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Old 09-21-2008, 04:01 PM   #1
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hi guys this is a story about Middle School. lets meet the characters.
Jessica- The most popular girl at school who thinks she can sing but she really can't.
Robert - a smart kid who most people call a nerdy geek or a geeky nerd but he's really nice.
Hannah - a Jessica wanna-be
Angela - another Jessica wanna-be
Charlie - short for charlotte, she is a tomboy and hangs out with Jessica and her clones but can sing better than any of them and isn't sure they are her type.
Jordan - the coolest guy in school who is acctually a jerk.
Brandon - the football team star who Jessica hangs out with a lot.

ok well i have to go eat lunch now i will post more later.
dont abandon this thread just cuz there is not a story, YET. ok?

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ok i am back now!!!!!!!!! still munching a carrot....

Chapter 1- Jessica, Hannah, Angela and Charlie are walking down the hall during lunch because they had a sleepover the night before and ate so much they were not hungry.
"so guys," Charlie began when Hannah interrupted. "GUYS!!?!! why do you always say GUYS!?! cuz we are girly girls unlike you."
"alright GIRLS" Charlie continued "do you think that we should do something for the school talent show?"
"oh yeah totally!" said Jessica, still looking at her cellphone. "OH MY GOSH! Brandon texted me again!! i think he likes me or something!"
"oh let me see!" Angela leaned over Jessica's shoulder. "aww! he said 'see you soon'"
Charlie rolled her eyes. She didn't care about people liking each other or dating. "So what should we do?"
"huh?" Jessica asked. "oh. silly me. we should... definitley... sing a song!"
"are you sure?" Charlie asked. "you're really good at... uh... dancing..."
"your kidding me!!" Jessica laughed. "don't you remember my little incident last year?"
Charlie sighed. Jessica had gone to the spring dance with some wierd dude and they both hated each other. Jessica had fallen while she was dancing and had to go to the hospital and get 3 stiches on her eybrow. Now she wore so much make up to cover it up that Charlie was sure it looked worse than if she had left it alone.
"so i guess we are singing a song." Charlie said.
"ooh goodie!" Hannah squealed.
"can we sing 'too cool' from Camp Rock? Tess is like, soo my favorite." Angela blurted out.
"of course!" Jessica quickly agreed.
Charlie said "I have to get to class" and took off down the hall.
"What's with her?" asked Hannah.
"I don't know!" Jessica said. "I hope we didn't like, hurt her feelings or something."

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Old 09-21-2008, 04:16 PM   #2
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Hahaha! Great first chapter! Could you add a girl in there? Her name is Cassie (short for Cassandra), and she is kinda shy but an amazingly fabulous singer. She has stage fright, really likes Camp Rock (she kinda even looks like Mitchie) and is really smart.
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Old 09-21-2008, 04:36 PM   #3
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maybe, i'll think about it. but she can't be a better singer than charlie because... well because...
only read the spoiler if you want to know part of the ending, thats why its called a SPOILER
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Charlie is gonna win the talent show!
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Old 09-21-2008, 05:07 PM   #4
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Can they sing equally fabulous? (I like the word fabulous)
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Old 09-22-2008, 12:19 PM   #5
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ok here is chapter 2 i have creative writing for school so i'm doing it online right here!

As Charlie rushed down the hall she wondered why she had reacted so badly. She was frustrated that the other girls liked things she didn't, and that she hardly ever got to help make any decisions. Jessica and Hannah and Angela were not mean at all, but they still got on her nerves sometimes. She went into her social studies class and thought about how to apologize to the other girls when she was supposed to be learning the capitals of South American countries.
"Charlotte, what is the capital of Brazil" the teacher, Mrs. Adams asked.
"huh?" Charlie jerked her head up. "oh. uh, well,"
"If you don't know please just tell me that you don't know so that i can ask somebody else." Mrs. Adams told her.
"I, don't... know" Charlie mumbled. She wasn't embarrassed, she never got embarrassed.
"alright then, make sure you study extra hard tonight, because we are having a quiz tomorrow." Mrs. Adams said. "Robert, do you know the answer?"
"Brasilia" Robert quickly answered.
D-uh Charlie thought. Why couldn't I remember that?
After class, as she was putting her pens back into her bag, someone tapped her on the shoulder. it was Robert. "uh, hi" he said. "If you need help memorizing the capitals, i have a study method that i could show you... it usually works. We could meet at my house after school. It's really easy and it won't take long to learn."
"ok, i guess, but i have to call my mom" Charlie said.
"great, see you later" Robert said, then took off down the hall.
Robert was a sort-of friend of Charlie's, she didn't know him very well but they had talked a couple of times and had done a science project together.
Charlie dug out her cellphone that was black and ugly but she didn't care. She stepped outside the school into the field out back because there was a rule that cellphones had to be off inside of school. "hi, mom?" she said as soon as she picked up.
"yes what is it honey"
"i'm going to study with a friend after school is that ok?"
"sure, i'm going to be working late anyway so nobody will be home until 6:00 anyway."
"ok thanks"
"sure thing, oh sorry i have to go it's time for my meeting. love you!"
"i love you too mom bye"
"bye"
Charlie hung up and walked back inside just as the bell rang. she made a mad dash to music class where the classroom was in an uproar. She found Angela and asked "what on earth happened?"
"oh well as you know the school talent show is coming up and everyone wants to do something but they are having auditions first so only the best 10 acts will make it and everyone wants to get in."
"they are having auditions TODAY?!?" charlie said.
"yes but since we aren't ready yet we are going to be participating in one of the later auditons on friday. they are going to be lasting all week." Angela told her.
"phew" Charlie sighed in relief.
"we are having practice at my house right after school" Angela said.
Charlie sat up straighter. "oh no, i can't come!"
"why not?"
"i promised Robert i would come to his house and study with him."
"awww....."
"it's not what you think, Angela. I need help with my memorization for the test tomorrow and he needs a friend because since his parents divorced he's been very lonely."
"oh, i see." angela said. "well, you can practice on your own then. Here's how we split up the song." Angela handed charlie a sheet of paper that had the words to "too cool" written on it, with names next to each of the lines.
Just then the teacher came in. everything quieted down.
After school, Charlie started walking toward's Robert's house. she knew where it was because she had been there before.

ok stay posted for chapter 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 09-22-2008, 02:26 PM   #6
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Good chapter. I need more!!
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Old 09-22-2008, 06:27 PM   #7
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hi guys i wrote almost a whole 3rd chapter and it all got deleted so i will rewrite it later but right now i am TIRED OF TYPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tell all your friends and i will try to get chapter 3 up this evening.
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Please write more!!!

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Old 09-22-2008, 08:37 PM   #9
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Hi Sis, I saw you type pretty much the whole chapter and then accidentally delete it.
Somebody told me that once when they had done a whole day's work on the compy, somehow it deleted itself, so don't feel down about it.:gwolf:Howler, our wolf (I said to call it A.N.G.A. minus the periods, but my bro wouldn't listen) PM us to give him some potato chips. They're his favorite.

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Old 09-22-2008, 09:11 PM   #10
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