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Old 09-04-2009, 06:03 PM   #1
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Default ~Arthena~What would you do if you found a whole other world?~ Chapter two up! :)

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Elizabeth (Lizzie) Marshall has dirty blond hair and dark blue eyes. She is 14. She has eight brothers and sisters. (Carson, Cassandra, Martin, Caitlyn, Elijah, Evelyn, Thomas, and Michaela) Lizzie loves to read, write and explore.
Peter is one of Lizzie's best friends, he has dark brunette hair and hazel eyes. He loves to tease Lizzie, Lilly, and his little sister, Abigail. He has known Lizzie and Lilly since first grade.
Lilly Port is also one of Lizzie's best friends. She has light auburn hair and blue eyes. She is an only child. Lizzie and her met at Sunday school when they where only two.
Lizzie's parents are Samuel and Kara Marshall.

Chapter one
I sat in my room, bored. I glanced outside my window and sighed. Peter was at his little sister's, violin recital, and Lilly had to do homework. I got up and went downstairs to the family room; surely there must be something on TV. I turned on the TV and flipped through all the channels. Nope, nothing on. Then I decided to go outside and explore the woods. My family has a huge wood behind our house, so maybe I would find some cool trees to climb or something.
I grabbed my boots and went outside. At least thirty minutes passed before I found any good climbing trees. I found a huge oak with at least a thousand long, sturdy branches. When I got to a good, strong branch I sat down and took in the view. It was beautiful! The trees looked so pretty and the small pond glistened. Then I saw something glowing behind the pond. I frowned and climbed down. When I reached the pond I saw an opening between two thin trees. The glowing object was right between them. I came closer to the object and saw it was a small rock. I reached down to touch it. When I did so I felt something like a shock wave go down my body. I looked around, I wasn't in Kansas (OK, Illinois) anymore. . .


Chapter two
I looked around. It appered that I was in the middle of a forest. It was quiet, a little to quiet. I got up and brushed myself off. Then I walked down a small, narrow path, hoping to find something-or someone. I finallly came across a small cave. I went in and sat down. I glanced at my watch. The hand wasn't moving. I frowned and took off the small backpack that I had brought with me on my "Adventure". I shook out the contents. I found a flashlight, two granola bars, a jug of water, my jacket, and a lighter. I put my jacket on and leaned back against the wall and sighed. Where was I?
"Hello?" Said a voice. I looked up. There, standing in front of me, was a Badger.




Sorry that the Chapters are so short!!!


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Old 09-04-2009, 06:15 PM   #2
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Old 09-04-2009, 06:29 PM   #3
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Thanks! I will try to!
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Old 09-05-2009, 12:27 PM   #4
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Whoa, AWESOME!!! Your a GREAT writer!!!! Keep writing...
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Old 09-05-2009, 12:29 PM   #5
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Old 09-11-2009, 05:18 PM   #6
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Anyone else like it?!?
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Old 09-11-2009, 08:00 PM   #7
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Old 09-12-2009, 09:21 AM   #8
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Old 09-13-2009, 02:44 PM   #9
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Very nice! You should most definitely continue writing!
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Old 09-13-2009, 03:10 PM   #10
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