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'My Unwanted Fame'

Character List Coming Soon

Prologue

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I looked onto the wild grass covered hills. Deer ran freely through the patches of green as the sun started to set. Rabbits ran under the bushes and went into their burrows while their small babies followed. Coyotes ran from hill to hill trying to find something to eat and howled for the moon to return. Their brown and silver fur ruffled in the light breeze and they breathed heavily. Birds flew above me in the sky and headed toward the sun. Lizards ran across the rocks and rested in the sun and waited there to keep warm. Each hill was completely green from the rain storm that passed through not too long ago except for the rocks that layed in the swaying blades of grass.
The wind played with my dirty blonde hair and it blew around my face. I sat in the grass and the sun lowered deeper and deeper behind the hills. Once the sun was almost gone, I stood up and walked back to my house. The hills were just behind the backyard of my house and there is a gate to come out to these beautiful hills. I carefully walked through the thin path that I have worn into the ground from walking back and forth so much. Once I reached the white metal gate, I opened it and walked through the dirt path that was outlined with a small line of colorful flowers. Grass covered the other side of the flowers and stretched until one side reached our pool and the other reached the patio where we occasionally eat. The dirt path stopped and I turned onto the sidewalk and walked down the path until I reached the wooden staircase to the side of the house. I walked up to it and I reached my balcony that looked over the beautiful hills behind our house. I opened the two glass doors and walked into my large bedroom. The room themed around my favorite colors: lime green, light brown, and white. I walked over to my flat screen TV and flipped it on and jumped onto my queen sized bed. The TV buzzed about something I was expecting: me. I'm in a famous band called Pwned with my best friends: Jessica, Kathryn, Brett, Nick, and Travis.
We became famous this past Winter when we were performing at a Battle of the Bands. Apparently, talent scouts were looking for fresh talent and we left with first place and a possible record deal. We met with a record company and we recorded our two original songs we have written. We have not gone on a tour but we have done a few performances at private concerts. We have planned a tour next Spring and right now, it is twelve days before Halloween and seven days before my 13th Birthday. My friends and I planned to go to Knott's Scary Farm and then have a sleepover at my house.
"NICOLE!" I heard my mom shout from downstairs. Great. What's wrong now?


