Webkinz Insider - Not affiliated with Ganz or Webkinz.

Welcome to WI!


Free Webkinz Codes

Ads  Remove Ads

Become an Insider Insider Subscriber and make these ads go away!
Go Back   Webkinz Insider Forum > It's All About The Webkinz! > Our Members' Creations > Creative Writing

Welcome to the Webkinz Insider Forum forums.

You are currently viewing our boards as a guest which gives limits your access to many of our other features. By joining our FREE community you will have access to post topics, communicate privately with other members (PM), removal of some (including the "in-text") ads, respond to polls, upload content and access many other special features, such as trading, and entering contests! Registration is fast, simple and absolutely free so please, join our community today!

If you have any problems with the registration process or your account login, please contact us.
Closed
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 07-30-2010, 08:56 PM   #1
Imagination...
Webkinz :)
 
Colliedog's Avatar
Colliedog is just really niceColliedog is just really nice

Default The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

~Prolouge~
The moon didn't shine.

It didn't even break through the thick black clouds that covered the sky.

All was dark and barely anything could be seen.

Three wolfs were hunched up around a small murky pond.

They were shivering in the cold wind as they sat there.

Finally, one spoke.

"Why are we here? Why can't we all just go back to our dens?" The dark brown one asked annoyingly.

"Because, Diablo said he has important things to tell us." Said the ghostly white wolf.

"And important they are Fantasma."

All the wolfs turned sharply to see a big muscular wolf step from the shadows.

"I'm surprised you came Barro. I thought you would want to stay in your nice warm den." Said Diablo sitting down.

The dark brown wolf shook his head roughly.

"Not at all!" Barro muttered lowering his head.

Diablo snorted, but said nothing more.

"Now, i have summoned you all for a good reason. The female wolf we didn't mange to conquer, has now had pups. And one, is special." Said Diablo.

He touched the tip of his tail to the murky pond water, and all three of the wolfs leaned forward.

A small, squirming pup appeared in the water.

It had very strange coloring and markings.

The one called Barro looked up at Diablo confusingly.

"Whats this pup have to do with anything?" He demanded.

Diablo stared right at Barro, his cold hard gaze made Barro crouch to the ground.

"This pup, is everything."


Tribe of Twilight
Alpha: Starlight--- black female wolf with one rose red paw, silver belly, ears, muzzle, and ears with misty eyes and gold star on tip of tail
Healer: Shimmer--- light grey female wolf

Males:
Spirit--- gold wolf with brown ears, belly, chest, and muzzle with dark green eyes
Fred--- light tan wolf with green eyes
George--- light tan wolf with light green eyes
Dragon--- dark red wolf with orange streaks
Forest--- dark grey wolf with brown ears and paws
Ray--- gold wolf with rose red paws and ears
Miguel--- black wolf with yellow eyes
Tulio--- black wolf with dark brown eyes

Females:
Dakota--- light grey wolf with white chest
Maple--- light brown wolf with white belly
Midnight--- pure black wolf with light green eyes
Mist--- silver wolf with on black paw and dark green eyes
Heaven--- black wolf with silver stripes on tail, brown paws, gold line down back to muzzle, and one rose red spot under one sky-blue eye with bits of green\

Queens:

Elders:
Autumn--- red, gold, orange, and yellow female wolf
Winter--- pure white female wolf
Spring--- lightish yellow female wolf with cream and white spots
Summer--- sand colored female wolf with yellow streaks

Pups:


Tribe of Suns Rays
Alpha: Sky--- white male wolf with black paws, ears, and mask over eyes
Healer: Ripple--- silver female wolf with white paws

Males:
Lake--- brown wolf with grey chest
Ghost--- white wolf with black circles around eyes
Boulder--- dark dark grey wolf with white ears
Grey--- dark grey wolf
Red--- red wolf with brown ears, tail tip, and belly
Russet--- russet red wolf with white paws

Females:
Tulip--- light tan wolf with white paws and belly
Cream--- cream wolf with grey paws, tail, and belly
Rain--- light silver wolf with white ears, belly, tail, and paws
Drizzle--- silver wolf with white ears and paws
Poppy--- cream wolf with small black spots

