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Old 11-02-2009, 07:27 PM   #1
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Lightbulb Poem I wrote.

I wrote this poem for school today. I wanted to share it because I've written poems before, and they weren't very good. I particularly like this one.
Let me know what you think.


What is the definition of 'blue'?
A brave sailor in navy uniform battling the angry sea
A vast blue sky that never ends
A blue tear that trickles down
Blue from the beginning, blue to the end

Blue is a wonder
Planets tinted and painted blue.
Cheese that turns blue
Blue birds, blue fish
And even beautiful blue eyes

Blue is a feeling
Depression, sadness; both classified as 'blue'
Misery, loss and hopelessness; definitions of 'blue'
Blue: Not just a shade on the color wheel
But a feeling and true wonder.
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Old 11-02-2009, 07:28 PM   #2
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WOW! That's a really good poem!!!


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Old 11-02-2009, 07:46 PM   #3
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WOW! That's a really good poem!!!


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Thank you
I changed a few things before I decided to post it. Some stanza weren't making sense, but I fixed them up a little.
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Old 11-02-2009, 07:50 PM   #4
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Love the poem!
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Old 11-02-2009, 08:05 PM   #5
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Love the poem!
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Old 11-02-2009, 08:17 PM   #6
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Delicious. (:
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Old 11-03-2009, 05:47 PM   #7
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Delicious. (:
Haha thanks!
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Old 11-03-2009, 06:07 PM   #8
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Great poem. I love the color blue. I just clicked the link on your signature and listened to Regina Specktor. She is pretty and sounds really good, but her video is kinda hard to watch.
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Old 11-04-2009, 01:35 PM   #9
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View Post Originally Posted by wontonweekly
Great poem. I love the color blue. I just clicked the link on your signature and listened to Regina Specktor. She is pretty and sounds really good, but her video is kinda hard to watch.
Thanks
I love the song Eet, but I don't really like the music video. My favorite music video from her is Fidelity.
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Old 11-06-2009, 09:50 PM   #10
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Cool! I like it! Like my color poem?

I always dreamed
Of a sliver of silver
With a slice of pretty blue
Shining in the golden sun
Glittering in the sea
Colors make things beautiful
Colors make thing nice
A peice of greenish ice so cold
But blue's the best, of blue behold
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