Chapter 1

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I ran downstairs to see my mom at the kitchen table waiting for dinner with my dad and brother. Our chef, Chef Paul, was laying out our dinner plates which were covered with food. When I sat down, I saw what dinner was: filet mignon, baked potato, and broccoli. My favorite dinner, including the broccoli. While my mom told my dad about her day, I started eating, cutting the steak and stuffing it in my mouth.
"Nicole?" My dad asked me. I looked up and swallowed before I started talking.
"Yeah?" I muttered. I could not read any emotion in my father's weathered face.
"How was your day?" He asked curiously. Rarely anything ever new happened so I don't know why he asked.
"Fine. I got an A on my Algebra test," I explained. "I took the easiest Social Studies test ever, got a bull's eye in archery during Gym, and during lunch, people tried to sit with us...again." A good portion of the school tried to sit with us because of our fame. Apparently, they would think that they were cool but we only let two people sit with us. Our two best friends: Preston and Kaitlyn; we call her Kate. Neither of them were great with instruments or singing but we have known each other since first grade. Nick and I have known each other since I was born because both our mom's are very good friends. Nick is almost a year older than me but we are still in the same grade. We have other friends and we talk to them but our table only fits eight people comfortably so people sit around the table and try to talk to us. Most of the kids at our school have known us for years but they were just excited that they know a famous person. Now everybody in school thinks of us as normal kids, most of the time anyway. We used to be a group of nerds and we now seem to be the most popular kids in school.
"That's good." My mom smiled. I just looked at my plate and continued to eat until my plate had no food left. I took it to the sink and went back up to my room. As I walked up, my dog, Lucky, followed me. He is a chihuahua-dachshund mix and he is the most adorable dog ever. When I opened my two large doors to my room, he went straight to his bed in the corner of the room. I went to where my enV touch was sitting and flipped it open. I started to text Jessie.
Me: sup
Jess: nothin. u?
Me: nothin. watchin tv about us
Jess: the usual (:
Me: i wish they wuld stop
Jess: me 2
Me: yep
Jess. I gtg. parents told me
Me: k bye (:
I layed back into my bed and set my phone on the nightstand next to it. On TV, the reporters were talking about the movie we had parts in. We shot our parts during Spring and the movie premiere is this Friday in Los Angeles. We also had some of our songs in the movie and that is how we became even more popular.
My phone buzzed and I looked to see who was texting me. I got a text from Nick.
Nick: hey
Me: hey
Nick: sup?
Me: watchin tv about us
Nick: same here
Me: they dont no anything
Nick: yep
We continued to text for hours until my dad took my phone away like he does every night. I always stay up texting really late and it is a different person every night. It was either Nick, Jessie, Kathryn, Brett, Travis, Kaitlyn, or Preston. Nobody except my family and my best friends have my phone number because I can't trust anybody as they might spill it on the internet.
I curled up under my blanket and quickly fell asleep.
When I woke up, the sun was shining through my window and my alarm clock was playing "Don't Trust Me" by 3OH!3. I sat up while slamming down on my alarm clock and headed to my personal bathroom. I splashed water on my face and went into my giant walk in closet. In the closet, I grabbed a pair of dark skinny jeans, a navy blue Hollister t-shirt, and a pair of plain black converse and got dressed. Once my make-up and hair was perfect, I ran downstairs and Chef Paul put a big plate of chocolate chip pancakes on the table.
"Thanks." I told him and I dug into my favorite breakfast. Once I finished, I ran upstairs, brushed my teeth, and grabbed my purple and black backpack.
My parents already left before I woke up so I ran out of the house and slipped into the long black limo sitting near the entry way to our private part of the neoighborhood for just all six of our houses; we are all neighbors. I was the first one to the limo so I waited and greeted our daily driver.
"Hey, Scott!" I shouted to him.
"Good morning, Nicole." He said kindly and turned back to the road.
Brett and Jessica arrived next and Nick, Kathryn, and Travis soon followed. They all said their hello's and we waited for Kaitlyn and Preston. They have a special key that opens the walk-in gate since their houses are right outside of it. While we waited, we chatted about random stuff.
"What are you going to wear on Friday?" Kathryn asked me.
"A navy blue spaghetti strap dress with a beautiful silver necklace. I'm going to put my hair up into a pony tail and I am wearing a pair of silver high heels. What about you?" I answered smiling
At that moment, Preston and Kate slipped into the limo and sat in the two open dark leather seats. Kate, Jessie, Kathryn, and I continued to talk about our outfits until we arrived at the park behind the school. We parked back here just in case the elementary school happened to see us or something that makes us the center of attention. We walked out of the limo and grabbed our backpacks from the trunk of the car and headed across the field and walked up the concrete steps. As soon as we were in view, a few people crowded around us but they were the same people that do this everyday. We were always asked to sign something and we have been told that these few people are selling them on the internet. We stopped signing anything and the few people that flocked us annoy us even more.
We went to the table we sit at everyday and just talked about random things until the bell rang. I headed to Language Arts with Jessie and Travis. We hate this class with Mrs. Moody. She is the worst teacher I have ever had. I walked in the classroom as any normal day but today, it was different.


