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Old 10-12-2009, 04:17 PM   #1
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Default Camp Yukon: A Camp For The Unique, The Fine, The Great, Super Harmonies.*Approved, Got PM Earlier today*

Hi! I wanted you to know that this story is approved. I got the PM earlier this morning.

Now, here is some information about the story. Harmonies are heroes in training, who must attend Camp Yukon, a training camp. You do not have to be a certain age to become a harmony, but, you must be related to a retired hero.

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The long wait had finally stopped. I was twelve. Twelve may not be that old, but it was good enough for me. Now all I had to do was walk downstairs. Slowly, I slipped out of worn out pajamas, and changed into a party dress.

Slowly, I tip toed down the stairs. Enjoying the last couple seconds of eleven. Done! It was official. I was twelve. Joy trickled through my veins, filling me with energy. Year twelve just leaped off of the platform called life.


Chapter One
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Horman Street was full of life, cars bouncing around like colors on a painting. Faded advertisements were everywhere. The light turned a bright red, and I was allowed to cross a typical city street.

Evony was my best friend, and my only friend. She lived on Horman Street, like many other students at Horman Elementary. She was twelve, also. Evony was coming over today, to help decorate for party.

I thought long and hard about my party. My mother wanted me to have one, and invite my ENTIRE class. That was when I flinched. Crisp autumn air gripped my face like it had hands. For a couple seconds, I forgot where I was. But as soon as a car horn honked, I remembered. Horman Street!

That car who honked sped past the red light, aiming for me. I couldn't move. "WAIT!" Evony jumped in front of the car. The driver quickly stopped. Saved kept repeating itself in my mind. Evony pulled me up, and we stumbled to the sidewalk. "Thanks." I mumbled. I was awstruck. What had just happened? Who was the driver? What where they doing?

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Evony and I stood on our tippy toes, trying to finish putting up the last string of ribbon. I tacked the nails in, after several attempts, and several blistered finger tips. Finally. We were finsihed. Evony slipped outside. The air was tight and cold. I felt dizzy, and kind of dazed.

I slowly felt the earth swaying around like one of those rides at the fair. My eyes were drooping. I felt more dizzy. I grasped a nearby chair, trying not to fall straight down. The air hushed and shushed around me. I felt like I had the higga jibbies. As soon as I let go, thinking I was fine, I fell straight down, and was surrounded by a bitter cold black scene.



Chapter Two
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"She'll be FINE!" "How would you know?" "I'm related to her!" "She needs medical attention!" "Shush! Her eyes are flicking!" My older brother and Evony surrounded me, leaving me only half of a half of an inch to breathe. "I'm FINE!" I yelled, stunning Evony. An electric shock felt like it was fizzing up in my lungs. The light lighting the room flicking. PING!

The lightbulb went out, and Evony's face was so dark I couldn't make it out. "Come on. We're still gonna party!" Evony whispered, guided me to the door. "Oh, look who decided to finally show up! Blow out the candles!" Mom shouted. The light above me flickered, and then flickered some more. I blew out my candles, trying to be cautious, making sure the lightblulb didn't explode.

After my party, Evony's mom picked her up. I layed down on or torn sofa, trying to control my headache. "Sweetie," Mom began, turning the light off with her pointed fingernail, "I've got a SECRET. Yes, a SECRET. Wanna hear a SECRET?" Mom drummed her fingernails on the coffe table, while I was wondering who replaced my mother. "It's the fact that you are, a harmony."

My jaw dropped. Harmony? I knew it. Mom once was a harmony. Yes, a harmony. A superhero in training. Grandpa told me about them. But they were susposed to be LEGENDS! "Hun, you're going to Camp Yukon." She kept on dreumming, waiting for my response. "Um, what is Camp Yukon?" I asked, trying not faint again. "Camp Yukon? Oh, it's nothing but something bigger than life. No biggie."
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Old 10-13-2009, 06:32 PM   #2
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Old 10-14-2009, 06:29 PM   #3
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Hey super story hope you will be writing more soon. Thanks for sharing it with those of us here on WI.
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Old 10-14-2009, 09:35 PM   #4
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Thanks to both of you! You guys are amazingly nice!
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Old 10-22-2009, 09:54 PM   #5
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Default Re: Camp Yukon: A Camp For The Unique, The Fine, The Great, Super Harmonies.*Approved, Got PM Earlier today*

New chapter is ADDED!
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Old 10-25-2009, 05:38 PM   #6
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Great new chapter!!! Keep writing!!!!
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