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Old 02-17-2011, 09:34 PM   #1
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Never ends
A summer breeze,
Making you kneel,
Upon your knees,
Feeling the cool grass on your skin,
Feel the way it is so soft and thin,
That breeze will never end.
A moonlight night,
Where only one thing,
Is your main sight,
Stars twinkling above,
Hearing a soft cooing,
Like a dove,
That night will ever end.
A forest,
With a small hedgehog,
Smiling to you,
Through a thin fog,
Then following you,
Like a tiny puppy dog,
That forest will never end.
A clear sky,
See how the puffy clouds go by,
You stand there wishing,
Wishing you can fly,
Looking up high,
As far as your neck will go,
That sky will never end.
A desert,
Sand whips by,
Some right in your eye,
Closing them tightly,
Then blinking furiously,
The sand stays,
And so does the pain,
That desert will never end.
How far along will they go,
It all depends,
How far do you want it to go?
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Old 02-17-2011, 09:41 PM   #2
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I love this poem. Your a great writer I hope to see more poems from you!
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Old 02-17-2011, 09:44 PM   #3
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thanks! more will be posted sooner or later!
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Old 02-17-2011, 09:57 PM   #4
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Really great job Keep writing, I'll be checking back. 5 stars and a rep!
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Old 02-17-2011, 10:01 PM   #5
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WoW! You've got a poet in you!
I ♥ the similes and description!
5 stars!
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Old 02-18-2011, 12:50 AM   #6
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You can tell it's a great poem when you can totally imagine and even feel those vivid descriptions and details. Awesome job! :]
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Old 02-18-2011, 07:29 AM   #7
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thanks! it means alot!
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