Chapter 2

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I walked into the insane room. People were running around screaming and backpacks were flying across the room. There could only be one explanation: Mr. M. is our subsititute!
"YES!" Jessie, Travis, and I shouted together.
Mr. M. has been our sub a few times and he lets us do whatever we want. We can burrito backpacks, scream, play games, run outside on the blacktop, and we always had the stereo blasting.
"There are my three Pwned people!" Mr. M. screamed to us. We are his favorite students in this class. We always went crazier then everybody else. "Travis, Jessie, do your thing!"
Like we have done before, Jessie and Travis somehow ran to the music room, grabbed a small drum set, a guitar, a bass guitar, and three microphones without getting caught by Mr. Johnson, the mean band teacher.
Mr. M. moved some desks around and we were standing on top of a big group of desks, performing for the class. I played guitar and sang, Jessie played the bass guitar and sang, and Travis played drums and sometimes added emphasis to our singing. The door had to be kept closed at all times so no classes would hear us. This school is so rich, each room has sound proof walls. We sang each of our songs once and then we just started running across desks. Everybody cheered us on except for one evil girl: Taylor.
Her and her twin brother Michael always teased us and we have NO idea why. It is most likely because of jealousy and we never cared.
Kate cheered us on while we went absolutely crazy. After we stopped playing, we all ran outside screaming like maniacs. People in Gym right now were staring at us but we did something that we have done before. Kathryn and Nick waved at us while they were playing basketball. We went to one of the Gym teacher's storage units and grabbed three baseball bats, two baseballs, thirty baseball mitts and removable bases. I had my arms full of ten or so gloves and we ran down the concrete steps to the park. We went to the baseball field farthest from the steps and is almost completely hidden if people look down from the top of the steps.
Mr. M. shouted to the whole class. "Nicole! Jessie! Pick your teams!"
I picked Travis and half of the class while Jessie picked Kate and other half of the class. My team was up to bat and I batted first while Jessie pitched. I used to play softball so I hit a homerun and nobody on the other team was surprised. I always hit homeruns.
"Kate! Your up!" Mr. M. shouted. She hit a ball and she made it to second base safely. Once our team got three outs, we went out to the field. I pitched first and Jessie also hit a homerun sice we played softball and soccer together for the last six years; soccer in the Fall and softball in the Spring. Travis hit a ball and made it to third. The rest of the game continued and Jessie's team won by one home run. The score was Jessie's team hit twenty-one runs and my team hit twenty. Jessie and I got really competitive and we were shouting so insanely but Travis held me off so I wouldn't attack her.
"Great game guys!" Mr. M. told us. The second period bell rang but since we stay in this class for two periods, nobody cared. It was about half way through second period when we ended the four inning game.
We walked back up the concrete steps and I saw a few friends at second period and waved. We ran back into the room sreaming. Jessie, Travis, and I took al of the borrowed band stuff back to the room. Mr. Johnson didn't see us but my sixth grade neighbor waved at me. We ran back to the classroom and then everybody's backpack was getting burritoed. We were always attacked first because we are famous but it doesn't matter. Traivs, Jessie, Kate, and I burritoed every backpack in the class and hid them about the room. It took this kid, Eric, twenty minutes to find his when it was stuffed into his desk.
Once the bell rang, we all were completely disappointed. Luckily, Break was starting so we could stay here for another fifteen minutes. Brett, Kathryn, Nick, and Preston got the message so they all ran into the room as well as at least thirty more kids. Our whole band was standing on top of all of the desks. I forgot that I had my iPod so I plugged it into the stereo and blasted our songs. I also had the songs without vocals downloaded so I used those. Our band all sang and our audience went wild because most of them have probably never heard us play live.
I hadn't noticed that the door was kept open. Mr. Mauzey, the principal, walked in and saw us on top of the desks. When we stopped singing, everybody turned around to see the principal. Thankfully, Mr. M. turned off my iPod and hid it in his pocket since iPods aren't allowed at school.
"What is going on here?" Mr. Mauzey asked angrily.
"This is my fault." Mr. M. told the angry principal.
"Are you kidding?!" Mr. Mauzey exclaimed surprising us all. "How about next period, we skip class and you can perform in the Gym?!"
"Oh my gosh! Of course!" I couldn't help screaming. Everyone stared and I shrugged.
"You kids set up on the Gym stage and I will notfiy all of the teachers." He grinned and walked out. We soon got off all of the desks and ran to the music room. I grabbed six microphones. Nick grabbed the stands for the microphones. Travis, Jessie, and Katrhyn grabbed all of the pieces to the huge drum set. Brett grabbed two guitars. Preston grabbed a keyboard and it's stand. Kate grabbed two bass guitars. A few other people helped by grabbing the chords to plug into the speakers. The Orchestra director, Mrs. Kay, helped get everything plugged in and we did this all in less than five minutes. We waited until everybody at their third period class was released to the Gym. The whole middle school and elementary school, at least 1,500 kids, plus the whole school staff, and the volunteers made the Gym claustrophobic. We allowed select people to stand in front of everybody else, which included Preston, Kate, and our close friends. Half of the school had their phones or cameras out, taking pictures. We looked out to the audience and we started the opening music. Kathryn played keyboard, Travis played drums, Jessie and I played guitar, and Nick and Brett played bass guitar. We all had microphones set up for us to perform this unplanned performance.


