the village party!” Kiba said.
“Kiba!! It’s been forever!” Besani said, hugging her cousin.
“Yeah.” He replied.
“Besani!” Kurea came over, waving.
“Kurea! So you got here first, huh?”
“Yup!” Kurea grinned.
After introductions were made, the whole group went to Ichiraku Ramen to eat.

Meanwhile, at the Hokage’s place…
“They sure look like they’re having fun.” Lady Tsunade said.
Shizune came to the window to watch the group running down the street toward Ichiraku’s. Akamaru and Uwagi ran ahead of the rest, barking at each other.
Tsunade smiled. “Soon we’ll have two more ninja, which is good. We’ve been a little short lately.”
“Who are you going to place them under?” Shizune asked.
“Hmm.” Tsunade pondered this for a moment. “I hadn’t thought of that. I think I’ll put Besani in Kakashi’s group since Sakura’s training under me to be a medical ninja.”
“And what of Kurea?”
“Hmm… she’ll probably do well in Kurenai’s group…”
Just then Guy-Sensei burst through the door.
“Sorry for not knocking but I’ve got an urgent request.”
“Let’s hear it.” Tsunade said.
“I’d like to request that Kurea Akihoshi be on my team once she has passed the ninja test.”
“Any specific reasons, Guy? I was going to put her on Kurenai’s team.”
“Yes, actually, a most important reason.”
“Continue…”
“Her Sensei who traveled with her and did her training was none other than Might Giru!”
“Your brother? I thought he was dead!”
“So did I. But Kurea told me that his dying wish was that I continue her training.”
“Very well then. Starting immediately after the ninja test, in the event that she should pass, she will be part of Team Guy.”
“Thank you ma’am.”

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Old 02-16-2009, 03:36 PM   #16
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Old 02-18-2009, 01:40 PM   #17
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Chapter 7- Study hard!

About a week later, after Kurea and Besani had gotten used to Konoha and met most of the people there; they were taking a walk together. Uwagi ran ahead, barking playfully.
“Kurea! Besani!”
They both turned to see Shizune running towards them.
“What is it, Shizune?”
“Lady Tsunade would like to see both of you right away. It’s about the Ninja Tests.”
“Alright!” Kurea said.
“Race you!” Besani said to Kurea.
They both took off running with Uwagi close behind. Shizune smiled. “I think they will be very good ninja, how about you, Tonton?” she asked the pig she carried around.
“Oink!” Tonton agreed.

Meanwhile, Lee and Guy were training in the woods.
“Did you… find… out… why… Kurea knew… the leaf hurricane?” Lee asked his teacher, as he repeatedly practiced a side kick on a tree. The bark was getting thin.
“Yes actually I did.”
“That is wonderful! I must know! Please tell me, Guy-Sensei!!”
“Well it turns out that her traveling teacher was my brother.”
“That is impossible, Sensei! You told me your brother died when you were both young!”
“Apparently I was mistaken.”
“But Sensei, you are never wrong!”
“I never knew for sure.”
“Hmm.” Lee thought for a moment. “Why did she come to the leaf village?”
“Apparently Giru’s dying wish was that I complete her training.”
“That is a noble reason. I will help you train her! It would do me good, right?”
“That seems reasonable. But she may resist to being trained by someone her own age.”
“In that case, I will leave it to you. But I hope Kurea does not mind.”
“Hope I don’t mind what?” Kurea jumped down from a tree.
“Were you eavesdropping?” Guy asked her.
“No, I just got here.” Kurea said. “Besides, if I had been listening to the entire conversation, I wouldn’t have had to ask my question.” She turned to Lee. “What do you hope I don’t mind?”
“When you become a member of Team Guy, Lee would like to help with your training.” Guy said.
“That is right!” Lee agreed.
“Of course I don’t mind!” Kurea said. “Oh, I almost forgot, Lady Tsunade needs you two.”

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Oh, I love it!! I wonder what Tsunade wants them for.
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Old 02-19-2009, 10:54 AM   #19
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Chapter 8- Instructors from the Sand

“I’m glad you’re here.” Lady Tsunade said after Lee and Guy got to her office. “I need you two to go on a mission for me.”
“What kind of mission?” Guy asked. “Guarding a national treasure?”
“Actually no, it’s a C rank escort mission.”
“Excuse me if I am being rude, but why are you putting us on an easy mission like this one?” Lee asked.
“I need someone who’s fast to do this job. You two seemed perfect. Here’s the deal. I need you to get Gaara, Kankuro, and Temari from the Sand village. Nobody’s after them, so I don’t think you’ll be attacked. I need them here within a week though.”
“May I ask why?” Guy asked.
“They will be conducting the Ninja test for Besani and Kurea.”
“Why are we not using a local instructor?” Lee inquired.
“Because.” Lady Tsunade said- “I need someone to do it that they are not so familiar with, and who can evaluate their skill without knowing their personality.”
“Alright, we’ll be back soon, Lady Hokage!” Guy and Lee saluted, then rushed off.

Meanwhile, Besani and Kurea were hard at work training.
Besani had a gong hanging from her arm. It was her weapon similar to Sound Village weapons, but she wasn’t evil or anything.
“Ninja Art- Gong Shattering!” She banged on it, and a deep resonating sound echoed throughout the training field. The kicking posts cracked, and the ground started shaking.
“Prayer Protection!” Kurea formed a cross sign with her fingers and closed her eyes. The ground around her stopped shaking and all the splinters of wood bounced of an invisible bubble around her. It wasn’t a Jutsu or anything. It was a shield of protection that Christian Ninja had, protection made completely by God by using their faith. Sometimes it was strong, sometimes weak, sometimes it didn’t show up at all, but that’s not because God was unfaithful. Sometimes He let them get injured or hurt so that they can be stronger next time, and so that they don’t get too full of themselves and start thinking it was their own doing.

The shaking stopped and Kurea opened her eyes. She looked to the sky.
“Thanks, God.” She whispered. Then looking at Besani she grinned. “Now it’s my turn on the offensive!”
“Oh yeah? Hit me with the best you’ve got!”
“I won’t use the best, I’m saving that for extreme situations! But I’ll give you my second best!”
Kurea ran up to Besani and started using advanced Taijutsu.
Besani dodged skillfully, and just as Kurea was about to kick down hard…
“Prayer Protection!”
Kurea’s foot stopped just inches from Besani’s shoulder.
And so the training continued for the rest of the week.

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Oh, wow. I'd love to know Prayer Protection! And be a Christian Ninja!(lol, i am in my stories even if it doesn't seem like it)
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