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Old 06-16-2008, 06:06 PM   #1
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CHAPTER 1 BEGININGS

RockTail returned with a crow and tried to slip into his den undetected, of corse this drove the camp nuts! RockTail narrowly got through the tumble of foxes and was surprised when an elder yanked it out of his mouth. He lunged and grabbed it back driven by hunger. BlackPaw heard the comotion and rushed out, he was only a pup and never got any food due to weekness. He sat down and cryed silently as the foxes fought. RockTail was surrounded by hungry foxes when all of a sudden BlackEar jumped out snarraling "Give me the crow!" he barked gnashing his teath greadaly RedTail was reluctint to give in but BlackEar was strong, he snached the crow and began eating nipping everyone to come near his crow, so RockTail watched, with an empty stomach

(I will try to download a picture for this chapter)

CHAPTER 2 FIRE AT SUNSET

RockTail was hunting for something, anything, he was so hungry, his bones showed under his chest and he padded along the forest. RockTail came across a fat worm and yanked in out of its hole. SNAP! It broke off. RockTail ate his half then dug up the rest off the worm. It wasent a big meal but he was hungry enough to eat dirt. He was hunting 'till sunrise just to gain strength, and it was only noon. He was going to hunt for 12 hours streght. He greeadaly gobled up some Deth Berrys, they tasted terrible! He spat out there juses to avoid poisoning himself. Just as It was begining to get dark RockTail smelled something unussual, it was a campfire. The camp fire haddent been put out yet and some food was still left out! RockTail gobbled up some hot dogs and then smelled a burnt one in the fire. He leaned over the fire and POOOFFF! A giant fireball blew up in his face! RockTail ran screeming into the woods burning some tree branches. Lighting fire to the forest and hedding to the lake RockTail spat out ashes. He got to the lake and jumped in thoughowlly cleaning his burnt spots. He was burnt all over and singing hot. After he was feeling better he looked up and saw the woods where aflame, how was RockTail going to get back to camp?

(im drawing a picture for this chapter)

CHAPTER 3 WOLF CHASE

RockTail swam around looking for an opening. When he found one he jumped through it and the flames gave chase. Lapping at his sides the fire burst out in a pile of smoke and ashes RockTail hurried back to camp. He screamed as the fire burst out in his face again. He jumped into a clearing soon surounded by a wall of fire. im trapped! RockTail thought as the flames chewed everything in its path help! He took a tremendous risk and jumped over the flames. I made it! he thought but the flames where upon him again. He ran all the way back to camp and spat out the ashes "POTOEY! blech!" Soon the fire was apon the camp! She-foxes hid there pups, wolves went to weter parts of there den. RockTail colapsed as the fire closed in. Who was going to sae him now?

(Im also drawing a picture for this one)

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Old 06-16-2008, 06:35 PM   #3
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Old 06-22-2008, 01:06 PM   #5
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Old 06-22-2008, 01:40 PM   #6
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Hello ShadowLover! You have a very good story so far but you should slow it down a teensy bit and check your spelling oonce in a while so that people that are younger can read it a teensy bit better! Other then that you have a wonderful story!
Keep up the good work!
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