Chapter 3

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I looked down to see Preston and Kate in the very center right at the front of the stage. Every person looked claustrophobic because there was barely enough room. The bleachers were pulled up and so were the smaller ones to the sides of the Gym and they were packed with as many people that could possibly fit. I started my small, sweet guitar solo at the beginning with Kathryn's company on the piano and the music became excited. Jessie and I started the first line of our #1 Hit "I'm Finally Alone".

"I run around the room,
Screaming your name.
Yelling it, shouting it,
But you never came."

The song continued, with everybody singing lines and we were all pumped, dancing around insanely. The song ended sweetly with the guitar and piano and we played all of oour other songs. By the time we sang all of our songs, we were breathing heavily, sweating and we each drank about five bottles of water throughout the concert.
I walked off stage first with the red guitar I play and headed to the music room with the instruments we held. A few teachers helped grab some instruments also and we headed to the music room. Once I put the guitar away, I sank into the chair I sit in for Orchestra since third period was ending soon. Brett and Nick took their seats next to me while Jessie sat in front of us. Since third period wasn't finished, Travis stayed with us and Kathryn came and sat with Jessie.
"I am exhausted!" I whined, still out of breath. I grabbed my water bottle from my backpack and chugged half of it down without taking a breath. Everyone stared at me and I shrugged.
The bell rang for the end of third period and Travis left the room to go to his math class. Kathryn went to her seat and Mrs. Kay walked out and headed to where Nick, Jessie, Brett, and I were sitting.
"Kathryn," Mrs. Kay told her. "Please come over here." Kathryn walked over and took the seat next to Jessie. She continued, "How about you skip class today. I saw your performance and that should count for your grade points today." She grinned. "And, you look like you need some rest." We all nodded. "Do you want to go to the library and rest on the couches?" We nodded again. "Okay, I will write you a pass."
She wrote us a pass and handed it to Nick. We all grabbed a notebook and pen but we were going to pretend and do homework but we were just going to rest. We went up the small set of stairs and arrived to the library. I sunk inot the couches and, before I knew it, I was asleep.
The bell rang, waking me up, and everybody seemed to be asleep but woken up by the bell. I stood up, while yawning and stretching, and walked to the music room, followed by Nick, Jessie, Kathryn, Brett, and, to my surprise, Travis. I didn't know he showed up with us since he is not in our class but he must've showed up after I dozed off.
I opened the door and basically nobody was still in the room except for the teachers. We grabbed our backpacks and went out to the lunch tables. People surrounded us and asked for autographs but we ignored all of them. I was still tired from waking up from my short nap. Jessie went to the end of the lunch line while Nick, Brett, Kathryn, Travis, Kate, Preston, and I followed her.
"Kids!" I heard Mr. Mauzey shouted behind us. We turned around and saw him smiling at us. "How about you go to the front of the line! You can have lunch for free! Come on!" He headed to the open door that led to the Cafeteria. We reluctantly followed but we hated to be treated special like this but we never turn down any offers, especially from the principal.
We all grabbed a piece of pizza and sat at our normal table.
"I hate being treated special." Kathryn mumbled.
"Yeah." We all breathed simultaneously.
People still crowded around us and some people were even taking pictures of us eating pizza. PIZZA! Once we finished eating, we went over to where we always hang out before class: in front of Mrs. Moody's room. Mr. M. walked out of the room and saw us sitting silently.
"Pwned people!" He shouted. "Do you want to come inside? It's much cooler."
We followed him, with Nick in the lead, and we went into the air conditioned room, taking a seat in the closest chair I could find. I was almost asleep when Mr. M. interrupted me.
"So how are you guys?" He shouted.
"Tired." Nick said with a yawn and his eyes watered of tiredness.
"Okay. I will let you rest." He said quietly. We sat for about five minutes and I atually did fall asleep. The bell rang noisely. Jessie, Travis, Kate, and I started to go out of the room.
"Nick, Kathryn, Brett, do you wanna go rest in the library? Oh, and you too Preston." Mr. M. told them. They headed to the library, after getting a pass, while Kate and I headed to Gym.
"Kate, Nicole." Mr. Sweet told us. "Do you want to skip the mile and go to the office. You both got tons of excercise on stage earlier." He smiled. We all went to the library and Jessie and Travis were allowed to skip also. I was out as soon as I hit the couch.


