Burnin' Up- a JB story

jobros87 · 08-30-2008, 02:01 PM

Hey everyone!
I decided to make my own story about the Jonas Brothers called Burnin' Up.

Characters-

Lexy- Age 15 (Played by me)
Lexy is smart, funny, sweet, and loves to hang out with her friends. She is a passionate singer, songwriter, and plays the piano. She is shy, but once you get to know her, she is loud and crazy! She LOVES the Jonas Brothers, especially Nick. She has wavy golden brown hair and warm brown eyes.

Aaron- Age 19 (Play by I_LV_WEBKINZ)
Aaron is super funny and loves to hang out with her friends. She is not afraid to be herself and stand out. She can play every single Jonas Brothers song on her guitar. Kevin Jonas is her idol, and she would do anything to meet him. She has dark brown hair and brown eyes.

Jamie- Age 17 (Play by Lyssa45)
Jamie loves to play guitar, sing, and ice skate. She is OBSESSED with churros! One day she will most likely turn into a churro! She loves the Jonas Brothers, and thinks Joe is awesome. She has a sister named Jessica. She is active but shy. She has straight dirty blonde hair and aqua blue eyes.

Jessica- Age 14 (Played by Champiceskater)
Jessica is exactly like her sister, except she loves Nick Jonas! She has curly blonde hair and blue eyes.

And of course, the Jonas Brothers! I'm sure I don't need to introduce them though.

Chapter 1

Lexy, Aaron, Jamie, and Jessica all sat at the kitchen table waiting for Jamie's mom to bring out the presents. Today was Jamie's birthday. And there was one thing that she wanted more than anything else in the world. Jonas Brothers concert tickets.

Jamie: Hurry up, Mom!
Lexy: Yeah, Mrs. H! You're missing Jess burp the alphabet!
Jessica: X..Y..Z! *takes a bow*
Aaron: *rolls her eyes* It's amazing that you three made it past the second grade.
Jamie's mom: Okay, time for presents!

Jamie opens all of her presents, until finally there is only one envelope left.

Jamie: *holds her breath* NO WAY!
Lexy: What is it?!?
Aaron: *looks at Jamie's present* FRONT ROW SEATS TO SEE THE JONAS BROTHERS!
Lexy: *screams* You're kidding, right?
Jamie's mom: *grins* Nope! You girls have front row seats for tomorrow's concert!
Aaron: How did you manage these seats, Mrs. H?
Jamie's mom: A friend of mine manages the lights for their concets.
Lexy: Awesome!
Jamie's mom: You girls better get some sleep.
Jamie: How can we sleep when we are going to the Jonas Brothers concet tomorrow?!?!
Aaron: Your mom is right. Come on guys. I'm pretty tired.

How will the concert go? Find out in Chapter 2!

I know it's not very good, but please no bad comments.

08-30-2008, 02:11 PM

First post- I love it!!!!! More!

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Lexy is like, my identical twin except older! I look like her, share her personality... werid.

aivilonna · 08-30-2008, 02:31 PM

Good Chapter...

jobros87 · 08-30-2008, 03:25 PM

Thanks for the comments!

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I will be adding more soon!

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Please rate my story!

angel18032 · 08-30-2008, 03:27 PM

more more more!!!! great start! i can't wait for more!!!!!!

jobros87 · 08-30-2008, 03:28 PM

Thanks!

I'll add more soon. I'm still planning chapter 2.

Lyssa45 · 08-30-2008, 03:37 PM

nice start I love it!!

I need more!

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( and the revenge begins )

jobros87 · 08-30-2008, 03:45 PM

Chapter 2

The girls woke up at 4:00 the next morning. They were bursting with excitement they all ate breakfast, showered, dressed, then piled into Aaron's car.

Lexy: How long will it take to get there?
Jamie: *looks at map* Should take about 5 hours.
Jessica: I'm SOOOO excited! I can see it now. Nick will look into my eyes and realize that I'm his true love. *sigh*
Lexy: Ha! In your dreams!

About an hour into there trip, the car suddenly stops.

Lexy: Uh, Aaron? You have to keep your foot on the gas pedal to make the car move.
Aaron: I know! It won't go!
Jamie: Did you forget to put gas in again?
Aaron: *looks at gas meter* UGH! YES! It's empty!
Jessica: Call a car mechanic.

They all get out of the car while Aaron calls the mechanic.

Aaron: *hangs up* Bad news guys. The mechanic is really busy and can't get here for like, 6 hours.
Jamie: But the concert starts at 7:00! And It's 12:00! It takes four hours to get to the stadium!
Jessica: I guess we can't go to the concert...

Suddenly, a large black tour bus pulls up next to them. The letters JB are painted on the side. Three boys get out of the bus.

Boy #1: You guys need any help?