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Old 07-26-2008, 02:48 PM   #1
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"I musn't, I musn't stop, I need elk, I need some food, I..." /slump/! Okami the wolf fell straight down on the ice for loss of conchessness. "Help me, please, help...." Okami sighed, looking up at the moon. Okami closed his eyes, waiting for himself to die. "I am ready, I'm ready. Take me. I'm ready." Okami lay there, in the dark, waiting for the cold ice to take him.

Please comment tell me if you liked it or not. Please be honest! I won't report you! Please comment telling me if you want to know what happens next. Does Okami die or does he find help in the frozen wasteland? You can find out by commenting! 5 good comments and chapter two will be made!

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Old 07-26-2008, 03:03 PM   #2
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Default Re: The White Wolf: A MUST READ for everyone! Please comment saying I should make the other chapter!

You have the Insperation to become a real Author. Keep working, and you'll get there!

-Hopes Okami will die... >3-


(If you can tell, I like sad storys!)

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Old 07-26-2008, 03:15 PM   #3
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LOL! Thanks so much for the nice comment! Have a great day!

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Old 07-26-2008, 03:21 PM   #4
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Default Re: The White Wolf: A MUST READ for everyone! Please comment saying I should make the other chapter!

Wow, that is pretty good! Keep going!
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Old 07-26-2008, 03:51 PM   #5
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Default Re: The White Wolf: A MUST READ for everyone! Please comment saying I should make the other chapter!

Thanks BananaPop! I love your story, about Hannah. You must make it a book!!!
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Old 07-26-2008, 07:32 PM   #6
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cool! btw, if u lose conciousness (sp?), u can't call out for help...
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Old 07-27-2008, 08:35 AM   #7
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Yeah, sorry about the spelling, I was in a hurry. I will make the next chapter have more effort!
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Old 07-27-2008, 08:41 AM   #8
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Thanks BananaPop! I love your story, about Hannah. You must make it a book!!!
Thanks! Can't wait for the next chappie
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Old 07-27-2008, 11:44 AM   #9
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Me either!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!
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