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Old 08-31-2008, 12:07 AM   #31
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Yeah, like every single JB story has dating in it, but I don't wanna break the rules.
I don't know what I should do.
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Old 08-31-2008, 12:14 AM   #32
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hmmm... maybe just instead of saying like be my girlfriend, or go out with you could just say do you wanna be like really really really really really really reallly good friends? haha!!!

I LOVE your Avie, its SO funny! and thats actaully what me and my friend did except in best buy!
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Old 08-31-2008, 12:18 AM   #33
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Thanks!
Yeah, I guess I could do that. But Kabutofan's really long story has dating and isn't deleted.
Same with most of the JB stories I've seen.

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I think I'm going to bed now.
Good night!

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Old 08-31-2008, 12:20 AM   #34
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idk why, but i hope they aren't! i love their storires! as well as yours! if you subscibed to a thread and its deleted, would it be deleted in your subscritions?? hmmmmm.......

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good-night!

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Old 08-31-2008, 01:19 AM   #35
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I love that!!!
Old 08-31-2008, 08:30 AM   #36
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I love this story sososososo much! More please when you have time! And one of my JB stories lol I have 2 is about a little sister Jonas.
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Old 08-31-2008, 10:20 AM   #37
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Good morning!

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New chapter coming up!

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Chapter 4

The girls take their seats and talk excitedly about the concert, except for Lexy, who seems kind of sad.

Jamie: I am SO excited! *screams in Aaron's ear*
Aaron: So excited that you had to break my eardrums?!?
Jessica: I can totally tell that Nick likes me.
Lexy: *looks down*
Aaron: Jess, go get a soda.
Jessica: I'm not thristy! *pouts*
Jamie: Go get a soda or I'll tell Mom that you're the one who broke her favorite vase last month.
Jessica: *runs quickly to get a soda*
Aaron: Okay, what's up, Lexy?
Lexy: Nothing.
Jamie: Not true. If something wasn't up, you would be happier and excited, like us.
Lexy: Jess is right. Nick does like her.
Aaron: HA! Did you not see the way he looked at you?
Jamie: Yes, Lex. You can totally tell he likes you.
Lexy: *smiles* Really?
Aaron: Really.
Lexy: Thanks guys. I can always count on you two to make me feel better. *group hug*
Jessica: *appears* Hey, guys. They are all out of soda.
Announcer Guy: HELLO LOS ANGELES!
Crowd: *screams*
Announcer Guy: PLEASE WELCOME, THE JONAS BROTHERS!
Crowd: *screams louder*


Since they were going to bring the girls up on stage, Hello Beautiful was going to be their last song. And finally, it was time.

Joe: Now, it's time for a song you all should know. Hello Beautiful.
Nick: And we're going to pick a few lucky girls from the audience to join us on stage.
Crowd: *screams*
Band: *begins playing*
Kevin: *walks over to Lexy, Jamie, and Aaron* You three.
Lexy, Jamie, and Aaron: *mouths hang open*
Jessica: What about me?
Kevin: You, too.

The girls climb up on the stage. and the boys begin to sing. When the song is over, the girls exit the stage. But, Jamie is too focused on Joe (watch where you're going Lyssa! ), that she falls!


Lexy: Jamie!
Aaron: Uh oh! Are you okay?!?
Jamie: Yeah, but my leg is killing me.
Lexy: *turns to Nick* We have to get her to the hospital, Nick!
Nick: I'll go tell my dad!
Lexy: Hurry!


Soon, everyone is back on the bus.


Lexy and Nick's convo

Lexy: I hope Jamie's okay.
Nick: Don't worry, a little bit longer, and she'll be fine.
Lexy: *smiles* That's one of my favorite songs by you guys.
Nick: Yeah, me too.


Aaron and Kevin's convo


Kevin: Are you sure she'll be okay?
Aaron: Yeah, she's a tough kid.
Kevin: I hope you're right!

Joe, Jamie, and Jessica's convo

Joe: I officially give you the nickname of Danger 2!
Jamie: *laughs* Thanks!
Jessica: Next time, don't stare at Joe like that and maybe you won't fall!
Jamie: *face turns bright red* I wasn't staring at Joe. He, uh, had something in his teeth.
Joe: *grins*


Will Jamie be okay? Are the Jonas Bros and the girls starting to like each other? Find out in chapter 5!

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Anyone there?

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Old 08-31-2008, 10:33 AM   #38
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*GASP!*

Haha I'm so clumsy!
And a clutz (if that's even a word)
I probably would do that if I saw them
great chapters I ♥ them!
MORE!
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Old 08-31-2008, 10:33 AM   #39
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Yay great new chapter! More please must have chapter 5!
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Old 08-31-2008, 10:33 AM   #40
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I'll post more when you post more to your story!
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