Chapter 4

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"Nicole! Wake up!" I heard somebody say but I could not even tell if one of the guys or girls said it. Someone shook me and I slowly opened my eyes. Jessie was looking over me and was still shaking me.
"We have to go! We missed ALL of sixth period and it is almost the end of school! We need to check in before the final bell rings!" She shouted.
"'Kay." I mumbled and slowly stood up and stretched, while yawning. Obviously, everybody else just recently woke up and Jessie was the only person wide awake. I grabbed my backpack and went to Health in a daze. Since I already had Mr. Sweet for Gym, so he probably knew where I was. I walked in the room and people stared, but I ignored them and took my seat in the far corner. Mr. Sweet ignored my entrance and continued the lesson, which was easy, since I have an A+ in this class. I grabbed the worksheet and stuffed it into my backpack for homework and the bell buzzed. I grabbed my backpack and grabbed my viola out of the music room before I went to the limo waiting behind the school. I was first to the limo and I threw my backpack i the back and jumped in.
"Good Afternoon, Nicole." Scott smiled. "How was your day?"
I yawned. "Very tiring. We performed an unscheduled concert for the whole elementary and middle school and most of my teachers let us skip class and sleep in the library. Since the concert was during third period, I had to go to Core and we had Mr. M. as our substitute and we went crazy." I smiled. "Then we played a game of baseball but my team lost."
"Wow." He laughed. "That does sound very tiring."
I nodded. Everybody else soon filed in and told everybody their "hello's", we listened to music until we pulled up to our cul-de-sac. We all went to my house and went into the 'Hang-Out' Room. In this room, there is every game station with at least fifty games each, a 150" Plasma Screen HDTV with at least two hundred movies, a blue-ray movie player, a mini kitchen, and tons of beanbags and chairs that hang from the cieling. When I had this room finished, Nick, Jessie, Kathryn, Brett, Travis, Preston, and Kate could not believe this kind of room could exist because of its "coolness."
The room is themed with black, silver, neon green, and electric blue. Each wall is painted a different color and the bea bags and chairs are tie-dyed with all four colors. All of the cabinets are painted in a mix of the colors and the carpet was made of four squares, one of each color. A private bathroom is even in this room. The TV border and back was colored with black, silver, electric blue, and neon green as well as the surround sound stereo system speakers.
I sat in one of the bean bags and switched on the TV. Apparently, reporters heard about our concert at school and recorded it without us knowing. None of us were shocked about it. I grabbed my backpack and did the little homework I had while everybody did theirs. We barely said a word and the silence was awkward.
Once Kate finally finished her homwork, we all went out to my giant backyard and jumped on the giant trampoline. Before I went on, I turned on our outdoor stereo system and turned it on. "Love*****" by Boys Like Girls played first and we jumped, laughing our heads off. Kate showed off her gymnastics skills and did three backflips in a row. We jumped around for about half an hour until we were to exhausted to jump.
I groaned. "I'm exhausted. Let's take the secret way to the secret room." I winked. Only Jessie and Kathryn knew what I was talking about.
I led all of them to where my balcony stair case was. Nick started to walk up, but I grabbed his arm and shook my head. I went to the side of the huge balcony, which no one could see unless you walked all of the way around. I grabbed a secret key and opened a door that was not very visible, it looked just like part of the wall. I took out a secret wooden plug and put the key in the lock. I pushed open the door and everybody but Jessie and Kathryn gasped in shock. The little room under my balcony is a small room with couches and tables in multiple shades of purple and brown. The wall, which was part of my house, had a door. I walked over to the door and opened it. It looked just like the wall but I pushed over the curtain.I walked down the stairs and everyboy followed. I pushed through the last curtain.
Everybody gasped in shock.
"What is this?" Brett asked, looking around.
"My personal arcade." I smiled widely.
This room has tons of arcade games, even a few claw machines filled with stuffed animals, minin basketballs, footballs, and baseballs, and a mininature one filled with candy. There are tons of games and even some slot machines. Also, there is a fooz ball game, air hockey machine, pinball, ping pong, pool, and a basketball game.
Everyone stared at me. I shrugged. "I have never showed this room to anybody. I showed Jessie and Kathryn during a hang out a long time ago. There is a special sleepover room through those double doors." I pointed toward a pair of black doors. "Since my dad had this house personally built, he built this room for me. My brother doesn't even know about it since they didn't know I was going to have a brother until the house was done being built. I discovered this room when I was about six and I was exploring. I was looking around and i found a key and wondered what it was for. Then I looked and saw a small wooden circle cut into the wood. I took out the circle and the lock was there so I put the key in it. I saw this cute little opening room and then I saw the door. I walked through it and when I saw this arcade, I screamed. Nobody heard me because the walls are sound proof." I grinned. "Then I asked my mom what this room was and then she told me my dad built it for me. When my dad got home, I asked him about the room and he told me to follow him to the room. We went in and he explained what it was. There is also a secret candy stash but nobody will ever know where that is except for him and me. He told me that he has had this room but just recently set it up with everything. I think he said it was done when I was five and a half years old."
Everybody's mouths were wide open and I just smirked.
I continued the story. "I have kept it a secret from my brother and sometimes I sleep down here but right there." I pointed to another door. "Is a ladder that leads into my closet. I couldn't believe I never noticed it before but it is a secret door. There are so many secrets in this house. My brother probably has an evil lair somewhere in this house. You want to see the sleepover room?" They nodded. I didn't show Jessie and Kathryn this room because I always forgot about this room when I would have sleepovers.
I opened the door and their eyes looked like they would pop out of their sockets. And they thought the 'Hang-Out' Room was cool...


