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happygirl15 · 08-28-2009, 06:05 PM

For then, for now, forever. A story of friendship.
By:Alyx (Happygirl15)
Chapter 1
Joanna.....Joanna.....JOANNA!
"Whowhatwherewhen? Oh..it's you."I said groggily. Alison giggled and said "Nice to see you too sleeping beauty." I propped myself up on my elbows and looked at the clock it read 8:30 a.m."Remind me why I keep inviting you for sleep-overs when you wake me up at the crack of dawn?"I asked. "Eight-thirty is not the crack of dawn, genius." "It is on a Saturday" I retorted. "Oh hardy-har-har. Listen Jerry Seinfeld, you have a half hour to get ready." Alison said to me."Why?"I asked. "I know you just woke up so i'll tell you. You.Me.Mall. Ring a bell?" Alison "explained". "Uhhh...no" I said. Of course I knew we'd been saving up our money for 2 weeks and begging are moms to let us go to for the past month. "Don't play dumb." Alison told me. "I"m not playing." I told her. "Oh believe me, I know."Alison told me grinning. "Fine" I mumbled getting out of bed. "Uh do you maybe wanna put your PJ bottoms back on?" Alison asked "Why bother? I'm getting in the shower" I answered. So I dragged my tired only wearing a shirt and undies self to the bathroom and looked in the mirror."Well, I didn't think it was possible but today's bed-head is actually worse than yesterday's" I screamed at Alison who was in my room down the hall. "Why does that surprise you?"she screamed/asked. "'Cuz it was really bad yesterday!"I scream again. "Will you just get in the stinking shower already!?" "Fine!"I screamed one more time as I got in the shower. As I turned on the water I knew the day had begun.
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Chapter 2
"Okay. I took a shower now, happy?"I ask. Alison gags and says "Not until you brush your teeth and get rid of that rancid morning breath." "Don't be so overly dramatic" I say as I tighten up my lady bug robe and pull my red pin-straight hair into a bun. "Ok, yeah me the dramatic one, because I was the one who screamed when a dog came up to you on the way home from school yesterday."she says. "Pshaw. I don't care what anyone says it looked like a pitbull."I say defending myself. "But it was a chihuahua!" she reminds me as if I need reminding "Ok. whatever i'm gonna go brush my teeth." I say. "Good. I'm gonna get something to eat wadda you guys have?"Alison asks."I don't know go look." I say as I head off to brush my teeth.
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Chapter 3
I walked downstairs finally ready, to find Alison reading a note taped to the fridge. "Who's that from?" I asked. "Your mom, here read it."she said as she handed me the note. Joanna-had 2 go emergency @ work B back @ 8:00 p.m. ~ Mom "Well, this is bad." I said. "Can't your mom drive us?" I asked Alison. "No." she said with a smile spreading across her face. "But I can."she said. "Oh no." I said.
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Chapter 4
I jerked forward as Alison slammed on the brakes again. "Remind me how you got your driver's license."I say to Alison as my nails dig into the leather seat of her car. Seriously, I don't know how she got a license, let alone a car."Oh come on i'm not that bad."she argues."Not that bad?"I ask. "So it's normal for someone to slam on the brakes every five seconds?" I argue back. "If i'm so bad than you drive." she says. "You know I would if I could" I say. Unfortunately, Alison's birthday is in January and mine is in August meaning..........Alison got her license before me and I have to wait another month. And believe me you, I am a way better driver than her. Alison slams on the brakes yet again and jerks into a parking space. I finally release my hands from the seat to find deep, not just deep but deep fingernail indentations in the leather. I practically fall out of the car trying to get out and almost kiss the asphalt when Alison grabs my shirt and pulls me back in."Thanks" I say. "No problem." she replies with a smile. We grab our purses, link our arms and skip to the enterance.
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millie12378956 · 08-29-2009, 02:00 PM

Hey i like your story!

happygirl15 · 08-30-2009, 04:55 PM

thanks! !

bookworm12 · 08-31-2009, 04:08 PM

cooooool story
i like your fashon/type of writing it keeps the reader interested
constuctive critizem- may not wanna write in blue sorry :-(
please vm me when new chapter comes out thanks :-)