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Old 05-31-2012, 05:02 PM   #1
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Default I miss summer

I wrote a poem last year about summer...

@font-face { font-family: "Cambria"; }p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal { margin: 0in 0in 10pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; }div.Section1 { page: Section1; } I do miss the summer time…
It’s gentle breezes softly floating through the sky
The green grass
The lovely leaves
And the sunlight,
I miss that the most
The way it’s creamy, yellow rays sparkled on the copper trees
It would make them shine like the sun above and glitter like the stars
The way it smiled on the pools of water, transforming them to diamonds calling out to you to join them in their refreshingly cool paradise
Summer days were hot but the evenings were cool
On the air you could smell the delectable aroma of fires, and hickory
The fire cackled and cracked
Warming you in its gentle glow
And in the deep navy blue sky you could hear the enormous thunder and explosion of fireworks
Exploding into a array of colors
Then like mere dust fading into the blackness of the sky

This is the third time!!!!!!! UGH!!!!!! the first few lines ARE NOT A PART OF THE POEM!!!!! THEY R A GLITCH!!!!!!!
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Old 06-03-2012, 09:43 PM   #2
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Wonderful use of description here, I urge you to continue writing poetry! However, do you think you could post your poems on one thread? If you don't know how, VM me with any questions or check out my poetry thread (the link is in my siggy). By the way, welcome to WI, I hope you have a wonderful time here!
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Old 06-03-2012, 10:52 PM   #3
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Great use of imagery. :}
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