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Old 01-26-2008, 10:23 AM   #1
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The Princess and Daisy

Chapter 1
Daisy took her packet of seeds and planted them in the ground.
The sun was beating across her straw-woven hat. Daisy lived on a farm. She loved the rolling green hills
and the big red barn. When Daisy grew up she wanted to live on the very same farm that she lived on when she was a child. Daisy was a cow. She loved to dig and plant and tend the crops.
Her parents were real proud of her. She had an incredible green thumb. There wasn't
anything in the world that she couldn't plant. All of a sudden she heard the hooves of horses pattering
down the dusty road.
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Old 01-26-2008, 01:34 PM   #2
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cool! i like your book! keep writting!
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Old 01-26-2008, 03:01 PM   #3
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ok i'll keep writing

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Daisy looked up. She saw a gleaming white carriage with gold wheels and a gold rimmed door. The carriage stopped right in front of Daisy. A white bunny dressed in a black suit hopped over to the door and opened it. "Her royal heighness may come out." he anounced. Daisy stared, breathless. Out stepped a persian cat shoving the bunny out of the way without saying thank you.
She was dressed in a gold dress with a white silk sash and slippers. Her silver tiara had a diamond in the center. "What are you staring at it isn't polite
you know." the persian cat scolded.

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Old 01-26-2008, 04:37 PM   #4
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Old 01-27-2008, 03:14 PM   #5
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That last piece of writing was Chapter 2.
Sorry I forgot to label it.

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"I..I..I'm sorry p..p..princess m..m..madam." Daisy stuttered. "Address me as Princess Camille the last of the royal webkinz persian cats. I come from the royal square in Kinzville. I live in the W castle." "O..O..Okay." Daisy said again. "Oh Daisy get a grip on yourself!" she muttered. "Excuse me?" Princess Camille said.
"Oh uh.. nothing." Daisy said. "Say would you like to come over for dinner tonight?" Princess Camille asked. "Sure! Daisy said excitedly, "Just let me ask my parents."

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Chapter 3
Daisy hurried inside and asked her parents. They said it was fine. Daisy hurried outside again and said,"My parents said yes." "Good, good,"said Princess Camille,"Just hop into the carriage." Daisy went in. The inside of it was as beautiful as the outside. It was a creamy yellow color on the inside. The cushions were real red velvet. There were swirly blue designs at the top and pink and white satin wallpaper on the sides of the doors. "My daddy got me my own private carriage so I could go anywhere. He got the finest artists and carriage makers in the land to make this carriage. It was quite a challenge for them." Princess Camille bragged. Then the carriage stopped.
"We're here!" the coachman said. Daisy looked out the window and gasped...

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Sorry again. That last piece of writing was Chapter 4. I accidently labeled it Chapter 3.

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Old 01-27-2008, 03:18 PM   #6
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WOW!!! I AM TELLING MY FRIEND LUCKYDUCK44 ABOUT THIS! I LOVE it! please keep going!
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Old 01-29-2008, 06:00 PM   #7
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Chapter 5
Outside of her window Daisy saw the most amazing castle. It glinted silver in the sun and the tops of the castle were painted with colorful flower designs.
Daisy got out of the carriage and followed Princess Camille down the red carpet inside. "My daddy has lot's of huge parties with lots of celeberties. I get to meet them and be in famous magazines so your pretty lucky to be hanging with me." Princess Camille said in a snobbish tone. Daisy went inside. There was a silk handmade rug on the floor and a huge crystal chandelier on the ceiling glittering from the sunlight coming from the french style windows. "Let me go change into my play clothes!" Princess Camille said again. Daisy sat down in a green-cushioned chair next to the door. 5 minutes later Princess Camille came down. She had a white and denim sailor's outfit with matching denim Mary Jane's shoes. "All my clothes are made by only the best designers. "she said twirling around. "I have to make my clothes. I can't afford designer clothes." Daisy said weakly. Princess Camille glanced at Daisy's blue jean overalls and her muddy boots and hat. "Oh." she said carelessly.

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Chapter 6
Daisy and Princess Camille went outside to the garden. It was gorgeous.
There was a giant water fountain in the middle with roses and tulips and other flowers and bushes around it. There was a giant green tree with a wood swing and a gold sundial in the by the middle. Marble benches surounded the fountain in an octogon. Daisy said,"Whoa....." "This is my daddy's favorite garden, her calls it the rose square but he likes the other gardens too." Princess Camille bragged again. "You mean you have
more???!!!!" Daisy questioned. "Of course I do. My daddy's gardens won 1st lace in the world garden competition. The judges were so amazed that they gave us another private jet and a very rare rose!!" Princess Camille said. Then she gave Daisy a penny. "Here make a wish in the fountain!" she said excitedly. Daisy tossed her coin in first. While tossing her penny she thought,"I wish I was Princess Camille she is so lucky!" Princess Camille tossed her penny in second,"I wish I was normal like Daisy!" she thought.
All of a sudden it started to rain......

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Old 02-01-2008, 06:01 PM   #8
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Chapter 7
That night it rained 30 inches. Daisy couldn't go home because the roads were flooded. She called her parents and told them she couldn't make it home. Then after Daisy's phone call Daisy and Princess Camille had dinner in the banquet hall. The roaring fire cracked and crisped. Maids and Butlers came in and out serving the chef's delicious gourmet food. After dinner Daisy and Princess Camille went to bed. Princess Camille's room was a beautiful pink with a butterfly muiral on the ceiling. She had a huge walk in closet and a window seat with silk cushions. The beads on the red lamps dangled. Princess Camille's bed was in a heart shape and it was red. Both of the girls changed into their pajamas. "Good night Princess Camille." said Daisy. "Good night Daisy," said Princess Camille, "Oh and Daisy now that were are friends call me Camille." "OK! GOOD NIGHT CAMILLE!" Daisy hollered.
They both giggled. The next morning something strange happened. . . . .

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love ur stories please make more
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I love your story! Write more when you get the chance!
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