The Crash: A story about a girls terrible car accident and the Animals that changed her life!

Yes. I love animals. I want to be a vet and apparently animals aren't hitting it too much unless it has an actual human story before it. So here it goes(p.s. this is just a part of chapter 1):

Chapter 1-part 1

Allie was a normal 13 year old girl. Her parents were normal. Her brother was normal. And their house was normal.
"Come on kids!"Dad yelled"Time to get into the car."
I raced my brother downstairs and beat him to the car. Dad, Mom, Tim(my brother) and I left the driveway and headed towards the pizza parlor.
"Wow"Mom said"It sure is icy outside."
And then a speeding truck came down the road and before anyone could do anything, the truck started to spin and came straight towards our car. Dad was able to miss the truck but both of us went towards something else. The truck hit a large tree and we hit a electrical pole. Luckily, the belt left no pernament damage for my neck. But then, I felt the car shake and my head went forward and it all went black.

"We need a medic over here ASAP!"
I opened one eye and saw a rescue worker leaning over me. I was laid out on a blanket. Pain was shooting down my right leg. I screamed.
"Calm down"the worker said"We have a paramedic coming for you."
I blinked. "Are my parents okay?"
The worker nodded. "But there will be pernament damage to you."
I pointed at myself. I wanted to cry so bad but I didn't.
"Is my brother okay?"I asked."
"What brother? There was no other kid in the car"the worker said."
What!


To be continued!

[wolfpackgrl15]

Wow, you have a great writing style. That is extremely good, Wg23! I really really liked it! I'm going to subscribe to this thread.

Chapter 1-part 2

I blinked again and saw two more guys appeared. They lifted me up and gently helped me walk to the ambulance. The two other guys listened to my heart and wrapped my leg up.

At the hospital, they rushed me through the doors of the emergency room.
"Serouisly injured"one guy said"Severe leg injury and broken arm."
The doctor unwrapped my leg and gasped. "Definatly severe leg injury and a broken arm."
The doctor frowned. He gave me some type of shot then I fell asleep.

I opened my eyes and saw my parents standing around me. The two rescue workers were right. My parents were fine except for some scratches on their arms which was a miracle.
"Well, the leg is pernament damage and there isn't anything we can do to fix the broken leg or arm. So both of those things are pernament"The doctor said"The best thing I can subscribe is getting her a guide Dog. Most likely, a Golden Retriever. Here's a number of a Golden Retriever Guide Dog training center. Depending on how bad the damage is, the owners might not give you the Dog for free."
I had always wanted the Dog and now I was getting a Dog!

[wolfpackgrl15]

Aw this is so sad, but i still like your style, Wg23

[cah117]

WOW! Really good! But, What happened to the brother?

Chapter 1-part 3

But never had I realized that the Golden Retriever I was getting was trained to be a guide Dog. So when we went to the Guide Dog training center, I was able to walk. I think the doctor meant pernament damage as in leaving a mark because I could walk perfectly but it was my arm that was hard for me to do anything.Hopefully I would still be able to get a Guide Dog. When we got there, a woman greeted us.
"Hello, you must be Allie"the woman said"Lily is waiting for you."
Lily must be my Guide Dog. And she was. Lily was a purebred, white Golden Retriever. White Golden Retrievers were very rare and the woman said that I was lucky enough to get Lily. I was eldigble to get Lily for free. My parents had to sign their names at least 1500 times! While I sat down on the ground, Lily was laying beside me, head resting on her paws.
"It was pleasure doing business with you"Mom said."
"You are so welcome. Lily is a great Dog"the woman said."
So we left and when we go to the house, Lily just followed me and barked when she saw danger. I was not blind, thank goodness.

Every night, Lily would curl up on the bed with me but this night was different. I heard a lot of moving on the back porch. I peered outside my window and saw a pregnant Cat moving around like crazy. I creeped towards the back door and slowly opened it but the Cat ran.
"Oh no!"I said quietly."
The light flicked on and Mom appeared in her robe.
"What's the matter?"Mom asked."
"There was a pregnant, hungry Cat on our front porch but I scared it off"I said."
Mom looked outside and sighed. "Get to bed. Maybe it'll be there tomorrow.

But the next morning it was not there so I decided to trap it. I took my Dad's toolbox, some unused wood and started to build a trap to get the Cat. Hopefully it would work.



To be continued.

Originally Posted by cah117

WOW! Really good! But, What happened to the brother?

The brother comes back.....I will tell you one thing: 1: The brother was not in the car when the crash happened.

Chapter 1-part 4

And the trap did work. I got the pregnant Cat into the trap and she happened to have Kittens in there! The kittens were adorable that Mom promised that I could keep one. So I chose a orange stripped kitten. I named it Fuzzball. Then Dad called the local Humane Society and they said that the Cat was missing but the owner didn't care that I kept a kitten. So after that day of trapping the kitten, I decided to make a larger one to catch stray Dogs but it was then when my parents announced something very exciting.
"We have 2 announcments"Mom said"We found your brother. He's at the hospital with a severe sprained ankle. He's coming home next week."
"And we're moving!"Dad said"Now, its just out in the country and there's a field behind there so you and Lily can play together."
I smiled and rubbed Lily's fur. So after the announcments I set out to build the bigger trap for stray Dogs and puppies. And it was a success. I tested it with Lily. Nothing pulled her fur. Nothing even hurt her. It was completley hurtless.

The next morning, I woke up and checked the traps. The cat trap was empty and the Dog trap's food was gone!

[shihtzu15]

I love this! Keep writing!

[cah117]

I really like this story! I am going to suscribe

[wolfpackgrl15]

Me too! lolz