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Old 05-19-2008, 08:43 PM   #1

Default The Quest for Light in the Dark

My name is Anna. I live in the town of Westmark. It is small, in the country. My family lives in on our farm. Our neighboring town is Jenkins. If you visited both towns, you'd see a difference. At Westmark, you might be welcomed into a home and given dinner. At Jenkins, they'd mostly give you a slice of bread, then leave you to defend yourself. Everyone knew Westmark was the better town. We had a lot more money and weapons for survival. But at Jenkins, the residents waste themselves on whiskey, leaving nothing else, except a *****en mind. maybe that is why they came to our town. Maybe that is why the quarrel began.
My mother gave me money to go to the grocery store. She said clearly what to buy.
"One loaf of bread, some store sugar, soap, and that calico with the golden pattern, okay? Don't dawdle!"
While walking, I bumped into Miss Collette. No one knows her last name. So she's just Collette. "Pardon, Miss Collette!"
"Bonjour, ma cherie! I am taking a walk with ma chatte. Would you like to come?"
"No. I am getting groceries."
"Ah." Then she walked away. I heard a man call out to her.
"Madamoiselle Collette!"
"Pardon?" I heard her. She kept on walking. I continued my trip to the store. After I purchased everything, I passed a group of people with faces white as ghosts.
"Jenkins...yes, i heard....such savage people..."
"I heard the rumors....i didn't believe until I passed a mob..."
"i heard they're stealing cattle...goods.."
I shivered with fear. Cautiously, I checked to make sure no one savage person was behind me, then ran all the way home. What should I tell Mother?
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Old 05-19-2008, 08:48 PM   #2
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Old 05-20-2008, 09:32 PM   #3

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okay here is more...

I stayed at the front porch, walking around. I quickly noticed my arms felt heavy. I put the bag of groceries down and kept walking. The door opened.
"Sorry, Grandma! I didn't notice you there!"
"Oh, sure you didn't. Sure.."
I sighed. Grandma always had a temper. I think it's because Mother married the wrong man. I'll never know. I picked up the bag and walked in.
"Helen? Is that you? I didn't expect you to come so early..." Mother sounded nervous.
"It's me, Anna. I brought the groceries."
"Thank goodness. Let's see." She looked at the bag to see if I had everything. "You got everything all right."
"Mother, have you heard the rumors?"
"What rumors?"
"The ones about Jenkins coming over."I said it clearly.
Mother's face turned pale. "Well...Oh, why dawdle. The rumors have been around for a very long time. It seems now--now, it's--becoming--possible."
"Possible? We've been living with the fear Jenkins might attack?''
"Yes," Mother answered.
"Anna, I have some work you'll need to do." I heard my father's voice. But I heard a weird sound in it.
"Father, have you heard the rumors about Jenkins?"
Father looked dark. "Jenkins...Yes, they steal cattle..."
Mother looked nervous again. "Your father is emotional about this. Right, Henry?"
"Our lives will change once those bloody savages--"
"Henry! Not in front of Anna!"
"Anna needs the truth, Katherine. Remember my words, Anna."
Mother looked too upset. She took Father into their room. I stood there, in the kitchen, wondering. What did Father mean?
Old 05-23-2008, 06:58 AM   #4
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