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Old 06-28-2009, 09:09 PM   #1
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Welcome to an all new story by me, Peanut97!


Meet the Characters:
Melanie: Nickname is Mel. She has brown hair and a dimple on her left side. Loves Fashion and the Jonas Brothers. Her Best friend is Lizzy

Lizzy: Nickname is Liz. She has blonde Hair and freckles. She loves nature and Joe Jonas! Her best friend is Melanie

Stacey: She has blonde hair like the Jonas Brothers, and soccer. (doesn't come up much in the story)

Chapter One: The Crocodile Tears

Melanie: Mom can I go to the Jonas Brothers concert?
Mom: No Mel we cannot afford that right now.
Melanie: But.....
Mom: No
Lizzy: Mel get in here quick!
Melanie: What?!?!
Lizzy: I want Pancakes.
Melanie: I'll get on it.
Lizzy: Get it here now!!
Melanie: What is it Liz?
Lizzy: Radio 2.0 is giving away backstage passes and front row tickets to the Jonas Tour!
Melanie: AH!!!!!
Lizzy: Get the phone!
Melanie: Where is it?
Lizzy: Ahh, over there!
Melanie: Call Call Call!
Lizzy: Okay Okay!
Radio 2.0: You are caller number 20! Answer this question and you will win: What is Joe Jonas' middle name?

Will Lizzy and Melanie answer correctly? Find out in Chapter 2!

Chapter 2: Did I get it?
Melanie: Give me the phone I know this one
Lizzy: Are you sure?
Melanie: Yes, Jerry
Radio 2.0: No, so close.
*Hangs Up Phone*
Lizzy: What? I thought you said you got this!?!
Melanie: I thouhgt I did I read it in a Tiger Beat!
Lizzy: Thats Nicks middle name!
Mom: Lizzy you should get going now.
Lizzy: Okay thanks for having me!

Later that night Melanie was texting with this mystery guy.
mel44: hey
nj4p: hi
mel44: what are you doing
nj4p: I am on the road
mel44: cool I am so mad at myself
nj4p: why?
mel44: I just had a chance of a lifetime and I blew it.
nj4p: can I do anything?
mel44: unless you know the Jonas Brothers, no.
nj4p: well....
mel44: ?!?!
nj4p: never mind I got to go.
me44: ttyl
nj4p: bye

On the bus....

Joe: Why didn't you say you were Nick Jonas?
Nick: I am not going to give my identity to a random girl Joe.
Joe: ?!?!
Nick: Joe.
Joe: Fine
Kevin: How long have you been talking to that girl?
Nick: 3 weeks?
Kevin: Do you know where she lives?
Nick: Yeah, Wisconsin why?
Kevin we are touring there in 2 weeks dude!
Nick: So?
Kevin: you can finally tell her that you are you!
Nick: I, I, I don't know

What will Nick do? Find out in Chapter 3!

Chapter 3- Down in the Dumps

Melanie: Lizzy I am so sorry that I messed this up for us.
Lizzy: That's okay, maybe we can find tickets on ebay or something?
Melanie: Those are too much money Liz
Lizzy: You are right....I guess
Melanie: The Jonas Brothers aren't THAT great
Lizzy: Mel, listen to yourself.
Melanie: I know I know I just want to kick myself
Mom: Girls it's time for school!
Mel & Liz: Okay coming

*At School*

Stacey: You what?!?
Melanie: I already told you, Radio 2.0 was giving out tickets to the Jonas Brothers concert and I had to answer what is Joe's middle name
Stacey: Adam!
Lizzy: Yup
Stacey: so what did you say?
Melanie: Jerry.
Stacey: Isn't that....
Melanie: Nick's middle name
Stacey: Ohh well

*At Lunch*
Stacey: So hows it going with that guy?
Melanie: We just talk every night, nothing big.
Lizzy: Yeah, but whenever she talks to him she kicks me out of the room!!
Melanie: Privacy! Hello!
Stacey: Do you know his name?
Melanie: No...
Stacey: Does he know your name?
Melanie: Nope.
Stacey: You should tell him.
Melanie: Well I guess...maybe

*On Stage Practicing*

Joe: So have you decided anything about that girl?
Nick: No, I don't think I am going to tell her anything
Kevin: You need to dude!
Nick: Okay guys take it from the top of Burning Up
".....I'm hot your cold....."

Will Nick keep his word on not telling her anything? FIn out in Chapter 4!

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Old 06-28-2009, 09:17 PM   #2
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That's pretty good so far! If you see any of my stories [Right now- How to do an Interview/ The converse club] PLEASE check them out! Thanks!
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Old 06-28-2009, 09:20 PM   #3
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Old 06-29-2009, 10:58 AM   #4
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I wil make chapter 2 soon!

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Old 06-30-2009, 10:47 AM   #5
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i just made chp. 2 soon will b chp. 3 stay tuned!!!!!!
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Old 06-30-2009, 04:19 PM   #6
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I want chappie 3!
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Old 06-30-2009, 04:20 PM   #7
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Great story!
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Old 06-30-2009, 04:41 PM   #8
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Thank you all so much I didn't think that i would get anybody!
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Old 07-02-2009, 11:30 PM   #9
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Old 07-03-2009, 02:46 PM   #10
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