Chapter 5

 
In this room, the small opening room revealed three doors, each leading to a specific part of the amazing hide out of mine. On the walls surrounding the doors, priceless collectibles surround it. On a display case mounted inside the wall, is over one hundred baseballs, each signed by the a baseball team and I have every team ball signed.
"On that wall is baseballs signed by every U.S. team and more signed specifically by past players such as Babe Ruth." I explained pointing to the walls next to the door we walked through. I flipped a switch and all the display cases lit up, revealing their contents. In the rest of the cases are signed basketballs, hockey helmets, all of my trophies earned from school, soccer, softball, and music, and a whole poster signed by over three hundred famous singers and actors.
"Wow." Pretson, Kathryn, Kate, Jessie, Brett, Travis, and Nick said simultaneously.
The carpet is multicolored with red, white, black, and silver. The display cases are lined with the same colors. I lead the way and went through the door to the left, the least exciting room down here, but it is still cool.
The door I opened was painted black with a silver doorknob. I slwoly opened the door and it opened to a large room. One whole wall is just a giant TV screen which is also a touch screen. There is nothing but the screen, the walls are plain and the floor has nothing on it. On the wall next to the screen, there is a door.
"Preston, go in that door." I told him, while pointing to the door. He looked a tme as if he were confused but went in. On the other side of the door, every single video game system, video game, movie, CD, and also a Blue-Ray DVD player sit. Also, there is a laptop which is hooked up to Wi-Fi so I can go on the interent using my Wii or Xbox. I knew Preston would love this room more than anybody else since he loves video games. All of the movies, CD's and games are organized alphabetically and cover up most of the small closet type room. The carpet in the closet, as well as the opening room, is black and white while the walls alternate between silver and red.
"OH MY GOSH!!!" I heard Pretson yell loudly from the closet. Everyone looked inside and saw room covered in games to movies to CD's. The girls squealed loudly while the guys were silent and motionless except for their breaths.
"Everyone either step into the game closet or out of this room. They all squeezed into the closet while I walked out of the room and waited right at the edge of the door. I pulled my iPod touch from my pocket and clicked an app called "Universal Remote", which is programmed to set up my bedroom, and this whole secret hide-out. I clicked "Game Room" then I pressed a few other buttons, which reset the room to look awesome.
"Guys! You can come out now!" I shouted and they all filed out of the closet and looked at the newly designed room. I pressed a button which makes the previous floor to slide away and then a floor covered in chairs to rise above. The chairs are mostly bean bags and a few recliners but all together, the room was turned into an awesome movie theater. In the past, I have gotten tapings of movies that were only in movie theaters and I have watched them on my screen such as Twilight, some of the Harry Potter movies, and many more.
Everyone stared in shock but I shrugged and motioned them to follow me to the next room. I walked out of the room and went to the door on my right, the red door. Before I opened it, I set it up specifically with my iPod again and then slowly opened the door. Inside was a fully set up kitchen, which only our chef, Chef Paul, knows how to get in. He has only seen the room once so whenever I had a sleepover, he could come down and make us food. The kitchen appliances are all silver stainless steal. The pots, pans and utensils are black and red while the cabinets are painted white. Inside many of the cabinets is bags of chips, candy, and other unhealthy treats. Inside one of the two refridgerators is just filled with sodas, ice cream, sugary drinks, and any treats that need to be kept cold.
