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Old 03-10-2009, 08:36 PM   #1
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The Charge of Webkinz
29, 30! Celia Hart jumped out of her seat clasping on to her 30 dollar bills. Celia has been saving up to buy a webkinz Signature Panda. She was a total Webkinz fan and wanted the brand new panda coming out. Working from day to night at the toy store she finally saved up 30 bucks. Spending most of her money already on food for the family she finally has some left over cash. She rushed out to the hall and jumped into her mom's arms. Her mom was stirring a pot of potato stew, "I HAVE ENOUGH!" Celia yelped. Her mom smiled weakly and sat down, " Congratz, now go buy that webkinz that you deserve." Before even finishing the sentence Celia was pulling on her big snow boots. Rushing out she stared blankly at the toy store, their were SEVERAL DOZENS of kids yelling infront of the toy store. Celia walking slowly towards the mob and tapped her friend Misha. " Is this like the whole school?" "No, but most of the girls." "But theres only about 12 in stock..." "I know, everyone is pushing to the front." Following the crowd Celia snuck past several crying little girls, a large teen holding books, and a little boy holding his piggy bank. "They're so desperate" Celia sighed rushing past sweaty bodies. Finally to the door Misha and Celia tried to hold on until the store was going to open. Finally the bell rang, and in came an old man wearing jeans and a shirt saying, "Toy Store Forever" He gave a glimpse at us and looked at the 12 pandas standing on the pink stand. Smiling his big yellow teeth, he started to tease us. Holding the bears to his face and laughing non-stop. Everyone was getting mad, but then he took the 28.99 sign and walked to his desk. Drawing out a big black marker he scratched 28.99 and scribbled something on. He walked back hiding the sign. And smiled at us, settling down the small sign he finally turned it around while walking back to his desk. Everyone gasped, and some kids started crying. The sign wrote : 39.99, some kids started their way back to their homes while some snickered and stayed. "What a terrible old man" one said, "How brutal" "I saved 3 months of allowance" another cried. Walking back in depression I stared at Misha. "WAIT!" Misha pulled me back and pointed to the old man, he smiled and changed the sign back to 28.99, "HE WAS TEASING US!" I held my breath while I heard the kids CHARGE back to the store. He waited for ALL of us to be breathing heavily and jolted the door open. The old man ran back to his desk ready to sell webkinz signature, IT WAS CHAOS! Kids were screaming, some kids fought over, some threatened others while making their way to the cashier. These two little girls were cat-fighting and had left the panda down, I slowly picked it up. Before even blinking the girls spun around and tackled me. I screamed while Misha helped me, she was clutching a panda and snatched mine. She fought the girls off and took me to the cashier as fast as she could. I bought it quickly, I rushed home and me and misha locked ours into a big trunk which was locked into a closet and buried in clothes, and I planted my dog on guard. And the whole day me and Misha stared at eachother whispering, "WE DID IT!"
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Old 03-10-2009, 08:50 PM   #2
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Wow! This is very funny! And very good! This made me laugh! Is this going to be a series, or just a short story? If it is just a short story, then write more short stories. If it is a series, then write more chapters!
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Old 03-11-2009, 08:09 PM   #3
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I don't really know yet, but I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I might make it a series, it possible
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