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Old 08-14-2010, 09:02 AM   #1
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Default Short Story: The Two Rings

Here's a little short story I wrote called, The Two Rings:

Once there were two rings. A silver and gold. They both were beautifully crafted. They are both inside a little chest with a piece of paper. A man named King Zues was looking for it. He had been looking for years and years now. Finally one of his men found it. Bu he didn’t tell the king. He then sprinted off. The king saw him with the chest. He ordered all of his men to attack the man. They killed him and returned the box to the king. King Zues figured out that the box had a lock on it. So the king ordered his men to find the key. But the so told dead man snuck up to King Zues and shot him. The men then finally killed the man. Now the rings will never be revealed…

please comment and tell me how i did. thanks.
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