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Old 08-31-2008, 10:35 AM   #41
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Which one? I added chapter 5 to my claim to fame.
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Old 08-31-2008, 10:58 AM   #42
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I love your story, lilarini!
It's so good!

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Chapter 5

They arrive at the hospital and get Jamie a room. The others sit nin the waiting room while Jamie get her x-rays. The doctor comes out with a bunch of black a white paper.

Doctor: Bad news everyone. It appears that Jamie has broken her leg.
Lexy: No way!
Doctor: *nods* Yes way. She will have to stay overnight. Is there an adult who would be willing to stay with her?
Aaron: *stands up* I will. I'm the oldest and it is my responsibility.
Jessica: Where are me and Lexy supposed to go?
Joe: Could they stay with us Dad?
Mr. Jonas: Yeah, I guess. There is an extra room in our hotel suite.
Lexy: Thanks so much!


Aaron stays at the hospital while Lexy and Jessica go back to the hotel with the Jonas Brothers.

Lexy: You need to call your mom, Jess. She is probably scared to death.
Jessica: Okay. *leaves room*
Nick: *enters room* Hey, Lexy.
Lexy: Hey, Nick.
Nick: I have to ask you something.
Lexy: What is it?
Nick: Well, Joe, Kevin, and I were talking, and we wanted to know if you and your friends would like to come on tour with us.
Lexy: *jumps up* NO WAY! ARE YOU SERIOUS?
Nick: *grins* Yup!
Lexy: *hugs Nick* I am so excited!
Nick: Yeah, me too!
Lexy: Wait a second. What about Jamie's leg? I don't know if she could come on tour with a broken leg.
Nick: Oh. I didn't think about that.
Lexy: Well, I guess we'll find out in the morning.
Nick: Yeah, i guess.


The next morning, everyone heads down to the hospital to visit Jamie.

Lexy: UGH! My hair looks terrible! <<Lexy's hair
Nick: It's not that bad.
Doctor: You guys ready to see Jamie?
Everyone: YES!

They all walk into the hospital room where Jamie is laying down with a purple cast on her leg.


Kevin: How are you feeling, Jamie?
Jamie: Okay. My leg doesn't really hurt with the cast on.
Lexy: *elbows Nick*
Nick: Hey, Doc. The guys and I wanted to invite the girls on tour with us. Would Jamie be able to do that with her leg?
Doc: I don't see any problem with it.
Joe: Well then, looks like you girls are going on tour with the Jonas Brothers!

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Old 08-31-2008, 11:10 AM   #43
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cool!! you're doing a better job than I am, no doubt!

yay I have a purple cast!! (my favorite color is black) but that's okay!
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Old 08-31-2008, 11:16 AM   #44
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No way! You're story is way better than mine! (Speaking of which, POST MORE!)
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Old 08-31-2008, 11:19 AM   #45
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Yay great new chapter!
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Old 08-31-2008, 11:20 AM   #46
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I have a good idea for chapter 6!
I will post a lot more chapters tomorow because I have no school.
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Old 08-31-2008, 11:27 AM   #47
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Yes! I don't have school either lol hallelujah!
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Old 08-31-2008, 11:29 AM   #48
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School is not fun.
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Old 08-31-2008, 11:35 AM   #49
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I LOVE this story! More! More! More! lol
Old 08-31-2008, 11:38 AM   #50
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More will be up tomorrow probably.
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