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Old 10-24-2009, 12:46 PM   #1
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Seeing What I Can

As i walked along the sea,
I saw a maiden, pretty as anything nice.
She wore blue, for she was ice,
And snow fell around her,
For she was the spirit of Winter,
I wanted to give her friendship,
But this happened next.

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As i ran to her,
She faded away.
Into the nothingness i know now.
The closer i got,
She move gone she grew,
And when i was there,
She was gone.
I cried,
Because it was so rare,
To see a spirit out here.
I wanted to tell people,
But i couldn't find words,
So i just left it for my head.

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Then one day,
Right before Christmas,
I saw her again,
Plain as day,
Dressed with a fox's tail and dragon's wings,
Crystal boots, and flowing purple hair,
And the ears of a cat.
I gestured to my partner,
"There she is!
The spirit of Winter!"
But he did not see.
I could only wonder,
If i was the only one
Who could see the spirits
Of the seasons.
I did not try to walk toward her again,
For i knew she would fade away.
And that is what she did,
As i walked away.

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Old 10-24-2009, 03:31 PM   #2
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Great poem! Very mysterious!
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Old 10-24-2009, 04:33 PM   #3
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Awww I LOVE it!
you sould write more
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Old 10-24-2009, 07:15 PM   #4
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Awww I LOVE it!
you sould write more
i did write more!! actually, this is my second piece of work on WI. you can find a link to the other in my siggie.
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Great poem! Very mysterious!
thanks! i really do like it!!
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Old 10-25-2009, 08:14 AM   #5
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Ooooh...mysterious. I really like these kind of poems. 5 stars. and rep.

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Old 10-25-2009, 01:53 PM   #6
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wow thank you!

and whoever put the tag there, thanks too!
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Old 11-02-2009, 03:59 PM   #7
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AWSOMENESS!!!!!!!
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Old 11-02-2009, 06:17 PM   #8
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thanks!! i see my poem has some publicity..
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Old 11-08-2009, 03:40 PM   #9
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thanks again for everyone who has read this poem!
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