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Old 09-02-2008, 03:26 PM   #81
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Chapter 6

Everyone quickly rode in the tour bus back to the girls' neighborhood to get their things. They are all next door neighbors. Jessica wasn't allowed to go on tour with them.

Aaron: Okay! I'm ready! *walks out carrying a few duffel bags*
Jamie: Me, too! *walks out carrying a few duffel bags*
Nick: What is taking Lexy so long?
Aaron: Not sure. I'll go check. *goes into Lexy's house*
Aaron: Lexy, hurry up!
Lexy: Umm, can you come up here for a sec?
Aaron: *goes into Lexy's room* What's the- OMG.


Lexy has at least 13 duffel bags stuffed to the top piled high on her bed.

Lexy: *grins* I might need a little help.
Aaron: What you need is a bulldozer! *yells out window* Hey guys! Lexy needs a little help carrying all of the contents of her room to the bus!


After 15 minutes of lugging the bags downstairs, they finally hit the road. They all find a seat on the bus.

Jamie: Where is the first stop on the tour?
Joe: Phoniex. That's in Arizona.
Kevin: State the obvious, Joe.
Nick: *has his arm around Lexy (AWWW!)* Why couldn't your sis come, Jamie?
Jamie: Luckily, she is starting camp tomorrow.
Lexy: Trust me. Not that Jessica isn't a nice girl or anything, but she gets SO annoying after a while.
Aaron: Jamie's mom said she might join us later on in the trip.
Kevin: Hey, Aaron. Whatever happened to your car?
Aaron: *shrugs* Hopefully the mechanic came and towed it away.


They spend hours talking to each other, and pretty soon they are in Phoniex. The hotel they are staying at has a giant suite with a room for each of them.

Nick: Woah! This place is huge!
Lexy: I know!

Suddenly, a brown haired girl comes out from behind a tree.

Nick: Miley.
Miley: Hey, Nicky!


Uh oh! Miley's here! That means trouble! Stay tuned for chapter 7!

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Old 09-02-2008, 03:39 PM   #82
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Aah it's MILEY!
great chapter!
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Old 09-02-2008, 03:49 PM   #83
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yayyyy! awesome!!! =D
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Old 09-02-2008, 04:09 PM   #84
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Loved it, I so need more!
Old 09-02-2008, 05:20 PM   #85
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Thanks guys!
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Old 09-02-2008, 05:28 PM   #86
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Hey no problem I'm here to support ya!
Old 09-02-2008, 05:42 PM   #87
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OMJ! This is an amazing story! I absoloutly am in love with it! It is wonderful but that Lexi girl better watch it! LOL
Great Job & I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!
5 stars!

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Old 09-02-2008, 06:29 PM   #88
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Yep, I love it so much cause I'm even in it! I'm with Kevin!
Old 09-02-2008, 06:38 PM   #89
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I love the new chapter! Miley ALWAYS gets in the way of things! That girl is so annoying in these stories!
Old 09-02-2008, 06:54 PM   #90
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Yeah I know! She is always like bad girl!
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