Queens:

Elders:
Sun--- gold male wolf with red and orange streaks

Pups:

Tribe of Ground Quakes
Alpha: Rock--- grey male wolf
Healer: Creek--- light blue female wolf

Males:
Earth--- dark brown wolf with grey paws
Stone--- grey wolf with yellow eyes
Rufus--- black dog with light grey ears and tail. Taken in when ran away from two-legs
Clay--- darkish cream wolf with brown ears and paws
Stark--- dark grey wolf
Hawk--- white wolf with black ears, tail, and paws

Females:
Pebble--- light grey slim female wolf with white muzzle
Eterna--- white female wolf with grey muzzle and ears
Lilac--- grey wolf with cream muzzle and circles around eyes
Lemon--- light cream wolf with white stripe down back
Rose--- light red wolf with dark red paws and tail

Queens:

Elders:
Rumble--- old ghostly white male with grey flecks on muzzle

Pups:

Tribe of Moons Rays
Alpha: Moon--- black female wolf
Healer: Splash--- grey female wolf with white paws

Males:
Glory--- white wolf with brown paws
Sand--- tan wolf
Raven--- young black wolf with white tail and ears
Cedar--- dark red wolf with dark grey paws and ears
Thunder--- dark grey wolf with green eyes
Lightning--- dark grey wolf with green eyes

Females:
Twilight--- grey wolf with black muzzle, paws, and ears
Pearl--- black dog with white belly, found as a puppy
Flora--- white wolf with red ears and circles around eyes
Robin--- brown wolf with white belly and ears
Cardinal--- red wolf with black ears, belly, paws, tail, and circles around eyes

Queens:

Elders:
Moonlight--- black female wolf

Pups:

Tribe of Blackness(Out-Siders)
Alpha: Diablo--- black muscular male wolf with dark red streaks and blood-red eyes

Fighters:
Flame
Barro
Fantasma
Shadow
Flare
Flower
Flake
Silver
Bumble
Viper
Fang
Snake
Arrow
Storm
Thunder
Wind
Tornado
Hurricane
River
Prince
Caspian
Bark

Last edited by Colliedog; 07-30-2010 at 10:19 PM..
Colliedog is offline Female
Sponsored Links
Old 07-30-2010, 09:47 PM   #2
Viva l'allegria!~
Webkinz :)
 
starrose33's Avatar
starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!

Default Re: The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

OMG YOU MADE ANOTHER STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
starrose33 is offline Female
Old 07-30-2010, 10:13 PM   #3
Imagination...
Webkinz :)
 
Colliedog's Avatar
Colliedog is just really niceColliedog is just really nice

Default Re: The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

View Post Originally Posted by starrose33
OMG YOU MADE ANOTHER STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yes, i did
STOP SPAZZING!!><
Colliedog is offline Female
Old 07-31-2010, 05:03 PM   #4
Viva l'allegria!~
Webkinz :)
 
starrose33's Avatar
starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!

Default Re: The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

Ok ok, i'll calm down *takes a deep breath* Now, I like the Alliances!
starrose33 is offline Female
Old 08-01-2010, 05:40 PM   #5
Imagination...
Webkinz :)
 
Colliedog's Avatar
Colliedog is just really niceColliedog is just really nice

Default Re: The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

View Post Originally Posted by starrose33
Ok ok, i'll calm down *takes a deep breath* Now, I like the Alliances!
thank you.
~Chapter1~
Heaven yawned and stretched the next morning and looked around.

Everything was peaceful, like usual.

She scowled at the thought and went over to the fresh kill pile.

She grabbed a thrush for herself and sat down to eat.

Sometimes I hate it when theres no action! Heaven thought angerly biting into her thrush annoyingly.

Her sister, Mist, came rushing into camp a moment later, Dragon, Tulio, and Maple behind her.

Mist skidded to a halt in front of Starlight, her mother, and Spirit, her father.

Starlight was the Alpha of the Tribe now.

Heaven smiled slightly at the thought of being daughter to the Alpha.

"Starlight! Tribe of Blackness is causing trouble again!" Mist reported panting.

