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Old 12-04-2007, 01:39 PM   #1
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CHAPTER ONE


It was a couple of weeks before Christmas. 12-year-old Danielle Laverne was so excited! She just loved Christmas: The singing Christmas Carols, making Christmas Cookies, decorating the house, finding just the perfect Christmas Tree and decorating it, and all the snow and snowball fights with her 6 other siblings, Gertrude, age 8, Timothy, age 4, Isabelle, age 14, Paul, age 10, Veronica, age 4 (she was Timothy's twin) and Yvette, Danielle's best friend and identical twin sister. But what Danielle loved most of all was staying up late, giggling and sharing secrets with Yvette, then going to sleep and being the first one to wake up. Danielle just loved to get her bathrobe and slippers on, sneak out of bed and be the first one to see all the presents under the tree. She had to wait until EVERYONE was awake before she could open her presents, so she always looked inside her stocking and snuck a piece or two of her candy, and played with the things in her stocking until everyone was awake. When she'd get bored, she remembered, she'd go to the Christmas Tree and look for all the presents with her name on them, and try to guess what they were.

Danielle was awoken from her thoughts by an excited shout. "IT'S RAINING SUGAR FROM THE SKY, MOMMY! IT'S RAINING SUGAR FROM THE SKY! WET'S GET A BUCKET AN' A SOVEL AN' WE'LL HAVE WOT'S O' SUGAR!"

Danielle laughed, and explained to Timothy who was too little to remember last winter, "It's not sugar, Timmy, it's snow." But her explanations were unheard to his little ears, and he ran outside. He stuck out his tounge, and made a sad face.

"It doesn't TASTE wike sugar, it tastes wike nuffing."

Danielle laughed again. "It's not sugar, Timmy, Honey." But although he said it didn't taste like sugar, he refused to believe it wasn't. But he did run into the house, saying, "The sugar's cold, Mommy, not like reg'lar. Sumfing's wong with it, too, it's not sweet." And mother explained to him what it was. He actually listened to her, and said, "Okay, Mommy, it's not sugar if YOU say it isn't. But what is snow?"

"Snow is frozen rain falling from the sky." said Isabelle, always looking for a chance to show off her knowledge. "Sometimes it sticks to the ground, and sometimes it just melts right away. Every snowflake is different. None of them are the exact same shape, and they're all so small that unless you look at them very very closely, they just look like little dots."

But Timmy had gotten over his excitement and was happily playing with his choo-choo trains. Danielle once again fell into daydreaming. Last Christmas, everyone had made fun of her for believing in Santa. Well, she couldn't help it! Even her best friend had mocked her. Danielle sighed. Why did Hayden have to be so nice to the populars? If she hadn't picked up Taylor, the most popular girl in school's books, Taylor never would never have invited Hayden into the popular group. Hayden had, at first, tried to get Danielle in, but the populars wouldn't let her in. Finally Hayden stopped trying, but would sneak away from the popular group every once in a while to spend time with Danielle. Danielle hadn't minded all of this, at first, because she knew that Hayden would, eventually, stay away from the popular crowd for good. But Hayden hadn't. In fact, Hayden had undergone a major transformation, and started making fun of Danielle instead of being her friend. Now Hayden hated Danielle. This broke Danielle's heart, because no one would be her friend. Everyone thought she was too geeky. Well, she was just as good as the populars, or better! And prettier, too. All the popular girls wore make-up to keep glamorous, but Danielle didn't need make up. And the boys were just as bad. But anyways, Danielle was getting off subject: Christmas! She remembered Christmas two years ago, when Hayden was the new girl at school and Danielle helped her fit in. That far away Christmas, Danielle had gotten a bead set, and they had made friendship bracelets. Danielle remembered last Winter, when Hayden had broken her friendship bracelet RIGHT IN FRONT OF DANIELLE, to mock the friendship they used to have. Danielle sighed. No matter how she tried now, she couldn't stop brooding about her used-to-be friendship. What had happened? What had changed? A tear spilled from her eye. And another. And another. Danielle quickly ran to her room and stuffed her face into her pillow, so no one could hear her heart-broken sobs.
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Old 12-04-2007, 04:34 PM   #2
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very good! Is there more?
Old 12-04-2007, 04:37 PM   #3
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Good! That's me, except I have friends!
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Old 12-13-2007, 09:55 AM   #4
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Chapter Two:

Just then the phone rang beside Danielle's bed. Danielle quickly wiped her tears away, cleared her voice, and answered it.

"Hello?" said a very familiar voice.

"Hayden?" asked Danielle, not believing what she was hearing.

"Yeah, it's me." answered Hayden. "Look, I'm sorry about how I treated you before. I always told myself that if I ever became popular I wouldn't let it get to my head. I broke my promise to myself, and that broke our friendship." She hesitated.

"Go on." said Danielle.

"The popoular kids kicked me out of their group."

"Why?" asked Danielle, surprised.

