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Old 08-23-2007, 09:33 PM   #1
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Smile Hero the Dalmation
Spotted with sorrow
but
Patched with pride.

Willling to save others lives
even
if it means giving up his.

Seen terrible things
that
others haven't.

Able to call himself a hero.




Well...hope you liked that! Wrote it in about 2 minutes...it's about my dalmation...he works for the fire department.
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Old 08-23-2007, 09:50 PM   #2
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Beautiful! The alliteration in the first stanza - the 's' and 'p' sounds work very nicely.
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Old 08-24-2007, 05:14 PM   #3
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Thank you!
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Old 08-24-2007, 10:13 PM   #4
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Wow, how lovely!
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Old 08-25-2007, 09:45 PM   #5
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That's cool. I like it.
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cool i liked it
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Old 08-25-2007, 09:48 PM   #7
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Very nice, and very heroic sounding
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