There is a door which reveals a secret spinny staircase which Chef Paul uses when he comes down here and it leads into the pantry of the kitchen, behind one of the shelves is a door that opened to the top of the stairs.
When I set up my iPod before I walked in, I had it push a table from below up, which was surrounded by eight chairs and its black with red lining.
"Guys?!" I shouted since they were so surprised. "You haven't even seen the best room yet!!!" They snapped out of their trance and followed me to the best room. The sleepover room.
I walked out of the kitchen and to the final door, which was painted white. For five minutes, I used my iPod to set up the room perfectly and my friends were becoming impatient. I ignored their foot tapping and I opened the door. They all walked in and saw a huge TV screen, similiar to the other one and just as big, on one of the walls. What they didn't know is I never pressed the final button yet. I pressed the "enter" button and lights from the ceiling appeared, flashing random red and white lights around the room. The TV screen shot clips of many concerts, as if you were actually there at the concert. The first song "Party In the U.S.A" by Miley Cyrus went and showed the video of her performing it at the Teen Choice Awards.
"Before you do anything, I need you to step out again. Ths part is not to be seen by ANYBODY!" They trudged out of the room and I closed the door. I pulled out my iPod and pressed a button, which made a part of a wall slide into the side and the sleepover supplies were revealed. Inside this cabinet were tons of pillows, blankets, sleeping bags, and sheets. I stepped into the door, which the cabinet revealed, and it was the bathroom. I kept the door open and then set my iPod so the floor would disappear and a floor with eight beds would rise. Each bed was only a foot frame went a foot off the ground and was made of either red, white, black, or silver colored poles. The matresses on each had plain white sheets with nothing more because from past sleepovers, I learned that people like different amounts of pillows and blankets so I let my friends design them themselves, and I would keep each set of used things and put them in specific friend's shelves. The carpet is just black and white but is very thick.
"Guys! Come back in!" I screamed extremely loudly.
They opened the door slowly and Nick came in first, followed by everyone else.
"Everybody, this is the OFFICIAL sleepover room!" I told them. "From now on, we have sleepovers in here. This weekend, celebrating my birthday, we are going to Knott's Scary Farm all Saturday then we are all going to come back here. Everyone will pick out specific sheets and pillows and then they will only be use by you. Through that door," I pointed to the door that leads to the bathroom. "is the bathroom. It has bathroom stalls and everything. And four showers I think but I'm not sure, and multiple changing rooms, which have sinks and mirrors."
Before they had time to say anything, the intercom buzzed. "Miss Nicole," I heard Chef Paul say, "it is time for dinner. Your friends can stay if you like." They smiled.
"Let's go through the ladder I pointed out earlier." I suggested. I started to walk but then they screamed.
"This is SO COOL!!!" Jessica squealed.
"Calm down. You will get used to it." I explained and we went back to the arcade. I started up the ladder and all of my friends followed. We all ended up in my closet, which always keep organized, and we left to go downstairs. My parents and brother sat at the table and we all sat around. I sat between Brett and Jessie while Chef Paul walked around, revealing his famous spaghetti, which is my friend's favorite food to eat at my house.
"Hey Preston!" My brother Justin told him. They became friends and I have NO idea why but it might be the fact that Preston has a younger brother. Jessie's brother, Evan, Preston's brother, Johnny, Kate's sister, Kylie, Brett's sister, Casey, Nick's sister, Jackie, Travis' sister, Sarah, Kathryn's brother, Jackson, and my brother, Justin, are best friends also. And are oddly all in the same grade. Our families have been friends even before any of us were born, so when we all get together, it seems like we are family.


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