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cookie_monster211-02-2009 07:27 PM

Poem I wrote.
 
I wrote this poem for school today. I wanted to share it because I've written poems before, and they weren't very good. I particularly like this one. :)
Let me know what you think.


What is the definition of 'blue'?
A brave sailor in navy uniform battling the angry sea
A vast blue sky that never ends
A blue tear that trickles down
Blue from the beginning, blue to the end

Blue is a wonder
Planets tinted and painted blue.
Cheese that turns blue
Blue birds, blue fish
And even beautiful blue eyes

Blue is a feeling
Depression, sadness; both classified as 'blue'
Misery, loss and hopelessness; definitions of 'blue'
Blue: Not just a shade on the color wheel
But a feeling and true wonder.

fruit2o11-02-2009 07:28 PM

Re: Poem I wrote.
 
WOW! That's a really good poem!!!


Rep 4 you!

cookie_monster211-02-2009 07:46 PM

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Originally Posted by fruit2o (Post 17021614)
WOW! That's a really good poem!!!


Rep 4 you!

Thank you :)
I changed a few things before I decided to post it. Some stanza weren't making sense, but I fixed them up a little.

summerlover♥11-02-2009 07:50 PM

Re: Poem I wrote.
 
Love the poem!

cookie_monster211-02-2009 08:05 PM

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Originally Posted by summerlover♥ (Post 17022067)
Love the poem!

Thanks :D

Bowwow47811-02-2009 08:17 PM

Re: Poem I wrote.
 
Delicious. (:

cookie_monster211-03-2009 05:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Bowwow478 (Post 17022665)
Delicious. (:

Haha thanks!

wontonweekly11-03-2009 06:07 PM

Re: Poem I wrote.
 
Great poem. I love the color blue. I just clicked the link on your signature and listened to Regina Specktor. She is pretty and sounds really good, but her video is kinda hard to watch.

cookie_monster211-04-2009 01:35 PM

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Originally Posted by wontonweekly (Post 17030616)
Great poem. I love the color blue. I just clicked the link on your signature and listened to Regina Specktor. She is pretty and sounds really good, but her video is kinda hard to watch.

Thanks :)
I love the song Eet, but I don't really like the music video. My favorite music video from her is Fidelity.

RainbowSmiley11-06-2009 09:50 PM

Re: Poem I wrote.
 
Cool! I like it! Like my color poem?

I always dreamed
Of a sliver of silver
With a slice of pretty blue
Shining in the golden sun
Glittering in the sea
Colors make things beautiful
Colors make thing nice
A peice of greenish ice so cold
But blue's the best, of blue behold


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