Hi!, Im new here and im making a story

One day the was this girl webkinz ...
she was new to town and didn't know where to start! Here is the story ...

* Bashfull walks in too her new school , wondering and confused *
" Hi!, everybody im Bashfull and im new here so maybe one of ya'll can be nice and tour me around!? "
*THE PREPS ...*
:ppony::clyde: " leader: Uh .... Bashfull newsflash for ya ... TRY TO PUT ON MAKEUP before you go to school , followers: " Yay! your soooo UGLY!!! " Leader flips her hair back in bashfull confused and blushed red face ... * EVERYBODY LAUGHS AND WALKS AWAY TOO THERE CLASS *
Except for one webkinz that stayed that ACTUALLY CARED ...
Oh ... uh ... are you alright?
* TEARS SPREAD ALL OVER BASHFULLS FACE *
~.~ to be continued ...


---------- AngelKat added 5 Minutes and 2 Seconds later ----------

PART 2 ...
Oh...uh...are you alright?
* TEARS SPREAD ALL OVER BASHFULLS FACE *
" Oh!, don't cry uh ... Bashfull! It's okay!!! "
* BASHFULL WIPES THE TEARS FROM HER FACE *
" Oh!, just PLEASE leave me alone i just don't understand how sometimes people can be just SO RUDE!!!
" Awww!, it's okay! im one of the * NICE *
* NORMAL * people "
" Am i REALLY that ugly?!? "
" NO!!!! OMG your like one of the MOST BEAUTIFULEST webkinz i seen!!! And PLUS your a collie!!! Collie's are one of the MOST SPECIALEST dogs around ESPICALLY webkinz world!!! "
* BASHFULL GRINS *
" Really?!? "
" REALLY!!!, they just said because their JEALOUS!!! "
~.~ to be continued ...


---------- AngelKat added 10 Minutes and 7 Seconds later ----------

PART 3 ...
" Really?!? "
" REALLY!!!, they just said because their JEALOUS!!! "
* SERENITY TAKES BASHFULLS PAW AND RUNS TO CLASS AND SAYS *
" Come on!, We got to go to are first class!, i'll show you around after class we'll have ALOT of time we have like 30 minutes after class until are next class so ... COME ON! "
* BASHFULL AND SERENITY WALKS IN THE CLASSROOM *
" Well hello there young ladys! Says Miss Honeybee , Oh Serenity! who's your new friend there!? "
" Oh!, hi Miss Honeybee! This is a new student Bashfull! "
" " Oh! WOWZERS really?! Awesome!!! Well hello there Bashfull! Welcome to Miss Cow-oh-lines
middle school!If u would just take a seat next to that desk over there! "
* MISS HONEYBEE POINTS TO A EMPTY DESK NEXT A NICE CLEAN DESK ... BASHFULL WALKS AND TAKES A SEAT AS SHE SITS SHE GLANCES AND SHE SEES SERENITY COME HER WAY AND SIT TO THE DESK RIGHT NEXT TO HER! *
~.~ to be continued ...

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Umm...that's a cool story, but I think it belongs over in "Member's Creations" not in "Help...I need a name."