"What did they do now?" Starlight asked.

"They, they have demanded to speak with you." Dragon said stepping forward.

Spirit and Starlight exchanged glances.

"Alright. Show me where they are." Starlight said standing.

Heaven watched Starlight, Mist, Dragon, and Maple pad away into the undergrowth.

"I wonder what they want."

Heaven jumped in surprise and turned her head sharply to see her other sister, Midnight.

Midnight smiled at her sisters surprise.

"Dont do that!" Heaven exclaimed sitting back down.

"Sorry." Midnight said quietly, her eyes back to the spot where the small patrol had vanished.

Heaven followed her gaze.

I wonder whats out there? Beyond the trees. Beyond the Tribes. Beyond everything. Heaven thought.

"Midnight! Heaven! I want you two to go hunting with Tulio and Miguel." Spirit said coming up to his daughters.

Heaven snapped back to reality and nodded along with Midnight.

Midnight rounded up the twins, and led the way through the trees.

Heaven brought up the rear, keeping her ears pricked for any signs of danger.

Though, as she stalked a rabbit, her thoughts kept creeping back to her previos thoughts.

What was beyond the Tribes?
Colliedog is offline Female
Old 08-01-2010, 06:04 PM   #6
Viva l'allegria!~
Webkinz :)
 
starrose33's Avatar
starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!

Default Re: The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

View Post Originally Posted by Colliedog
thank you.
~Chapter1~
Heaven yawned and stretched the next morning and looked around.

Everything was peaceful, like usual.

She scowled at the thought and went over to the fresh kill pile.

She grabbed a thrush for herself and sat down to eat.

Sometimes I hate it when theres no action! Heaven thought angerly biting into her thrush annoyingly.

Her sister, Mist, came rushing into camp a moment later, Dragon, Tulio, and Maple behind her.

Mist skidded to a halt in front of Starlight, her mother, and Spirit, her father.

Starlight was the Alpha of the Tribe now.

Heaven smiled slightly at the thought of being daughter to the Alpha.

"Starlight! Tribe of Blackness is causing trouble again!" Mist reported panting.

"What did they do now?" Starlight asked.

"They, they have demanded to speak with you." Dragon said stepping forward.

Spirit and Starlight exchanged glances.

"Alright. Show me where they are." Starlight said standing.

Heaven watched Starlight, Mist, Dragon, and Maple pad away into the undergrowth.

"I wonder what they want."

Heaven jumped in surprise and turned her head sharply to see her other sister, Midnight.

Midnight smiled at her sisters surprise.

"Dont do that!" Heaven exclaimed sitting back down.

"Sorry." Midnight said quietly, her eyes back to the spot where the small patrol had vanished.

Heaven followed her gaze.

I wonder whats out there? Beyond the trees. Beyond the Tribes. Beyond everything. Heaven thought.

"Midnight! Heaven! I want you two to go hunting with Tulio and Miguel." Spirit said coming up to his daughters.

Heaven snapped back to reality and nodded along with Midnight.

Midnight rounded up the twins, and led the way through the trees.

Heaven brought up the rear, keeping her ears pricked for any signs of danger.

Though, as she stalked a rabbit, her thoughts kept creeping back to her previos thoughts.

What was beyond the Tribes?
Curious little Heaven I love her curiousity, its just like mine!
starrose33 is offline Female
Old 08-01-2010, 06:19 PM   #7
ate Cloudtail's pie
Webkinz :)
 
mangocake101's Avatar
mangocake101 is a glorious beacon of lightmangocake101 is a glorious beacon of lightmangocake101 is a glorious beacon of light

Default Re: The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

Great story!
mangocake101 is offline Female
Old 08-01-2010, 09:43 PM   #8
Imagination...
Webkinz :)
 
Colliedog's Avatar
Colliedog is just really niceColliedog is just really nice

Default Re: The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

thanks you two!

~Chapter2~
Mist padded through the trees and stopped in front of two wolves.

Starlight stepped from behind her and glared at the bigger one of the two.

"What do you want Diablo?" Starlight snarled.

