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Old 07-09-2008, 11:05 AM   #1
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Don't Miss It! An Exiting, Action Packed Story For All The Good Readers Out There! Read more people!

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"When are we going dad?" asked Nicole. Nicole was a 9 year old tripelet. She had long blond sun-streaked hair and a pretty face. "Dad..." she moaned again. They were going to go to Six Flags for the summer. "I'm almost done contacting the HQ. Then we can go." The whole family had special powers and were somewhat like superheroes. "Dad!" Nicole's triplelets came in the room. There was Brooke who looked like Nicole and Kyle. Kyle had blonde hair with natural brown highlights. He was rather charming. "I'm done!" Their dad announced. "BOOOOM!!!" The wall in the living room suddenly crumbled to pieces. Revealing... Stay tuned to hear more!

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Old 07-09-2008, 11:37 AM   #2
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Wow, I totally was not expecting the BOOOOM!!! I thought it was going to be all about trying new things and riding the scary roller coaster (not that that's bad) but this is way different! Also, one of the tags says super powers? I can't wait to read more...
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Old 07-09-2008, 04:39 PM   #3
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the Big, the Bad, the Bostix! It was a large white veicle that said the Bostix on the side in large red letters. Judy, the mom ran into the room. "What happened?' she cried. "We have come for our revenge!' cried a booming voice. Two people hopped out of the Bostix. One tall women with piercing blue eyes and a man with black eyes that looked like endless tunnels. 'I am Nancy' shrieked the women.'And I am James." called the man. "We are" they said together."the NJnix" "We have come to defeat you so you can't stop our control of earth. Everyone will be our minions." Nancy explained. There was a moment of silence. Suddenly the whole family shot lasers at Nancy and James. They screamed."James! Where are our weapons?" Nancy called. "um..." "Retreat!" shrieked Nancy. They dove into the Bostix. "We'll be back! We will!" they yelled as the Bostix flew away.

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*sigh* Since no one is going to post I have to close this post.

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Old 07-10-2008, 11:33 AM   #4
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I like the new chapter! Great detail with the eyes!
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Old 07-10-2008, 12:31 PM   #5
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Yeah I like this! Keep writing.
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Old 07-10-2008, 01:10 PM   #6
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thanks! Next Section coming up!

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"Now can we go!" the triplets all whined. " We can't go to a amusement park and forget all about this!" Robert, the dad cried. "They ruined our wall right after we painted it." said Judy gesturing to the open space. "Easy!" cried Kyle. He put his hand into the hole and the wall reappeared. Fixing thing was one of Kyle's many talents. Then he put his hand on the wall and cream colored paint wiped across it. "There!" exclaimed Kyle. Then suddenly a light blue glow appeared in the middle of the room.

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Old 07-12-2008, 04:32 PM   #7
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If people won't post I'll close this thread.
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Old 07-12-2008, 04:47 PM   #8
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I like it!
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Old 07-12-2008, 08:56 PM   #9
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thanks! Thanks soo much. 2 more posts till the last chapter
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Old 07-13-2008, 05:25 PM   #10
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I'm waiting for...........

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........... moooooooooooooooore story! Hey, that's your two!

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