"Because...because they were smoking, and wanted me to do it too. I have always been taught never to smoke or drink drugs, and I had backed away. They said it was cool to smoke and that it would up my popularity, but I refused. Then they said if I wouldn't smoke I would be banned from the populars. I just walked away. So," she said with a small laugh, "I guess they didn't really kick me out; I just quit."

Danielle smiled. "So our friendship's back on?"

Hayden smiled on the other side of the line. "Yeah, our friendship's back on."

"So...do you want to come over to my house today and make new friendship bracelets?"

"I'd like that. I'll be right over." For Hayden lived only a couple of blocks away, and often walked to Danielle's house, or at least when they were friends before she became popular. Now she'd be coming over! Danielle was glad that their friendship was fixed.

15 minutes later, there was a knock on the door.

"That's Hayden!" Danielle cried. She ran to the door, and greeted her friend. Hayden looked tired, and her face was red. Her face never got red and she never got tired when she walked over to Danielle's house, so Danielle figured she had been crying. Danielle didn't let on that she knew, but Hayden guessed that she knew, and burst into fresh tears.

"I h-had r-ruined our f-fr-friendship," she sobbed, "The friendship that w-was supposed to be n-n-never-ending, the f-friendship that was su-su-supposed to be fl-flawless. And we'll n-n-never make up for the whole y-year we've been separated, unless I sleepover for a y-year, which I know will n-n-never h-h-happen!"

And she cried and cried and cried inconsolably. This made Danielle cry too, and they both bugged eachother. When they finally stoppedd crying, with only an occasional hiccup here and there, Danielle said,

"Let's make those bracelets now." and smiled through her tears.

Hayden also smiled. "All right." So they went upstairs and made bracelets like old times.

Yes, Danielle thought, we're finally friends again. Friends in time for Christmas, too. The time of friendship. She looked at Hayden and smiled. Hayden smiled back.
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Old 12-13-2007, 10:32 AM   #5
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WOW! It is a long story.

BUT VERY GOOOOOOOOOD
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Old 12-13-2007, 12:19 PM   #6
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Thank you! I'll make another chapter as soon as I'm ready!
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Old 12-15-2007, 09:43 AM   #7
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CHAPTER 3

The next day at school Taylor walked up to Hayden. She was holding a cigarette in her hands and when she was right next to Hayden, blew a big puff of smoke at her.
"You still have a chance, Hayden." said Taylor. "I have a pack of ********** in my pocket, and I'll give you a cigarette. You'll be cool, and I'll tell everyone to forget about your refusal before. You won't have to hang with the dweebs anymore." As Taylor said this, she looked at Danielle. "Especially Danielle."

"Look, Taylor." said Hayden, "Why do you think Danielle is such a dweeb, just because she doesn't smoke and she doesn't wear make-up and doesn't talk about boys and clothes all the time?"

"Because, doing all that stuff is cool." Replied Taylor.

"Well, you're ugly." said Hayden. Taylor gasped.

"It's true!" Hayden went on. "Or else you wouldn't wear make-up all the time! You'd be bragging to everyone about your natural beauty! Now Danielle doesn't wear make-up, she doesn't have zits or anything! I bet you're covering up your millions of zits right now!" Taylor gasped again, but had nothing to say. She walked away in a huff. Everyone who had seen this arguement suddenly thought less of Taylor. Even the other populars thought less of her. She was all alone at the popular table at lunch that day, and everywhere shes looked she saw the other populars sitting with their old friends, having a good time. Without her. She saw Hayden and Danielle, sitting right next to each other, talking and laughing at a joke Hayden had told. Taylor sighed. Maybe being popular wasn't as cool as she thought it was. She often had fights and arguements with the other populars, while Hayden and Danielle had a flawless friendship. Taylr sighed again, and slowly got up. She slowly walked over to the table where Danielle and Hayden were.

"May I please sit with you?" she asked. They just stared at her. Then they looked at each other, and smiled.

"Sure." said Danielle, and moved over so that Taylor could sit. All was silent for a few moments. Then Danielle laughed, and Hayden laughed, and after a few more moments, Taylor laughed as well! They all understood what Taylor had gone through at the used-to-be popular table, and they all understood how she felt. They all became friends that moment.

"Want to come over to my house after school, Hayden?" asked Danielle.

"Sure! And Taylor, do you want to come?"

Taylor was speechless. Then she smiled. "Sure. I've just got to call my mom and tell her I'll be later than usual. I'll tell her where I am and write down the address. She's got a GPS in her car, so she'll find the directions on her own."

And the rest of the school day went on smoothly. It was also the LAST day of school for the holidays! Everyone cheered as the raced out the door to the bus. Taylor usually walked primly to the bus no matter what day, but now she raced with the others, screaming and laughing. This was the most fun she'd had in a long time! She ran onto the bus and sat with Hayden and Danielle. She couldn't wait to see Danielle's house; she had always wondered how "geeky" people lived, but had been too used to being popular and knowing "everything" to admit it. Now she'd see for herself, as a friend!
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Old 12-16-2007, 10:19 PM   #9
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Thank you! I'll make more as soon as I come up with ideas!
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