Webkinz Insider

meghan487 · 05-18-2009, 12:39 PM

Im not completly sure if this is allowed on here but I hope it is. Il change the parts with kissing when it gets that far because this story is on my writing website not just here.
I really hope you like it and anyone please tell me how they feel about it. Critisism and comments are greatly appreciated. PLEASE read it. I want to know if(so far) it would be good enough to get published.

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Chapter 1
The pretty faces
I looked over on the side of my king sized bed to see my alarm clock going off at 6:30am. The bad thing about being beautiful is that you have to wake up early to look better then everyone. I didn’t mind waking up early today because it was my first day of grade 8 at Ruby Hills middle school, the school for the rich people.

My name is Tiffany Rose and I am the prettiest and most popular 13 year old to ever step foot into my school. At my school, every guywanted me, and every girl wanted to be me.

I walked over to my giant walk-in closet about half the size of a runway to find my already picked out first day of school outfit.
It was a dark purple Mark Jacobs mini tube-dress with leggings that went to my knees and also a pair of 2 inch Prada heels.
After getting dressed I walked into my large bathroom and brushed my beautiful brown hair and then brushed my sparkling white teeth.
After applying my makeup I put my one-of-a-kind diamond necklace on and also my silver Chanel bracelet.

I walked over to my mirror completely satisfied with myself. I looked over at my clock to see it was already 7:30 and I was planning on being at school a half hour before it started so I could hang out with my almost as beautiful as me best friend Lily Madison.

I ran down stairs and asked the chef to make me some pancakes and get my some apple juice out of the fridge. It took about 10 minutes for my 3 pancakes to be made and my juice to be poured. I had stuffed the pancakes into my mouth careful not to smudge my Plum Perfect lip-stick and was out the door to meet my driver Kendrick in the driveway.
I got to school at exactly the time I had planned. I had thanked Kendrick and walked into school, all eyes on me as usual. I walked into room
19 to find that my locker number was 62. Once I got to my locker I had gotten my locker decorations out of my purple satin backpack.

I opened my locker and then Lily ran up to me. She was wearing a light red Ralph Lauren v-neck with a satin pink waist line, Dominican Republic dark jeans and Jimmy Choo heels.
Hey girly. What’s up with the non-designer pants?
Hey Tiff, and I know how tragic it is to have to wear something that’s not designer, but my dad bought them for me and paid me a hundred bucks to not buy anything for 4 days so I couldn’t buy the jeans I wanted at Juicy Couture.
Oh my god why is your dad treating you so bad!?
I don’t know Tiff. But its been 4 days so want to go shopping after school?
You know I cant resist a shopping trip! Duh! Who wouldnt say no to shopping?
I dont know! How much longer until class starts?
Lily looked at her Gucci watch and told me we had 20 minutes. After finishing putting my stuff in my locker I looked around and saw the one guy I thought deserved me, Hayden Tweller.

Chapter 2
That perfect smile
I ran up to him to say hi to Hayden and he gave me a quick hug and told me he had missed me over summer.
Aww Hayden I missed you too!
Really? Because I thought you thought of me as one of the normal guys who didnt deserve you.
I would never think that. Your better then the other guys. Your different from them. I do actually like you.
I really like you Tiffany. Would you like to go out for dinner tommorrow night at “Le francais Gourmet”?
Sure! How about 7?
Okay, il pick you up at 6:45.
I had always liked Hayden. He had a smile that made my heart melt. He was astonishly cute, he was so sweet and caring, actually nice and he was also the funniest guy I had ever met.
I always knew he liked me. Every guy did. But I had never been attracted to anyone at this school. I had only ever had one boyfriend and we lasted a whole summer last year. I found out that he only liked me because I had a few million more then him and because I was hot. His name was Matthew Mcdonnals. After going out with him for a few weeks he kissed me and told me I was special, only to find out a month later that I really wasnt special at all.

Hayden was far more better then I ever thought Matthew was. When I finnally broke up with Matthew the last day of summer, he slapped me acrossed the face and called me a stupied little rich girl. Even though I was rich, I wasnt one of those stupied girls.
I wasnt that smart but I was far from stupied.

After I was done talking with Hayden I walked into class and was right on time.
Class went by pretty quick and after class it was gym class.
We were playing vollyball and on the team me and my team were agaisnt had Angeline Milnes. She was a popular-wannabe who thought she was better then everyone else including me. I know im prettier and more popular then everyone else, and Angeline just thinks she is.
She had spiked the ball over the net and hit me in the head 4 times. The 4th time Mr. Smith the gym teacher gave her a detention.

Chapter 3
The shopping trip
School was over 5 hours after gym class and those 5 hours went by very slowly.
Me and Lily had Kendrick drive us to the mall. We first went to the Prada boutique and both bought hobo bags.
I had to find that perfect outfit for my date with Hayden tommorrow. I couldnt wear one of my dresses because I had to look extra pretty for
my date.

We next went to Jimmy Choo’s and I bought the perfect peek-a-boo kitten heels for my date. They were dark blue and were open toes.
Ralph Lauren was next and I saw the perfect dress. It went down to my knees and it was a blue a that was lighter then the shoes.
It was halter dress and different shade of blue at the bottom of the dress.
You know, there is alot of things girls love to get dressed up for. Dances, important days of school, important dinners and there is so much
more! I think the things girls love most to get all dressed up for are dates.
Dates are important because if you think there is a chance that it will become a relationship, the first date is like a first impression on what
that relationship will be like.
Clothes, hair, makeup and most importantly WARDROBE! Thats whats so fun about getting ready for a date. I feel kind of sorry for guys
because they miss out on all this stuff!
Even when you find all you wanted at a mall, you stil cant go home until you go to all your favourite stores.

Chapter 4
Getting ready
The second day of school went over the same as the day before. Every guy starred at me, all the girls envied me and Angeline hated me.
All day there was only one thing I looked forward too. I think its pretty obvious what it is and that would be my date with Hayden.
I had a super cute outfit, a cute guy as a date and we were going to the perfect place. It all seemed so perfect!
I had Lily come over 3 hours before the date to help me get ready. We straightend my hair, did my make-up prefectly and chose the right
accessories to go with my outfit. Half hour before my date I was ready and looked prefect. There was only one thing missing. I couldn’t
figure out what, but it seemed like there was something I should have or be wearing. What was it? Then it hit me. I needed to find a perfect
purse to go with my outfit. I looked all over my room and I knew I was running out of time.
Lily went looking in my closet and suddenly a box of old stuff fell by her side. She opened it up, and it was there. The perfect purse.
Perfect size, perfect color and perfect look. It was a dark blue sating purse with light blue lace over top. It matched my outfit perfectly.
If it had had any more dark blue, my outfit would definitely have to much blue. The light blue lace perfected it. As soon as I put my
sidekick cell-phone in, some extra cash and some mints(in case I think I’m going to get a kiss) Hayden knocked at the door.

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I copied and pasted it and some of the paragraphs cutt off but its arranged differently on my site.

Someone please read this!