"Well, is that any way to treat guests?" He asked grinning, his sharp teeth glinting in the sun.

Starlight stood her ground, glaring at him.

Diablo looked very disgruntled now.

"Starlight, baby, let me get straight to the point." Diablo said stepping forward.

"My Tribe, needs room. And since your one of the closest Tribes to us-"

"Dont even ask! Your not getting any of our land! Not while i'm around!" Starlight growled, baring her teeth.

Diablo narrowed his eyes, and stepped back.

"Alright then. But you will regret it!" He said snarling.

Then, he and his partner, left.

Starlight stared at the bushes where they had vanished for a few moments, before flicking her tail and starting back to the grounds.

Mist tilted her head to one side in confusion, and caught up with her mother quickly.

"Mom, who IS Diablo anyways?" Mist asked quietly, so no one could over-hear.

Starlight glanced at Mist, worry and fear filling her eyes.

"Diablo's name fits him perfectly. Diablo means 'Devil' in Spanish. And he is one." Starlight muttered.

Mist stared at her mother in surprise.

"How?" Mist couldnt help herself from asking.

"He, hes the reason my father was attacked by hunters. And the reason my mother-" Starlight cut off and lowered her head, picking up the pace.

"He has inflicted a wound in every Tribe, but our Tribe is the deepest." Starlight murmured.

Mist stared at Starlight, her eyes round with surprise and worry.

"Come on, dont get left behind." Starlight said dashing forward.

Mist followed quickly.
~*~*~*~*~*~*
"And our Tribe has the deepest wound." Mist told her siblings that night.

Heaven was looking quite scared.

Midnight looked very interested and worried at the same time.

While Ray was looking confused and worried.

"What is it Ray?" Mist asked her brother.

"Well, i was just thinking, but why does our Tribe have the deepest wound?" Ray asked.

Midnight looked at Heaven.

Heaven looked at Ray.

Ray looked at Mist.

And Mist looked at Midnight.

Every single one of them were thinking the same thing.

Why did Diablo do this things anyways?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Mist dreamed of Diablo running through each Tribe, attacking random wolfs.

Mist woke up with a start, gasping for air, sweating heavily.

She padded out of her den and stretched in the damp dawn air.

Starlight, Spirit, Maple, and Dakota were all talking to eachother in front of Starlight's den.

Mist decided to listen in a bit.

So she sat down and pretended to start washing herself, but pricked her ears high, and listened.

"Diablo could do anything this time! He has a whole Tribe of wolfs!" Starlight growled.

"That doesnt mean he'll use any wolfs from his so called "Tribe!"" Dakota insisted.

"Yes, but hes probably hoping to catch us off-guard, and do something we DONT expect." Spirit suggested.

"Oh, and how do you know that!?" Maple demanded of Spirit.

"Its the way he works!" Spirit said.

"Oh, and i suppose you were there when he lured the hunters to Nico huh!?" Maple growled losing her temper by the second.

"Of course not!" Spirit howled with rage standing up.

"STOP IT! BOTH OF YOU!" Starlight suddenly howled so loud, her voice echoed.

Spirit and Maple glared at eachother, but sat back down.

Starlight was furios now.

"I do NOT need my Tribe-mates getting into pointless fights! We need to get-along, or else this Tribe will fall!" Starlight snarled.

Mist looked up over to the small group, her eyes wide with fear.

Our Tribe? Fall?

Last edited by Colliedog; 08-01-2010 at 09:43 PM..
Colliedog is offline Female
Old 08-01-2010, 09:46 PM   #9
Viva l'allegria!~
Webkinz :)
 
starrose33's Avatar
starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!starrose33 is not just visiting!

Default Re: The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

View Post Originally Posted by Colliedog
thanks you two!

~Chapter2~
Mist padded through the trees and stopped in front of two wolves.

Starlight stepped from behind her and glared at the bigger one of the two.

"What do you want Diablo?" Starlight snarled.

"Well, is that any way to treat guests?" He asked grinning, his sharp teeth glinting in the sun.

Starlight stood her ground, glaring at him.

Diablo looked very disgruntled now.

