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Old 09-12-2009, 01:31 PM   #1
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you may have seen my thread for this story before but it was closed.
i forgot to get permission.
if you have something has been changed in the summery.
the flood wiil be started by heavy rainfall.
hope you enjoy my story.

This is approved ~missgnomie


chapter one: friends from school.

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Kiwi, Einstien and Marlene were friends from their childhood to now. Kiwi was much of a leader. Einstien was always the smartest of any group he ever joined. Kiwi and Marlene were the only ones who would accept him. Marlene was always so nice to everyone. The three were very creative through their whole lives. At the age of 37 they talked to the school board to start their own school. Kinzville has only had Kinzville Academy. It wasn't enough. The superintindent, a dalmatian named Spot, agreed with the idea. Marlene the nicest Sea Otter in Kinzville took the job of teaching the whole lower graded section (at least until more teachers were found). She was then known as Ms. Oat. Einstien took the upper grades to himself. He was then known as Mr. Oakwood, the Grey Owl. Kiwi took the position as principal. Principal Carter, the Koala. "That had a good ring to it" he said. kinzville's new school was almost ready to open.


chapter two: More teachers
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While Kiwi and Einstien were Marlene's best friends, they weren't her only friends. Hopper the Frog and Smores the Mocha Pup were always willing to let Marlene into their home. Their daughter was Ele, the Velvety Elephant. Ever since Marlene got the job as a teacher, Ele had more respect for her. because she too wanted to teach when she grew older. Marlene was visiting the family to ask for a small favor, .... actually a big favor. She was going to ask if they'd be okay withe teaching at the new school. Hopper and Smores immediately agreed. But the parents loved being close to their daughter, so they pulled her out of Kinzville Academy and put her in the new school (yet to be named). Ele argued, but she had no choice but to go to the school. she was not the only prson transferring. But none of gr friends were transferring.

chapter three: Alone

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Hi it's Ele, the wne who's been writing in this book for the past couple months. I have to move schools! My parents got a job at the new school each. I used to look up to Marlene, but now she got my parents moving my school and I hate her. The school's name was announced in the news, it's called Kenwood. It has no Elementary, Middle or High to it. It's a school for all grades. Disaster's going to the school too. Not a real disaster, but the gang. Th members are Midnight, the Black Panther, Jinx, the Black Cat, and Karma, the Bat. But thank goodness that Jinx isn't moving with them. And now I'm terrified of the school. I still can't understand why Kinzville Academy wasn't enough. Why'd Marlene and her friends have to go and make a new school? Well I hope something really bad happens to that school before it starts. Since my parent are gone at the staff meeting for the school, I'm pretty much alone right now. And to make matters worse, I'm getting more scared every second.

chapter four: predictions
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Marlene, Kiwi, Einstien, Hopper and Smores were to see Spot today. To their surprize, they weren't the only ones in the room when they got there (they all went togeher). There was a Groundhog and Ring-Tailed Lemur. They just sat down and waited for Spot. When Spot finally arrived, he explained that Hazel (the Groundhog) and Julian (the Ring-Tailed Lemur) were more teachers for Kenwood. Spot handed Kiwi a list of the students going to the school. It wasn't very long. Spot also said that the school was built. He mentioned that it was next to a river. Once the meeting was over, the group of teachers left. Kiwi was the one driving the others. On his last stop (Einstien's house), Einstien said something strange. He said "Some things start good, then become bad, and then you just can't predict what will happen." He said that and then left the car. Kiwi couldn't sleep that night. He could only think about what Einstien said. He didn't admit it, but he was scared.



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Old 09-14-2009, 04:08 PM   #2
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i luv it, and im not just saying that.
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Old 09-14-2009, 04:09 PM   #3
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thanks it gets intense soon
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Old 09-14-2009, 04:13 PM   #4
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just like every good story, except 4 mine!!! XD mine gets bad....... not bad as in poorly written, bad as in Amber gets caught!!! did not see that comin, did ya?
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Old 09-14-2009, 04:14 PM   #5
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no i did not
now i'm scared for amber
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Old 09-16-2009, 08:26 PM   #6
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i know the story is getting boring but while some stories get right to the point, mine moves along slowly. it's just to add suspense later.
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Old 09-17-2009, 10:42 PM   #7
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I like it, but IMO the sentences are a bit short
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Old 09-19-2009, 01:43 PM   #8
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i'm adding a vm/pm list for anyone who wants to be on it
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Old 10-02-2009, 11:01 PM   #9
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Awesome! Anymore chapters?
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Old 10-02-2009, 11:11 PM   #10
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i'm actually adding a chapter soon,
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