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Old 10-27-2009, 04:48 PM   #1
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Talking Halloween Horrors Chapters 1-2

Chapter 1: Amanda's Dream

As green and purple lights flashes right before my eyes, I saw something. It was talking to me, "Amanda, give me the key to-" BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP. My alarm was blaring off, drowning out the sound of the thing. I heard my mother yell, "AMANDA YOU BETTER BE DOWN HERE IN 5 MINUTES OR I'LL FEED YOU TO THE WOLVES!" She said. I arose to find my self in my sky blue bedroom. I sighed as I looked at the calender. I moaned. "Ugh, school. Hip hip hooray." I climbed from my bed and slowly I waddled to the kitchen. I ate my oatmeal and drank my juice and changed into my Wal*Mart $1 t-shirt, L.E.I pants, and slipped on my Old Navy Flip Flops. I got my book bag to find the bus in front of my house. I flew out the door and loaded on to the bus. 'Let the nightmare begin." I said.

Chapter 2: A Nightmare Called Halloween

As I loaded off the bus and into the hallway, the smell of purfume and sweat filled my nose. It was worse than dirty laundry. I remembered what day it was, Halloween. Girls dressed up in maid and cheerleaders were just some of the costumes there. I couldn't believe it. It was still October and there was snow on the ground. Soon I walked into math to find my math teacher, Mr. Donager dressed up as a hippy. The next class, I found the teacher to be a block of chesse. That day went by like a wild cat. Before I knew it, I was at my after-school baking class. I found some papers on my teachers desk. As she wrote on the board I pointed at the papers. Soon I remembered what they where- monster pictures! Soon before you knew it, poorly drawn pictures where flying everywhere. "Amanda what did you do?!" My teacher asked. I sunk down in my seat. Uh-oh.

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Cool beginning
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I like how you left us hanging! Great beginning. I'll come back to see what happens next!

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Old 10-29-2009, 09:01 AM   #4
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Thank you! Thank you! *bows* I love to keep my reader HANGING!

Chapter 3: A Magic Life

I couldn't believe it... I'M MAGIC! I couldn't speak. "I I I I I'm sorry." I said. I ran out the door grabbing my bookbag to find my mother standing right there. "Ahem? Missey I'm soooooo furious. You should be ashamed! I hope you know you'll be grounded for-" "MOM I'M MAGIC!" I said interupting my mom. She fainted and landed on a pinecone. She was sent to the ER for a week. Soon I got a letter in the mail. "Hmmmm what's this? Oh, no." I said.
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