"Starlight, baby, let me get straight to the point." Diablo said stepping forward.

"My Tribe, needs room. And since your one of the closest Tribes to us-"

"Dont even ask! Your not getting any of our land! Not while i'm around!" Starlight growled, baring her teeth.

Diablo narrowed his eyes, and stepped back.

"Alright then. But you will regret it!" He said snarling.

Then, he and his partner, left.

Starlight stared at the bushes where they had vanished for a few moments, before flicking her tail and starting back to the grounds.

Mist tilted her head to one side in confusion, and caught up with her mother quickly.

"Mom, who IS Diablo anyways?" Mist asked quietly, so no one could over-hear.

Starlight glanced at Mist, worry and fear filling her eyes.

"Diablo's name fits him perfectly. Diablo means 'Devil' in Spanish. And he is one." Starlight muttered.

Mist stared at her mother in surprise.

"How?" Mist couldnt help herself from asking.

"He, hes the reason my father was attacked by hunters. And the reason my mother-" Starlight cut off and lowered her head, picking up the pace.

"He has inflicted a wound in every Tribe, but our Tribe is the deepest." Starlight murmured.

Mist stared at Starlight, her eyes round with surprise and worry.

"Come on, dont get left behind." Starlight said dashing forward.

Mist followed quickly.
~*~*~*~*~*~*
"And our Tribe has the deepest wound." Mist told her siblings that night.

Heaven was looking quite scared.

Midnight looked very interested and worried at the same time.

While Ray was looking confused and worried.

"What is it Ray?" Mist asked her brother.

"Well, i was just thinking, but why does our Tribe have the deepest wound?" Ray asked.

Midnight looked at Heaven.

Heaven looked at Ray.

Ray looked at Mist.

And Mist looked at Midnight.

Every single one of them were thinking the same thing.

Why did Diablo do this things anyways?
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Mist dreamed of Diablo running through each Tribe, attacking random wolfs.

Mist woke up with a start, gasping for air, sweating heavily.

She padded out of her den and stretched in the damp dawn air.

Starlight, Spirit, Maple, and Dakota were all talking to eachother in front of Starlight's den.

Mist decided to listen in a bit.

So she sat down and pretended to start washing herself, but pricked her ears high, and listened.

"Diablo could do anything this time! He has a whole Tribe of wolfs!" Starlight growled.

"That doesnt mean he'll use any wolfs from his so called "Tribe!"" Dakota insisted.

"Yes, but hes probably hoping to catch us off-guard, and do something we DONT expect." Spirit suggested.

"Oh, and how do you know that!?" Maple demanded of Spirit.

"Its the way he works!" Spirit said.

"Oh, and i suppose you were there when he lured the hunters to Nico huh!?" Maple growled losing her temper by the second.

"Of course not!" Spirit howled with rage standing up.

"STOP IT! BOTH OF YOU!" Starlight suddenly howled so loud, her voice echoed.

Spirit and Maple glared at eachother, but sat back down.

Starlight was furios now.

"I do NOT need my Tribe-mates getting into pointless fights! We need to get-along, or else this Tribe will fall!" Starlight snarled.

Mist looked up over to the small group, her eyes wide with fear.

Our Tribe? Fall?
*GASPETH IN CAPITAL LETTERS!!!!!!!*
starrose33 is offline Female
Old 08-01-2010, 09:58 PM   #10
Imagination...
Webkinz :)
 
Colliedog's Avatar
Colliedog is just really niceColliedog is just really nice

Default Re: The four. *The Continuation Of Starlight* (Approved)

View Post Originally Posted by starrose33
*GASPETH IN CAPITAL LETTERS!!!!!!!*
Colliedog is offline Female
Closed

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are On



All times are GMT -5. The time now is 11:48 AM.



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2018, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
SEO by vBSEO ©2011, Crawlability, Inc.
Copyright © 2007-2013 Kopi Enterprises, LLC
WebkinzInsider.Com is not an official site of, sponsored by, nor affiliated with Ganz, Inc, Webkinz, Lil'Kinz, or Kinzville Newz and all character names, logos, and images are trademarks owned by Ganz, Inc.
no new posts